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Summary: Isabella is a handmaid to Princess Jessica, Daughter of King Aro. When a knight from a neighboring kingdom wins his choice of bride, Sir Edward bypasses the princess and claims the handmaid instead. Isabella suddenly finds herself married to a man she does not know, and is tossed into the middle of political plots and scheming nobles. Her life is further turned upside down when she is unable to give her husband the one thing he must have.
"This is the hour of Forks' revenge. Volterra will fall to us for Aro's actions against your Queen, and no one – no one – who fights for Volterra will survive. We will not stop until every wall, every tower, every single structure in all of Volterra has been razed."
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes
Word count: 229617
[Report This] Published: December 06, 2010 Updated: December 02, 2011
Reviewer: Bart Signed 
Date: July 17, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Grudgingly Recount
Poor Leah! Here's hoping for a whole bunch of revenge and retribution by the conclusion of this tale. Two wicked witches and one dog killer need to get what they have coming to them!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 16, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Timidly Endeavor
What a sweet final scene! I must admit, however, that I am waiting for the"shoe-to drop" and for Edward to not be so perfect! Author's Response: Oh he is FAR from perfect... Thanks for leaving a review!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 16, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Secretly Overhear
I am enjoying this tale! I feel transported back in time!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 16, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Warmly Welcomed
I feel like I'm a little girl, again, watching Leslie Ann Warren in Cinderella.
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 16, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Marginally Succeed
Oh, my!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 17, 2011
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Slowly Explore
The level of plot development in this chapter was perfect!:)
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24-Lamentably Arrange
No! NO! NO! There better be a happy ending for Isabella and Edward at the end of this tale. Please! Please! PLEASE!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Nearly Destroyed
Well written chapter! This tale would translate well to the big screen.
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Gracefully Endure
An interesting description of the concubine experience. Does this fictional situation fit the factual history? Author's Response: Not in the least - I'm making all this up based on a combination of cultures, some other books I've read and movies I've seen. It's not historical - just for fun. :)
Summary: 
When Charlie goes over Bella's head and hires a gorgeous and cocky new employee for the ranch, will she be able to fight her growing attraction to him as much as she fights with him?
Rated NC-17 for language, UST and future lemons.
AH OOC
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 332731
[Report This] Published: February 09, 2011 Updated: October 18, 2011
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: This is Me
Thank God for Alice!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Agree to Disagree
Fun! Fun! Fun!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Playing House
Poor Mike (not that he didn't deserve what he got)!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Road Trips & Rehearsals & Stylists, Oh My
She can drink that much and look fabulous the next day? Not fair!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Nothing Left to Hide
Poor Edward! I would not want Charlie interrogating me!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Grounded
Good bed-side manners make the man!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths
I laughed so loud reading the last scene, that my hubby came looking for what was so funny! Cute story!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Revenge is Best Served Wet
What romantic fun!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Upside Down
What a fun start!
Summary: 
She washed up along the river near his secluded log cabin with no memories. He couldn't just leave her to fend for herself, could he?
Blinkie by the amazing Le Crepuscule
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No
Word count: 63057
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2011 Updated: August 31, 2011
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: August 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 12: You Don't Belong Here
Poor girl! Now what does she do?
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 14, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: You Bold-Faced Lied to Me
Good question! Why did he lie? Can't wait to hear his excuse!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 07, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Washed Up Along the River
Does she know who she is?
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: I Live with Him
Was the coat wet? Curious!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Just Someone You Saved
Sweet chapter and final scene!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Treat You Nice
She has made a wise choice, I think.
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