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Newspaper Wars by Annichka101 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Bella returns to Washington after Renee's death and finds herself an unwitting pawn in a newspaper war. Will her ethics survive an a-moral boss? Can she resist competing fishwrap publisher Carlisle's advances? Can she resist his son's? AH/OOC M for Lemons


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 24017
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2009 Updated: April 09, 2010


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Cat and Mouse

I think that this is going to be a hell of a story with two Cullens attracted to Bella!  What to do, what to do?  And Emmett as a possible side dish too?  And what about Aro-is he going to make a move too?  Eww.  Maybe Bella could switch her column to the lifestyle section?!!  Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!  I wanted to tell you that I have the next several chapters posted on FanFiction, in case you want to get your NW fix now. My plan is to post once a week on Twilighted, but it will likely be longer between chapters on FF. Anyhow, I really appreciate your support for this story. Being a new author is tough when you don't get much feedback, so kudos to you. Small quantities of reviewers are the types that keep us motivated to keep plugging away.

Yours,

Annichka

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Revelations and Risky Business

Sooo, Bella has a son!  By Newton!  I imagine that things will be more complicated for her in the Romance and work departments.  Hmm, Emmett and Bella-a oneshot!  I can see that, I'm sure that they will remain great friends.  Sometimes you just have to see what all the fuss is about!  Can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-Zephyr

Lovely chapter and I'm glad to get the backstory on the unimpressive Mike!  But what really resonates with me, damn it, was the loss of the great dream due to the cereal emergency by her son.  Yeah, that really does suck!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Bella had the balls to walk into Edward's office and demand an interview, but she's too "chicken" to call him and see what he thinks of the article?  Well, it seems that she portrayed him in a positve light.  The fact that the article was in her paper was embarrassing to Carlisle, but not to Edward.  I think she should call him.  Soon.  Maybe ask for a bike tour?



Author's Response:

Bahaha, I love your reviews. Thank you for continuing to read my story, I love that. Had to laugh at your "chicken" comment.  Not because it isn't accurate, because it is so close to home it's painful! So. As a reporter (and this refers to most reporters I've known as well) you kind of develop a certain arrogance, particularly in business coverage.  You know that what you write can help and even cause great harm "cover" them. It sometimes goes to your head because you have sooo many special interests beating down your door--everybody wants a piece of you. BUT.  Once that story goes to print, particularly one you have an emotional attachment to, it's very scary. You never know if an editor screwed it up, whether or not you accidently misquoted them--even recording people, you'd be surprised because sometimes they forget what they say and think you misquoted them because what they said wasn't what they "meant. Add in there nerves about Carlisle, and the uncertain financial reception of the public launch... Anyway, hope this helps in understanding Bella's *cough* psyche.  And ummm, I don't think Bella will have to call. Just sayin' ;)

xoxoxo Ann

 
Stranded by Beth818 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1229]
Summary:

Edward and Bella get on the same plane, but it crashes in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean. Bella and Edward are the only survivors, and they luckily find a deserted island to stay on until someone finds them. But can they survive each other? All characters are human and OOC.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 95080
[Report This] Published: December 31, 2009 Updated: January 10, 2012


Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Poor Bella.  She may be trying to avoid feelings of attraction for Edward, but she's not going to last long!  Not with Dr. Cullen taking care of ALL her needs!



Author's Response:

Oh yeah, she ain't gonna last long! I know if I were her, I would be pouncing on him like flies on roadkill...eww, lol

I wish I had an Edward Cullen all to myself to take care of my needs ;)

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I don't know what was worse, being interrupted or the plane moving on with no indication that it saw them.  Maybe Bella should have remained topless!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ah, you youth of today!  You never take vodka with bladder infection meds.  You should always take tequila!  So, the damn grotto again.  Calling them like a siren to stave off the storm.  It's all fun and games until somebody gets sucked out to sea.  Who the hell is going to save her now?  Neptune?



Author's Response:

haha I've never had tequila in all my two years of drinking, lol.

and I won't kill Bella, I promise. Superward can do just about anything!

 

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: October 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'm so happy that they're both thrilled about the baby! Though poor Bella has to try and temper her emotions with those hormones! Itought to be a fun few months! Can't believe it's been a year-that's awesome!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Thank you for putting a bow on this!  Nice job!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yeah, being the only two survivors can bring a lot of unwanted baggage with it! Not everyone is happy that they made it! Can't wait for another chapter!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well, that could have been alot worse, and at least they have each other! 



Author's Response:

Yeah, all they have is each other...I wish I was stuck with Edward on an island!

Thank you for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, at least they got to meet before they went down!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It looks like Bella owes Edward her life!  Now how are they going to survive the ocean?

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well, that could have been alot worse, and at least they have each other! 

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So, why is Edward sorry?  Why did he pull away?  When are they going to kiss?



Author's Response:

Edward is sorry for hurting her feelings, of course! :D You'll find out next chapter why he pulled away...

They kiss mext chapter...oh, I just spoiled it...oh well :D

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Who knew you could have a romantic date on an uninhabited island?  Edward did!  That was lovely-and they finally kissed!  Does he know that she's never been with anyone?  It is a good way to generate body heat!



Author's Response:

He's doing the best with what he can :D and I would love for a man to do that for me--go out of his way like that...

as for her being a virgin and him finding out, you'll just have to wait and see :D

haha generate body heat, funny, but true!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That is sad!  Everyone's life is affected and things are going to be hard for a long time.  It's one thing to be family and almost forced to deal with things, but Jasper is going to have an especially difficult task as the Alice he knew is going to be going through some changes.  My brother survived 9/11, when all his crew perished.  It's a long road.



Author's Response:

Oh, wow! That's...incredible...and hard, I bet. And yeah, Jasper is just going to have to help her get through it as best she can...especially since she isn't really the mopey type at all...

Thank you for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yeah, I can see that happening.  They are in a little bubble and they were through a traumatic incident together as well.  No one else is ever going to be able to relate to what they were through.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ah, the cat's out of the bag now!  He heard it in her sleep-bring on the citrus!  I love that he was so tender to her after she drank too much and how he cared for her in the morning.  And I loved the playfulness about his scruff-though I imagine she's probably a bit scruffy too!



Author's Response:

Ew! Yes! Imagine the hairy legs and pits!

On second thought, I don't think I'd want to be stuck on an island with Edward after all, not without toothpaste and deoderant, etc.

I'm glad you like my story! :D

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Woohoo!  I'm glad the opted for the water-sand in those places can be a friction of the not so good kind! 

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oy!  The grotto is like the cave in her dream, and if one part is true then I don't even want to think of the next part!  And the plane...didn't they think to spell out S O S with twigs or rocks or trampy underwear?



Author's Response:

hhahaha you crack me up...trampy underwear XD

they will be trying to get attention soon, once they really have a taste of what kind of danger they are in.

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm not really sure I can give any coherent hypothesis after that h.o.t. sexin in the grotto!  That was almost worth almost drowning for!



Author's Response:

lol, hell yeah!

I never thought I would write a story that I wished I was Bella so much haha

I'm glad you liked it! :D

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: April 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Hmmm, I'm surprised that Bella got off the island in one piece!  So, the savior has to be someone who is going to cause a little tension.  Mike?  Jacob?  Tanya?  I can't wait to find out!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Well, I'm so glad they're safe!  But I'm so frustrated that they won't let them see each other!  What is this, prison?!!!  I can't imagine that Edward is going to fly to France for Alice's wedding after all that happened, but I do think that they are going to give Rose a hard time!

 
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I love the idea of a baby, they had to know it was a possibility!  I hate the fact that he didn't even write her a note!  You know someone will forget to tell her about where Edward went!  Then, will he be able to find her again?

 




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