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Penname: snowgood [ Contact]
Real name: Linda
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Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Summary: Edward and Bella on Isle Esme - their first time, the way I would have written it.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2644
[Report This] Published: November 15, 2009 Updated: November 18, 2009
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: One shot
That was lovely! Simply beautiful! Author's Response: Thank you very much :)
Summary: Edward's working the night shift, trying to gain experience before his first year of medical school. He might learn more than he expected.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Word count: 62613
[Report This] Published: November 23, 2009 Updated: March 24, 2010
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: November 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I guess Edward's luck ran out. So, now what's a guy to do?
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
So, has the death of the woman temporarily unfocused Edward's thoughts to the safety of his family, friends, and Bella? When will Alice let everyone know what is going on? Will she at least talk to Edward about it?
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I can't wait to see how you tie this all in with Bella. Edward obviously can't go near her now. I'm glad that Edward has decided to talk to Alice about Maria, they shouldn't be hiding information from the rest of the family. Not unless there is a good reason...
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I can say that I am not loving Alice or Jasper right now! Alice knew that Jasper would encounter Edward and let it happen, and it seems that there is some kind of passive/agressive hostility from Jasper to Edward. It's nice that Alice is genuinely trying to make Edward comfortable, but at some point she is going to need to justify her actions-or non actions as they were!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Really, stunningly beautiful images and well written. I'm glad that Alice spilled the beans on why she allowed Jasper to turn Edward. I feel better now!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Edward is going to need alot of explaining. Plucked out of the prime of his charmed life, I'm not so sure he is going to be all that happy!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Edward must feel as if he is in bizarro world! I can't imagine being in some type of reality that seems unreal and waiting for it to be over but it never will!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I can't imagine the complete out of control feeling that Edward must feel. He has absolutely no control over his actions. Frustrating, infuriating, depressing and horrifying. I'd cry too!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
That was a close call with Jasper! Fate intervened in the pretense of a phone call to keep Bella alive! So interesting how much hostility there is for Edward by Jasper. And he doesn't even know that Alice is keeping secrets from him and using Edward as a confidant! I'm glad that Carlisle and Edward have found something to bond over-he needs an intellectual on his side.
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Well, I think that maybe Alice should come clean. Jasper should know that by that action Maria cannot be reasoned with!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Wow! The animosity that Jasper feels for Edward is astounding! To think he almost ended Edward's short time in this life and no one came running to Edward's aid! You would have thought that rationally Jasper would've been able to ascertain that there were no romantic or lustful feelings between Alice and Edward, but he obviously wasn't thinking rationally. If I were Edward, I would be thinking about learning as much as possible and maybe breaking from the family. There is certainly no love between the sire and the newborn!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Well that's one hell of a way to come off of a fun induced high! Why are they targeting Edward's friends and how did they know where the Cullens lived? He cannot let Alice be silent any longer!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
What a way to run into Bella! I can almost imagine just how deranged Edward must look right now! I can't wait to see what he does next!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: February 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Oh crap! Things went all wrong! Where's the calvary when you need them?!!! How is Edward going to get himself and dying Bella out of this?
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: March 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Wow, that was completely gruesome! I knew that Alice was using Edward-how completely awful! I'm guessing that Carlisle is the only one who Edward could really want to keep a relationship with after knowing this-maybe! I can't even imagine how the next chapter will go. Will Edward have any peace? Will Bella hate him, or still carry over whatever resonated about him to her in her human life and be glad to be with him? Will they leave the Cullens? I would! Even with all of Alice's remorse, genuine or not, he'd have to know that he would be sacrificed for Jasper and maybe even the others and she's obviously able to block him well.
Summary: What if it wasn't bloodlust that drew Edward to Bella in the beginning? What if he had recognized her as his soulmate from the very moment he saw her? This is the story of how a lost soul finally came to be with his one true love.
Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes
Word count: 23043
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2009 Updated: January 24, 2010
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Awww! I'm so glad Bella was able to save Edward! Will they have their happy ever after now? Author's Response: Next chapter will be up soon......
Glad you like it!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Hmm? An old photo of Edward? I don't know! I'm so bad at guessing mysteries!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Rubs hands eagerly! Now we are starting to get somewhere! I can't wait to see how this twist on fate affects their interaction! Author's Response: So glad you are enjoying it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I love the feedback!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
It sounds horrific that Bella's soul has been reincarnated and Edward has been the cause of it's demise. I wonder if she will remember any of those instances. I wonder why Alice didn't help out more? Author's Response: Remember that Alice wasn't in Edward's life for the first 2 or 3 decades of his immortality. When this story comes to a close, my intent is to venture seperately into each of Bella's incarnations and find out every detail of what happened. But for the sake of this story, we will learn only the basics in time! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Well, now that Jacob has spilled the beans, I'm sure that Bella will figure things out all that much sooner! Poor Edward, so much loss of control! Author's Response: My Bella will be in denial for a little bit, but she will figure it out on her own, I promise! Next chapter is a biggie, as far as moving the plot along! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Well, Edward turning on the charm is enough to make me melt, and think I hit my head or whatever else he wants me to think! Author's Response: I know, right? ***swoon***
He is quite gentlemanly....
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: December 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Edward really plunged right in! I think he should have wined and dined her a little before he broke out the past lives. I'm glad he didn't get to the part where he told her that he ended a few of them for her!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Iliked Edward's desperation. Imagine the nightmare of losing your love over and over again and just when you think you might have a chance at keeping her, you are again at a loss. It would be exhausting, mentally and physically, and it would be that much harder to climb out of. Author's Response: I agree! You can understand his self-loathing!
Reviewer: snowgood Signed
Date: January 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Aww, I love a happy ending! I'm so glad she wants to be like him so he won't get lonely! Can't wait for the epi! Author's Response: I love a happy ending as well! Thanks for the review!
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