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Summary:  Vampire Edward meets human Bella when she is being attacked in a dark alley. Things get ugly and Edward is forced to take her to his house to save her.Not all great love stories start once upon a time and far far away; some begin down dark alleys.
Banner by Libby at thetwilightawards.com
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes
Word count: 45321
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2010 Updated: February 21, 2011
Reviewer: Bart Signed 
Date: December 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Falling and other things to fear
Merry Christmas to you, too, and thank you for this merry little tale!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 01, 2011
Title: Chapter 15: Why We're Here and Other Tragedies
I am enjoying Rose and her delicious names for Bella!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 01, 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Revelations and other things to run from
Looks like "business" will me taking a turn for the worse for James and Edward.
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: February 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 19: Together and other things we should be
Thanks for making me smile! Your take on Edward and company is just delightful! Can't wait to see what the first date holds!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: February 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Confess and other things you should do
Bella's pain regarding "being erased" hit a nerve. You made me stop and wonder how many people are "erased" in this world each day...and no one notices. Powerful writing!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: February 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 21: The past and other things we can't escape
Yikes! What does James want with Bella? Please don't make us wait too long to find out!
Summary:
Takes place During New Moon’s winter. Convinced that Edward was lying, Bella sets out across the country to find the Cullens and confront Edward to gain the closure she needs.
Many thanks to Kaghanyou for the fantastic banner!
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 16441
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2010 Updated: January 03, 2011
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Coming To
Great, believable beginning to this story!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Apologetics
What a sweet Christmas moment between Bella and Charlie!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: An Overture, Neatly Wrapped
What incredible imagery! Wow!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Buoyancy
I hope she does return to Charlie!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Flight Plan
Why am I feeling so badly for Charlie? Make this a quick trip so that his nerves don't unravel.
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Signs and Symptoms
Way to go Alice! I guess we are off to find the good doctor now!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Finding Doctor, Finding Patience
Happy New Year to you, too! Fun story!
Summary:  
Bella and Edward have been pen pals (the traditional kind, pen and paper stuff) for over a decade, but they never met for reasons even they didn’t know. After fourteen years of “courting through the postal service” and not realizing it, Bella gets engaged to Emmett, a fellow lawyer at the prestigious firm of Ateara, Call, and Uley. They move fast, and a wedding is set for a mere four months after they get engaged. Bella invites Edward to the wedding, wanting to finally meet her longtime friend, and when things go sour the night of the rehearsal dinner, Bella, in her shock, ends up in Edward’s arms. And this is all just the tip of the iceberg for these two…
Rated NC-17 for mature sexual content. Little to no bad language.
*banner by enchanted-mind*
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes
Word count: 239223
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2010 Updated: August 27, 2011
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Letters
Interesting premise!
Summary: 
The first few months after the change were always the most difficult. Instincts rule over rationality. Since raging thirst is never far from a newborn’s mind, it often makes for careless choices.
The girl would need supervision. A patient teacher to guide her and keep her out of trouble. I didn’t just feel obligated to fill this role, I yearned to fill it.
*Nominated for a Vampies Award, in the category: Bloody Newborn - best characterization of a newborn vampire. (It didn't win, but it was an honor being nominated. Thank you.)
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 79936
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2010 Updated: October 14, 2011
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 07, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Interesting premise! Nice start! Author's Response: Thank you. Hope you continue to think so!
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and for the awesome star rating!
MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
Please keep writing! Author's Response: Yep! :D
Thanks again for the awesome star rating! And for reading and reviewing! :D
MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
I can't wait to hear how poor Edward answers the question! Author's Response: (grin)
Thanks again! Hope you continue to enjoy! :D
MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
What an emotional rollercoaster ride for Edward! Author's Response: LOL, yep. I hope I'm capturing that well! :D
Thanks again for R&R& stars! LOL!
MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
I am curious to see where you take this tale! Author's Response: :D
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and for the awesome star rating!
MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
I am enjoying your take on Bella! Poor Edward is going to have his hands full! Fun! Author's Response: LOL, great! Thanks! I'm glad that you are! :D
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and for the awesome star rating!
MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
A suspense filled chapter! Well done! Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and for the awesome star rating! Again! :D
MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
Your characterization is choice! Loving this story! Author's Response: Awesome! Thanks so much! I appreciate that! Glad that you are! :D
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and for the awesome star rating! :D
MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
Another interesting chapter! What a delightful way to spend my evening! Author's Response: Wow, thanks! What a wonderful compliment! I really appreciate that! :)
Thanks again for reading, reviewing, and for the awesome star rating!
MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
Who is coming? Jacob? Laurent? Author's Response: (huge grin)
Thanks for R&R& stars! :D
MTLBYAKY
Jana~
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
Poor Emmett! Will his ego survive? Author's Response: LOL! ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and for the awesome star rating! :D
MTLBYAKY
Jana~
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