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Summary: Edward leaves Forks and Bella behind after the incident with Tyler's van. Now, five years later, he finally returns to his family and the Pacific Northwest. While picking up his latest Swedish automobile, he is confronted by a very familiar scent. Will Edward be able to fight the pull his singer has on him a second time? Or will he stick around long enough to find out What Drives Her?
AU after Chapter 4 of Twilight, Original Characterizations, Canon couples.
Banner by Jen!
Banner by TAmmyAZ!
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Embry
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No
Word count: 246355
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2010 Updated: November 13, 2011
Reviewer: Bart Signed 
Date: November 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Picnics and Promises
Terrific chapter! Loved the picnic! Author's Response: Thank you so much Bart! See you after the update... ;-)
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Decisions- Part 1
Good job with capturing the family dynamics!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: December 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Choosing Sides
Beautiful chapter! Author's Response: Thank you, as always!! :)
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: December 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: In The Sun
This chapter was a wonderful Christmas gift! Thank you!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: In The Sun
It looks like Santa was good to you! I don't understand why you haven't hit the thousand mark by now! This is such a good story with a unigue twist!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Anger, Denial & A Dog
Exciting chapter!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: The Cullens Part 1
I really enjoyed this chapter!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 01, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Riding In My Car
I have been away from story land for sometime, so I started your tale from the beginning. I am enjoying your writing style and characterization even more! What a fun evening I am having, thanks to you!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Only Exception
It is such a relief to know that I don't have to wait to read the next chapter!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Sway
Thank you for writing!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Happy
Fun brother/sister banter!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Picnics and Promises
Sweet evening in the park! I read this chapter when you first published it, and I enjoyed it just as much on the 2nd read.
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Decisions- Part 2
Tension! Poor Bella!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Choosing Sides
Loving this story!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: In The Sun
OK! This is where I left off when I first read your story. New chapters ahead! Yeah! It just gets better and better!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Anger, Denial & A Dog
I enjoy the way you take Stephanie's words and play with them! Author's Response: Thank you so much. That's one of my personal favorite things about fanfiction when it's done well. :-)
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Changes
I can just imagine what a comedy of errors the next chapter will hold! Vampire rescues pup! Author's Response: LOL, I know, I know... it was always an idea in the back of my head though. A crarzy one sure, but fun to play with.
It's nice to have you back after your break from the fanfic world. I'll try to get the next chapter up by this weekend so you don't run out of chapters too fast.
Thank you for the lovely reviews!!
-Ginnie
Summary:
It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon. There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend. Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life. But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle. This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back. There are some laughs along the way. The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content.
Thank you Monamour for the lovely banner:
Twilighted Validation Beta: myimm0rtal
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes
Word count: 115917
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2010 Updated: January 15, 2011
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Of All The Airports In The World...
A very mature and believable way for Edward and Bella to meet again. I am looking forward to meeting the new man in Bella's life. Author's Response: Bart: Thanks. I'm glad you liked the reunion.
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Edward Meets Julian
I am appreciating your plot line and character development! Please keep the chapters coming! Author's Response: Thanks again. Chapter 4 should be up this week!
Summary: 
Banner by Whatobession17
Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 149789
[Report This] Published: June 18, 2010 Updated: November 12, 2011
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Delicate
I m so nervous! I don't suppose you will make this a nice, conflict free frip?
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Boogie Man
Strong characterization! Believable plot!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Careful Where You Stand
Poor girl! You paint a painful picture. Well written story!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Voices of Violence
You are giving the world an honest view of the reality of being homeless.
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Spies
Good decision, Edward!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Animal I Have Become
Tense! Interesting twist with Sam and the pack!
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