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Summary: There's a dusty old bookstore in Seattle where the proprietor keeps odd hours and knows the location of every book in his stock. What surprises hide in its stacks?
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 48 Completed: Yes
Word count: 122523
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2010 Updated: February 01, 2012
Reviewer: Bart Signed 
Date: October 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
Loving this! What a perfect setting and your character development is working for me instantly! Fun! Fun!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
Your dialogue is incredible! Crisp and true!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
It breaks my heart, but I realize that your tale has taken a sad twist. Yet, I appreciate your insight into how Edward would have handled such a loss. As chapters unfold, I bet he is blaming himself for not "hearing" the thoughts of the wolves quicklyt enough. Powerful story line!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
What a light hearted, romantic tale! Thank you!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27
Fun dialogue!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
Thanks for the smiles! What a cute chapter!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
We don't hate Jacob...he can live but not with Bella.
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
Poor Bella! Poor Edward! The tension!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
Glad to see Alice and Jasper in the picture!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
Yikes! What happened in Forks? I have a bad feeling about what is coming next!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Your writing is so vivid that I feel like have walked into the setting myself! Wow!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
Great chapter! I could literally see the action thanks to your clear and vivid description.
Summary:  Vampire Edward meets human Bella when she is being attacked in a dark alley. Things get ugly and Edward is forced to take her to his house to save her.Not all great love stories start once upon a time and far far away; some begin down dark alleys.
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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes
Word count: 45321
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2010 Updated: February 21, 2011
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 14, 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Fairytales and other wake up calls
I like Rose, too! Author's Response: Thanks! I'm not in love with Rose in the books, but I think she's fun here.
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: February 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 22: Ever after and other things at stake
Wow! What a surprise! Yeah, Carlisle!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Dark Alleys and Other Love Stories
Great start with plenty of action, character developement, and an interesting plot twist!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: White Knights and Other Dragons
Poor boy, but he wears confusion well!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Zombies and Other Attractive Strangers
Fun dialogue!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Sandwiches and other things to make
I love Emmett in any universe! Fun plotline!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Vampires and other things that suck
Bella needs a place to love! Incredible! Fun! Fun! Fun!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Tempers and other things you can't control
A sweet blend of giggles and angst! Thanks for sharing your talents!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Hunger and other things we have in common
When do we discover what "business" Edward and James are in? Author's Response: Soon, I promise!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Dead people and other uninvited guests
Another fun chapter! Now, why would James want Bella at the ball? Curious!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Birthday gifts and other painful reminders
Cute dialogue!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: December 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Rules and other things that can be broken
Your Rose is a delight to read! Witty dialogue!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: December 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Men with resources and other ways to die
I enjoyed the dance scene! Author's Response: Thanks!
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