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Penname: karry4harry [ Contact]
Real name: Karry
Status: Member
Member Since: March 01, 2009
Website: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2243283/karry4harry
Beta-reader: No
I've always been a person who has found more fun playing with numbers rather than with words. That's why I decided to major in mathematics and minor in physics at university. I'm currently in my third year of study.
I don't know what came over me this past summer, here in Australia, but I suddenly had the urge to open a word document and write down my own fanfiction. It was the product of, what could have been, many mind numbing journeys on public transport. At the end of each day, I found myself wanting to escape the hustle and bustle of reality and I found that escape in Stephenie Meyer's world of Twilight.
The enjoyment I get from writing is phenomenal and I hope that I am providing you with your own source of enjoyment through my story.
If you'd like, you can follow me on Twitter: karry4harry.
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Summary:
Edward is running, broken from a past relationship. Bella is searching, trying to find a place she truly belongs. Both feeling pessimistic and jaded, they head to a third-world country to volunteer their time. Will the place they travel to escape be the place they truly find happiness?
Thank you so much to the fantastic mkystich for making us an awesome banner!!!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 49521
[Report This] Published: April 04, 2010 Updated: March 24, 2011
Reviewer: karry4harry Signed 
Date: June 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Decisions
Well... I love it! It's a great premise for a story!
I like the idea of having the Cullens and Bella in different social classes. That mimics the vampire/human differences and allows the characters to stay true to form.
I'm glad that Alice got to sit next to Bella, first and not Edward - although, I'm really looking forward to that meeting!
Great work, guys!
On to Chapter 2! Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the support Karry! You are greatly appreciated! I hope you enjoy Ch 2...I will not be able to respond to that review for some odd reason, but we WILL appreciate it nonetheless! =)
Reviewer: karry4harry Signed
Date: July 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Breakfast Is Served
Good work guys! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder what Bella had said in her sleep?
Author's Response: Thanks for the continued support Karry! Ch 5 should be coming soon as well!
Summary: He's simply an exchange student looking for a decent cup of tea and Bella provides it. She thinks he's completely perfect. When he finds himself in a jam, she offers to help him out; however, they are both soon way over their heads.Will true love prevail?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 61270
[Report This] Published: April 20, 2010 Updated: May 31, 2010
Reviewer: karry4harry Signed
Date: May 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Two Countries Seperated
I love this story; I like the premise and I can't wait to see where you take it. Lol I'm writing this review with my own cup of English breakfast tea sitting beside me! Can't wait for the next update and I might visit your live journal.
All the best,
Karry.
Author's Response: You can't beat English breakfast tea! Thanks for reading.
Summary: Edward leaves Forks and Bella behind after the incident with Tyler's van. Now, five years later, he finally returns to his family and the Pacific Northwest. While picking up his latest Swedish automobile, he is confronted by a very familiar scent. Will Edward be able to fight the pull his singer has on him a second time? Or will he stick around long enough to find out What Drives Her?
AU after Chapter 4 of Twilight, Original Characterizations, Canon couples.
Banner by Jen!
Banner by TAmmyAZ!
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Embry
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No
Word count: 246355
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2010 Updated: November 13, 2011
Reviewer: karry4harry Signed
Date: November 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Picnics and Promises
Great chapter! I loved it! I especially loved how you phrase Edward's point of view. I think that you capture Meyer's Edward in your writing. Don't worry about the time between chapters. I know that real life gets in the way of my own writing all the time. I don't mind the wait if the chapter produced is of a high quality, which this chapter was. All the best and keep up the good work, Karry.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Karry!! Your patience and support means a lot! Hugs, Ginnie
Reviewer: karry4harry Signed
Date: September 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Deals Off
Excellent chapter! I think you nailed Edward's thoughts, actions and words in such a situation. I thoroughly enjoyed reading. I have a theory about Jake's involvement. I think he and Bella might've dated, but then he imprinted on someone else. I'll have to keep reading to find out if I'm right. All the best, Karry.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!! Your close, it has something to do with imprinting... but what??
Until next week, Ginnie
Reviewer: karry4harry Signed
Date: September 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Only Exception
Oh man! What a cliffy! All chapter I was waiting for that moment and then the chapter just... Ends. Lol. Anyhow, that was one brilliant chapter! It was such a pleasure to read. I can't wait for the next one. Even though your husband may have been distracting you, I think your mood helped produce my favourite chapter yet.
Keep up the awesome work, Karry.
Author's Response: Ah, thanks! And thanks for reviewing! :-) Ginnie
Reviewer: karry4harry Signed
Date: August 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Reunion & Revelation
I'm loving this story! I love how you characterize Edward and I enjoy reading things from his perspective. The way you've connected the events from the books into your story is excellent. Keep up the excellent work and I wait anxiously for next chapter!
Karry.
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliments! I think we all have our favorite elements of the books, but at the same time we don't need every element of canon re-lived for us. (You know, being the Twiaddicts that we are and all? LOL) My goal in this story was a re-imagining that honors the original stories and characters that SM created, but used the storyline and themes in a completely new way. At least, that's what I think I'm doing. Your review encourages me that I'm not failing entirely. Thank you!!
Reviewer: karry4harry Signed
Date: September 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Sway
That was definitely my favourite chapter so far! This story just keeps getting better. Keep up the amazing work! All the best and thanks for updating, Karry.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! :-) G
Summary: Edward was diagnosed with Cystic Fibrosis when he was six years old. Now, at twenty-two, he's trying to be a normal college student. The only thing is, he had to agree to share an apartment with his sister, Alice, who helps take care of him. When Alice gets accepted into a fashion school three hours away, they have to rely on a family friend, Bella, to live with Edward. Totally against having any help from anyone, Edward has to learn that you can't get through life alone.
***This story is not a happy-go-lucky love story. It is a drama and involves the issue of the illness CF. If anyone is sensitive to this subject, I suggest you don't read on.
Thanks to annamorphos for the lovely banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Word count: 53670
[Report This] Published: June 26, 2010 Updated: July 28, 2011
Reviewer: karry4harry Signed
Date: November 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: If you Want It To Be
I just started reading this story tonight. I'm really interested in where you are going to take it. I'm hoping that Bella brings Edward some happiness and that he finds comfort in confiding in her. Looking forward to next chapter.
Keep up the good work,
Karry. Author's Response: Thanks so much for the wonderful review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far and I'm happy to have you on board. I'm hoping it doesn't take too long to get the next chappie up.
Summary: 
Thanks to FrozenSoldier for the awesome banner
For a long time, Twilight has been Jen Porter’s only escape from her miserable reality. After a freak accident on a train, Jen finds herself actually living in the world of Twilight, as Bella's twin sister. At first, it’s a dream come true, but she soon starts to realize that her existence in Bella’s world could permanently alter the course of events. To make things worse, her old life in Australia keeps creeping back in. Something bad happened before Jen woke up in the world of Twilight, and everyone else seems to know something she doesn’t. Has the line between the real universe and alternate universe become blurred?
 
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 110438
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2010 Updated: July 01, 2011
Reviewer: karry4harry Signed
Date: September 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - On the Train
Congrats on the upload here, Jess!
You know what I already think, but, like you, I thought you deserved a review here, as well!
All the best from one Aussie to another,
Karry.
Author's Response: Thanks Karry! :D I didn't realise I had been validated until I had reviews in my inbox :S lol
Thanks for reveiwing again! Hehe
Jess xo
Summary: Bella is beginning her first year as a doctoral student in biology at the University of Washington, in the lab of Dr. Carlisle Cullen. She thinks she's going to identify how snake venom poisons prey, but as she delves deeper into her experiment she realizes that she's stumbled onto something far more sinister.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 38412
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2010 Updated: May 16, 2011
Summary: 
Jason Culhane has a troubled life and a worse past. Burdened by an unloving family, low expectations and a strange gift, his only anchor in life is his little sister Chloe. Yet a brief encounter with the supernatural changes everything. Jason finds himself thrust into a world he never knew existed and never wanted any part of. Worse than that, he's taking his family with him.
Note: This story only features the main characters of the Twilight Saga in a peripheral sense. The story does not focus upon them.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, Other Characters: Alec, Aro, Caius, Demetri, Felix, Jane, Liam, Maggie, Marcus, Renata, Siobhan
Challenges: Series: The Jason Culhane Saga
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Word count: 110328
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2010 Updated: March 02, 2011
Reviewer: karry4harry Signed
Date: November 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Prodigal
Interesting chapter... perhaps a bit of foreshadowing present? I really, really interested to see what Danny ends up doing and how Jason will deal with the aftermath. Then, I'm wondering what the doctor from the hospital will have to do with Jason's future.
Once again, excellently written. Author's Response: Thanks so much, believe me Danny won't be too long acting, and the doctor will come in to it again eventually. Thanks so much for your reviews.
Reviewer: karry4harry Signed
Date: October 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Preface & Chapter 1 - Reminisce
Wow! You have me seriously intrigued. Your writing is marvellous and so descriptive. I commend you for your ability to paint a detailed picture with your words.
I enjoyed your use of phrasings that were definitely non American.I found them very easy to read.
I'm extremely curious about this black smoke. Is this a gift that has been dormant in Jason up until this point? I guess I will have to read some more to find out.
When I started reading, as I do before I sleep, I didn't expect your chapters to be so long. I must say, though, that I'm glad that they are. Unfortunately, my eyes are beginning to droop, but I'll definitely be reading the next chapters tomorrow.
Best wishes and keep up the amazing work,
Karry.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, yes, it is a latent ability, but like Bella, Jason's ability expresses itself even when he's human. As for the chapter length, I guess it's just the way I write, in big blocks and then I smooth out the rough edges afterwards. Fortunately there'll only be ten or eleven chapters, but I am contemplating a sequel. Thanks so much for your review. Author's Response: Thanks so much, yes, it is a latent ability, but like Bella, Jason's ability expresses itself even when he's human. As for the chapter length, I guess it's just the way I write, in big blocks and then I smooth out the rough edges afterwards. Fortunately there'll only be ten or eleven chapters, but I am contemplating a sequel. Thanks so much for your review.
Reviewer: karry4harry Signed
Date: November 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Foreclosure
Excellent chapter! Your writing is wonderfully descriptive and I find it very easy to read.
I was interested to see Jason's gift in action, but more intrigued by Chloe's gift. I hadn't expected the death of their mother and I don't think I realised how horrible a person she was until this chapter. In the previous chapter, I'd still been willing to give her a chance, but the events of this chapter made me thoroughly dislike her.
Jason has a lot to deal with and I'm extremely intrigued to find out where the story is headed. I'm wondering if Jason will become a vampire and if Chloe will too. If Chloe does become a vampire, will it be when she is in her mid teens so that she is not viewed as an immortal child?? Many questions that I'm sure will eventually be answered as I read on.
Author's Response: Thank you, I really wanted Orla to come across as a nasty, self-absorbed person so that her elimination from the plot is more acceptable to the readers. Yes, Chloe's gift is intriguing and all I'll say for the rest is that both of them have a lot of trials coming and that their abilities play a big part. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Summary: 
The first few months after the change were always the most difficult. Instincts rule over rationality. Since raging thirst is never far from a newborn’s mind, it often makes for careless choices.
The girl would need supervision. A patient teacher to guide her and keep her out of trouble. I didn’t just feel obligated to fill this role, I yearned to fill it.
*Nominated for a Vampies Award, in the category: Bloody Newborn - best characterization of a newborn vampire. (It didn't win, but it was an honor being nominated. Thank you.)
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 79936
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2010 Updated: October 14, 2011
Reviewer: karry4harry Signed
Date: November 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
You have me intrigued. It's an interesting premise. I'm really looking forward to reading more whenever you can update.
Karry.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, and MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: karry4harry Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
I loved this chapter, particularly the playful banter between Edward and Bella. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Awesome! Glad you're enjoying the story!
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and for the awesome star rating!
MTLBYAKY
Jana~
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