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Summary: AU. Based off the events in the beginning of New Moon. Edward did not tell the truth when he left Bella in the woods five years ago. Struggling to make a life without him, Bella finds herself still alone in an entirely different forest. But what happens if they are accidentally reunited? What was the lie that Edward told? What will Bella do when she finds out? Rated NC-17 for language and sexual situations
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No
Word count: 119106
[Report This] Published: December 18, 2008 Updated: December 28, 2010
Reviewer: Bart Signed 
Date: December 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Acteon and Diana
The image of Emmett's of refrigerator arts is priceless! I laughed aloud!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: December 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Waiting for the Night to Fall
Powerful
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: December 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Under the Milky Way Tonight
Yeah, Bella! Round #1 goes to the lady!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: December 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: In Your Eyes
Tense! The final scene with father and son...so, so powerful!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: December 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Marmion
I do appeciate your Dr. Reyerson! Is his character based on someone you know? Author's Response: He's just a figment of my imagination. But he is someone I wish I knew for real.
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: December 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Occam's Razor
I like your Rosalie! You have fleshed out her character making her "more" than a cut-out paperdoll.
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: December 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Ouroboros
Poor Edward! I can almost feel him squirm!
Summary: Bella and Edward find that they share a common love before they fall in love with one another.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 18381
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2008 Updated: July 16, 2009
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
A delightful, well developed story!
Summary: 
What if Bella’s thoughts on the plane flying back to Seattle from Italy take her in a different direction from the plot in New Moon? Just where could a little twist of fate take the characters? An indepth look at Bella's thoughts and feeling at the end of New Moon and into an AU Eclipse.
Canon couples, and rated NC17 just to be safe. I am Bella and Edward all the way, so if you like Bella and Jacob, then I am afraid this is not the story for you.
Dying By Degrees on discussion forum. http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=19&t=9136
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 106997
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2009 Updated: June 19, 2010
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: May 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
A much needed conversation! I appreciate your interpretation of the issues addressed!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: May 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Another "believable" situation addressed! The novel resolved the conflict between Bella and Charlie way too easily!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: May 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Wow! Bella is still so broken! Now what?
Summary: “No trumpets sound when the important decisions of our life are made. Destiny is made known silently.” –Agnes De Mille
After walking away from Bella in September 2005, even in his numbed stupor Edward goes to great lengths to ensure Bella’s safety and happiness as a human. A gracious Romeo, he is prepared to remain backstage until Paris’ scene is over—and Bella keeps reluctantly carrying out the lines she has been given. But they must both learn that they cannot control destiny... and each silent, calculated decision brings them closer to an unrealized, unexpected fate.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 29015
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2009 Updated: October 10, 2010
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: May 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: October 2005
Strong character development!
Summary: Edward is struck by the unending love his wife displays. A fluffy, one-shot. Canon. Post Breaking Dawn.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2121
[Report This] Published: January 08, 2009 Updated: January 09, 2009
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: March 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Thanks for a light hearted, fun moment!
Summary: This story begins after the conclusion of Eclipse. Newly engaged, Bella and Edward explore the physical and romantic boundaries of their relationship. Together they will embark on a new level of intimacy neither of them has experienced before.
Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 24340
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2009 Updated: March 07, 2009
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Sweet story! Please continue!
Summary: Did you want more from the honeymoon scene in Breaking Dawn? If so, here is the first night on Isle Esme. What exactly happened after Edward pulled Bella deeper into the ocean? The events from the water to the bedroom from Edward's POV in five chapters (before the bruises show up).
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Word count: 7115
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2009 Updated: March 14, 2009
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: March 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Afterglow
Beautiful!
Summary: 
Edward reveals a secret from his human time which leaves Bella shocked and wondering just how well she knows the man she is about to marry.
This is very much an Edward and Bella love story.
Thank you angel-gidget for the banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Word count: 256624
[Report This] Published: February 07, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2009
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds
Thanks for taking me to a happy place! Author's Response: My pleasure, I'm glad you likd it. Thanks very much.
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: September 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Full Circle
Thank you, again, for all of the magical moments!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Pant, Pant, Blow
What priceless moments! Thank you!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Family
Beautiful!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: August 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Where Do We Go From Here?
I am rereading your story for the third time, and it just gets better and better!
Summary: 
After the Cullens leave Forks and make the move to New York, Carlisle fights to keep his family together as Edward's pain threatens to tear them apart. Ithaca is the story of a son's quest, a father's love, and the unique family struggling to stand behind them both...
This is the Cullens' New Moon.
Ithaca starts one month into the Cullens' time away from Bella, and will follow New Moon to its end. Carlisle and Edward narrate in alternating chapters. Follows all known canon.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Carlisle, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 118422
[Report This] Published: February 19, 2009 Updated: December 07, 2009
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: October 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: The Fatted Calf
Well worth the wait! What an enotional ride! Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: The Fatted Calf
I just read this for the second time to ready myself for the new chapter. I still cried. Powerful! Author's Response: Thank you!
Summary:  
Bella begins working for the elusive and distant Edward Cullen who she discovers is hiding behind an elaborate charade to maintain his secret lifestyle. Bella is determined to find out the mysteries of Edward Cullen but with what results? AU. Mystery/Humor/Angst
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No
Word count: 173201
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Interesting deductive reasoning!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Interesting scenario!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Poor anxious Edward! Fun story!
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