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Summary: An old, dilapidated hospital residing in the outskirts of Forks, Washington, sits untouched - other than being the occasional setting of a teenage party. Everyone knows the rumors, and it's because of those rumors rebellious teens are lured there. They want to be the first to spy the young man who supposedly lives inside its walls, the man who's either a ghost or crazed maniac that murders those courageous enough to enter the building.
No one has ever seen him, or at least no one that's ever lived to tell the tale. But it's all just rumors, right? Well, Bella Swan is about to find out.
Rated for subject matter and content. OOC. Canon pairings.
Gif made by the amazing RoseArcadia
Warning: There is mention of physical abuse in this story.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Marcus, Mike, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Word count: 89825
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2010 Updated: July 12, 2010
Reviewer: Bart Signed 
Date: May 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: A Slight Progression
This story has wrapped around my heart!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: May 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Home Again
The last line made my heart jump!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Furthersome
Beautiful!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Reveal
You are so cruel! Talk about a cliff hanger!
Wonderful chapter!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Once More With Feeling
Another beautiful chapter! Thank you!
Summary: 
An unexpected discovery reveals that Edward lied when he left Bella. Now, Bella is determined to find a way to contact him, and in the process she learns more than she ever knew about Edward Cullen.
An Edward and Bella love story.
Thank you Mothlights for the fantastic banner!!
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Word count: 178682
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: November 12, 2010
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Dust Sheets and Drama Queens
Cute "tanya" discussion!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Getting There
What a beautiful love story! I should be working, right now, but I still have several chapters to finish (I was up until midnight escaping into your world).
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Tuxedo Time Part II
But what about college and the new house and a baby and...
Please just keep on writing (or give us a hint about the next juicy tale you will weave for us)!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Tuxedo Time Part I
Like Bloodlines, this story will linger in the mind long after the last chapter is read! You are such a gifted writer!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Bandage
Again, you surprised me! Author's Response: I like a surprise every now and then :)
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Presents
The more chapters the better! I will miss this world of love and friendship! Callum is such a dynamic character!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Gift Box
Why do I have a feeling that something wicked this way comes?
Another fabulous chapter! What a fun evening you are providing me with more chapters to come! Author's Response: Thanks very much!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Yes!
Ah...my eyes are wet! Sweet!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Sentimental Vampire (angelicwish)
Oh, my! I wasn't expecting "her" quite yet! Now what?
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Gothic Romance
The order reference number brought tears to my eyes! What a beautiful love story you are weaving! Author's Response: Thank you. Have to admit, that was a favourite bit of mine. Thanks for all your reviews :)
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: March 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Look Out Below
I have always wondered what would have happened had Bella found the gifts. I can't wait to see where your thoughts take us! Author's Response: Thanks very much. This is still very much a work in progress, so my thoughts are going in many different directions - I'm trying to work out which way to send Bella! Thanks for your review :)
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: March 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: And So It Begins
I am enjoying how Bella is unraveling the mystery! Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Serious Intentions
ANOTHER "WOW" CHAPTER! I am loving the way your creative little mind works!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Therapy with the Vampire
I am proud of our girl, Bella, for embrassing Tanya's lesson!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Patience
OH, WOW! Did not expect this turn in events!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Very Good Wrist Action
PERFECT!
Summary:
What if Edward finally found his mate only to discover her only goal was to kill herself? Could he help her move beyond her dark past? Could she help him to find faith that he wasn't a monster?
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 51180
[Report This] Published: February 27, 2010 Updated: July 29, 2010
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Recon
Subtle but effective character development! Very realistic! Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate your review.
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - If My Heart Could Race
Please let Edward and Beela have a conversation! Author's Response: They will be talking. I may take things slow but they will get there, promise!
Summary: 
Thanks to Mkystich for the amazing banner!
Bella meets Edward while she is a pre-kindergartener, and Edward becomes her best friend. When Bella’s life is in danger, Edward is forced to leave to prevent her death. As Bella grows older, Edward is forgotten.
A new family moves to Forks at the start of Bella’s senior year and changes Bella’s life forever. What the mind forgets, the heart will always remember.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 69283
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2010 Updated: December 20, 2011
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: May 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Change of Plans
Love it! Sweet beginning! Author's Response: I'm so glad you're loving the story! If you just finished Chapter 1, then I need to warn you that there is angst ahead (it wouldn't be an Edward and Bella story if there weren't), but it DOES get better... I can't take too much angst, so I've tried to keep it to only the amount that I think will get the idea of the story across.
Enjoy!
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