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Summary:

Bella Swan receives an invitation to the exclusive Evermore Experience, an in-depth immersion summer program where she plans to fully explore 19th century England, but fate has other plans for her once she arrives.

 

Evermore Experience


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 153999
[Report This] Published: May 13, 2010 Updated: August 12, 2011


Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Revelations and Roommates

Emmett!  Yeah!  This should be fun!



Author's Response:

LOL! Hope you continue to enjoy EE!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Resurrection

Am I the only slow one to just figure out who the man behind the mask is? Duh! 

Fun plot!



Author's Response:

You're not slow.  Believe me.  Glad you are enjoying EE!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Rumors and relations

What a delightful way to spend an evening!  This is such a unique tale!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Two of a kind

Another sweet chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Can we talk? : L's story

Where did you get your inspiration for Auntie L?  She is such a marvelous soul!



Author's Response:

L is actually based on a real person.  I'm glad you enjoy her.  She did an interview with Sparkling Citrus (link in one of the chapters & on the EE forum page) if you'd like to learn more about her.  I did an interview, too, with the Sparkling Citrus and SYTYCW blogs.

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Romance in the air

Yikes!  I am out of chapters to read!  Please hurry with the next one!



Author's Response:

I'm actually on vacation visiting the fam (& stealing a laptop moment while DH & niece take a nap).  I hope to write some this evening, though.  Brainstorm hit & I've gotta get those words down!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Dreams and nightmares, pt.2

Bree was an unexpected twist!



Author's Response:

Very much so.

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: When a door closes

 I am behind in reading this fun tale, so I thank you for providing me an evening of delightful fantasy!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you are enjoying EE.  Thanks for telling me (reviews make me write faster, I think).

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Forks and Bella behind after the incident with Tyler's van. Now, five years later, he finally returns to his family and the Pacific Northwest. While picking up his latest Swedish automobile, he is confronted by a very familiar scent. Will Edward be able to fight the pull his singer has on him a second time? Or will he stick around long enough to find out What Drives Her?

AU after Chapter 4 of Twilight, Original Characterizations, Canon couples.  

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Embry
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 246355
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2010 Updated: November 13, 2011


Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Happy

Another well written chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review, Bart!  So sorry for the late reply, but I'm back now! ;-)

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Stay

Each scene you write is loaded with details appealing to my 5 senses!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Decisions- Part 2

Yikes!  Poor Bella!  She is in a tight corner!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Ghosts of the Past

Fun! Fun! Fun!  Waving at his mother in the car was a cute touch!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked that!  It just seemed like a Bella thing to do, and I can only imagine how excited Esme must have been about that.  Thank you for your reviews!!  I do apologize that I haven't responded sooner, but I will try to make a point to keep up with them as much as possible!  Hugs, Ginnie

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Eye to Eye

You can feel the tension! Can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that's coming across as you read!  I love your reviews, so thank you for making a point to do so each chapter!!  It's really nice to have you as a reader.  :-)  Ginnie

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Only Exception

Not fair!  Don't you dare make us wait too long for the next scene!

This is such a fun story!  Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Stay

Perfect!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Deals Off

What a fantastic, well written story!  Your characterization is tight, the dialogue is delightful, and the plot has me reading instead of getting ready for work!



Author's Response:

Thank you so, so much!  Sorry about distacting you from work though!!  :-) G

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Me & You

I am enjoying your character developent and the way you portray a mature Edward and Bella.

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Great beginning with her remembrance of Edward in the last paragraph of the chapter!



Author's Response:

Why thank you!  Glad you found the story and I look forward to hearing what you have to say about the rest.  ~Ginnie

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: The Prodigal

Can't wait to see our duos reaction when they meet again!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review!  Sorry for the late response, I've been writing though.  I thought everyone might like the new chapters over Review Responses!!

Thanks again, Ginnie

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Running, Climbing, Failing

Tension is mounting!



Author's Response:

LOL!! Thank you for the review, Ginnie

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Visions & Vacillations

My, my, my!  Tension is rising!



Author's Response:

Hi Bart,

Good to see you again.  I wondered if you had finished reading yet... thank you for the lovely reviews!!  Ginnie

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Protector

Fun ending!  Can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Glad you didn't have to wait for an upate~  Thank you again for reviewing!  G

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Reunion & Revelation

I love the way you alluded to the title!  Great story!  I love Embry!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Glad you like Embry, there may be a little more of him again eventually!!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Riding In My Car

What a well written dialogue!



Author's Response:

Gosh, thanks!  I appreciate the compliment, hope you liked the chapter as a whole.  ;-)  G

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Sway

Sweet!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Bart!! :-) G

 




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