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Summary: 
A quiet, young editor meets a brooding man hiding under the façade of a charming entrepreneur and follows him into a mutual agreement. Watch the couple as they come to terms with an incomprehensible living arrangement and begin the journey to accepting a life together. Do relationships really last when hardships make it impossible to......
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No
Word count: 127026
[Report This] Published: April 06, 2010 Updated: March 06, 2013
Reviewer: Bart Signed 
Date: January 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Malady
Painful and powerfully written!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
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Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Farewell
On to the flower shop! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Smoke
I bet this devil wears Prada, too! Poor Bella! What a witch to have for a boss!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 1
Please don"t wait too long until the next chapter!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Beginnings
A cute end to the chapter!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Falling (EPOV)
Who is Thea and the unknown speaker? Twists upon twists upon twists!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
Interesting plot! I didn't anticipate this turn! Well done!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
Powerfully written!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Spin
What skeletons in the closet? Bella isn't the only one intrigued!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Surrender to Destiny
Mallory! Ah! I hope this story provides Bella an opportunity for justice (or retribution)!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Vision Clash
Rosalie "gaping like a fish" is quite an image!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow! That chapter was an attention getter!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Declaration of Fate
This is such a unique story!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: April 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17 - My New Life
I have missed this story! Hopefully, the next chaptr will arrive soon! Great writing!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 25, 2011
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 20 - A Night of Shocks
So Tanya and Laren are in it together?
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 07, 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19 - Night Companions
The final scene was priceless!
Summary: Bella Swan thought everything that she has dealt with was real, that she lived in a town where the supernatural exists. One day she wakes up, only to find out that the reality she had belonged to was nothing more than one big elaborate dream.
A huge thanks to ms. ambrosia for the awesome banner, and to Rose Arcadia for the amazing blinkie.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No
Word count: 72280
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2010 Updated: October 01, 2011
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Preface
Incredible life review! Now to reality, huh! Interesting start! Author's Response: Thank you. Words can't express how happy this made me. I'm glad you enjoyed the Preface.
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Waking Up
Is Carlisle or is he not a vampire! Great plot twist!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Scary Stories
I did not see that last line coming! What did Bella do? Slide into another universe? Cool!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - The Cullens
Fun story!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Memories
What happened to Bella in the other world? Does that world still exist, I wonder!? Author's Response: It was all a dream. There's no ther dimension or parallel universe.
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - The End
Yeah, Edward! To the rescue! Author's Response: LOL, wasn't he always?
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - First Sight
You did a marvelous job creating tension between them! Author's Response: Thank you. I'm pleased that I was able to write the scenario I saw in my head and be able to relay it through words.
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Unexpected
You did an excellent job capturing the characterization through dialogue in this chapter! Author's Response: Thank you. It means a lot to me that you saw what I was trying to relay.
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