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Penname: snowgood [ Contact]
Real name: Linda
Status: Member
Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Summary: When Edward and Bella meet at university they both feel an instant attraction to one another. What is keeping Bella from letting Edward in? Can he help her overcome her dark past and find real happiness with him?
Rated NC17 for eventual lemons. AU, AH, E/B, J/A, R/Em.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 38618
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2009 Updated: May 16, 2010
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I almost feel bad for Edward now that Bella has thrown him a bone! It's as if he feels hope. And he doesn't have any idea of the resolve that Bella has made or the hoops he is going to have to jump through to break that resolve!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Hmm, I wonder just how much longer Bella is going to be able to resist Edward's charms? And will we ever find out what happened to her?
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I think I feel like Edward and want to know alot more about what happened to Bella!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Finally! Now, will there be dancing or fretting over this new development? I'm hoping for dancing-she needs to open up to someone special!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
It's a good thing that Alice is berating Bella's ass, because I can't be there to do it in person! I hope that Edward makes her dance for a long time! I can't believe she crushed him like that!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: May 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I really liked that section about Edward's doubts. Actually, I think it was spot on the money. I happen to know that those worries that he had about Bella and her sexuality are relevant and that his concerns too, are relevant. Good job!
Summary: 
Twenty-five Drabbles, A hundred words each. All handwritten notes. Who is the sender? Who is the Recipient?
For the Twilight25 Challenge.
Matthew 17: 20: He replied, "Because you have so little faith. I tell you the truth, if you have faith as small as a mustard seed, you can say to this mountain, 'Move from here to there' and it will move. Nothing will be impossible for you."
Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2578
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2009 Updated: December 07, 2009
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Twenty-Five Drabbles
That was well written and priceless! I got a good laugh at the end! Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and saying it was well-written. :)
Summary: 
Will the help of fairy godmothers Emmett, Jasper, and Jacob be enough to help Bella awaken Sleeping Beauty Edward when the evil Jane causes him to get a paper cut and fall into a deep sleep?
My entry for the Trust in Advertising Crackfic Contest. AH OOC
Categories: AU-Human, Crackfic Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 9926
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2009 Updated: December 07, 2009
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
That was one crunk donk fairy tale! What a trip! Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am glad you liked it.
Summary: The almost manic whispers of the devil echoed through my ears..."Hypocrite... Hypocrite... Hypocrite..." My face paled. It dawned on me as clear as looking through a translucent window. I was as much of a killer as Edward was. WARNING - EXTREME VIOLENCE. *Darkward & Darkella At Times*
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Word count: 6902
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2009 Updated: January 22, 2010
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: 1: Sliced to Pieces
Oh, he's like the strong, silent, sinister type! The stuff dreams are made of! Author's Response: haha, yeah, only in my dreams. =P
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Why am I picturing lumberjack Edward in a flannel with working boots? And maybe a few days scruff? And a wild look in his eyes?
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: 2: Craving
So, this is going to be a left field meets monkey wrench type of story! Okay, I can deal with that! What else is there to look forward to? Surprise me!
Summary: Edward Cullen fell in love with Isabella the moment he saw her. But Isabella’s frightening past keeps her from even imagining romance. However, she has no choice but to accept his marriage proposal after her guardian and beloved friend passes away, leaving her with nothing to her name but a box of letters and photographs.
Yet, those letters and photos are the catalyst to the unveiling of a mystery in Bella’s family that will consume them. Somehow, their true love for each other can only be discovered as Edward saves her from her own haunting past.
AU-H, Romantic Suspence
thanks m81170 for the spectacular banner!
Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 47383
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2009 Updated: February 18, 2010
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Irina Kendal
Well, thank God that Bella realized that she has someone to live for and who lives for her! Now maybe she'll be able to share the burden/threat with Edward and he can protect her from whomever it may be! As for Irina, as a sister, she certainly knows the story-why won't she just tell all? I guess we'll have to find out! Good Luck on those exams!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Ms Hale
Ah, English Edward, Paris in the 30's, and a mystery to boot? I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Shadow
Bella is very good at keeping people at arms length! I think most people would have succumbed to Edward by now. And I have to think that Edward is a most patient and happy person to let Bella just be. I hope Jules is feeling better! Author's Response: Bella is certainly good at not becoming attached to people. This is something you'll find is constant through a lot of the story, actually
Jules is going through a rough time, but she's doing a little better. Thanks for caring =)
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Poison
Ah, Edward is such a gentleman and has taken on a person who will not return his love. I hope that she will, does she not even think him attractive? Author's Response: Edward is always wonderful =) As for how she feels about him, that's part of the mystery, but I think it's easy to see that there are some underlying emotions even though she seems completely indifferent.
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Kate Alistair
Well, at least they are having some interaction now. And I think that Edward may actually be able to get past Isabella's walls. As for Jacob, he's lucky he didn't run into Edward! Author's Response: Edward is going to have to work really hard to have bella open up to him, but it will happen eventually. In the mean time, lots of romance still to come. And ya, its probably a good think Jacob didn't see Edward, but he may show up in the story a little later. He's no threat, though.
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Nightmares
First the hairdryer-I'm a girl scout, always be prepared. I usually hate the cheap hairdryers they put into rooms, but if it's a good one you don't need to unpack yours!
Now, the chapter. I'm glad to see that Bella is warming up to Edward. Even if it is to appreciate all that he does for her and to recognize how he feels about her. Hopefully she will begin to appreciate more, like his humor, looks, body etc! The staff at the house seems very supportive of her as well. I hope she let's Edward in on the nightmares!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Socialite
Haha! Welcome to the dark side! It was a lovely lemon! Very tender, actually! It's nice that Bella has met the family and they are not treating her like a pariah. She needs to make lasting relationships in her new life now! Author's Response: Thanks for the welcome ;) So far, you are the only person who has commented on chapter 6 and mentioned another part of the chapter than the lemon. Thank you!! Ya, Allice and Jasper will be interesting additions to bella's family. You'll soon see that Alice is a bit of a handful. I've exagerated her character a bit. Thank you!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Luncheon
I'm going with Banner 2, although I like the word Whisper written in cursive better than block. So, Bella knows that she needs Edward, but she doesn't exactly trust him to be there as he claims he will always be. I'll leave it up to Edward to protect Bella from the overzealous Alice and townspeople!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Whispers
Since I'm pervy, I'd like to see the chapter where Bella let's Edward make love to her in his pov. As for the letter, I think that she should definitely let Edward see all of the contents. He's far more worldly than she and he can figure out if it's merely familial concern or something more sinister!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: EPOV Chapter 6: The Socialite
Yes, he's even more perfect! So considerate and unsure, but wanting always to do the right thing for Bella! Sigh.
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Seeds
Poor Bella! I hope that she finds conviction in her belief that Edward loves her and that she wants to be a good wife to him! She is somehow going to have to leave the past behind, it's poisonous and it saps her of her life!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Hope
So, Kate was obviously not what she seemed to Bella. Are her dreams things that she remembers, incidents she is seeing with new eyes? Or are they made up from new suspicions? And Edward has been very protective, is he staying up at night to make sure that she is safe? He should take her home and away from all the nonsense! I'm glad that Bella put Jacob in his place. She knows how lucky she is to have found Edward! Author's Response: oo, very well put! As for the dreams, they aren't memories or anything, but things she imagining thast reflect emotions. Thank you for the comment!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Secrets
Oh, you poor thing! You need your own personal Edward to take care of you! So, happy that Bella told Edward she loved him! Now they need to celebrate it by going back to bed! Well, it's interesting that Edward knows Bella is sure he is keeping something from her. I have a bad feeling about the person Kate was paying and some accounts that Edward is taking care of. And the interest in Edward's wife. Hope you heal soon!
Summary: Edward Cullen is a member of one of Chicago's most elite families, spending his time among the city's upper crust. When his grandmother dies, Edward begins to think on his own mortality, leading him to discover a life he'd never known. He is joined on his journey by his four closest friends and a stranger with a blue scarf.
SaS is the story of Edward and Bella, but it's also a story of friendship, heartbreak, tragedy, and romance. I'm going to do my best to flesh out all my characters and show the deep connections they have to one another. Because of this, not every chapter will have Edward and Bella or even Edward or Bella. Some chapters will be just Alice, or Rosalie and Jasper, or Edward and Emmett.
The title Smokestacks and Skyscrapers is taken from an anthology of Chicago writing edited by David Starkey and Richard Guzman.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Word count: 21402
[Report This] Published: December 12, 2009 Updated: February 25, 2010
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chicago
Well, Edward seems normal in his grief and adriftness at this time, while his family seems callous and stiff. I wonder how he will ever meet up with this girl!
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