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Summary:  Edward Cullen was a loner, an outcast. He clearly hated everybody, including himself. He was not a nice person. So, why was I so drawn to him? And why did I get the crazy feeling he felt the same way?
WARNING: This story will deal with the aftermath of child abuse and rape. If that bothers you too much, I strongly recommend that you don’t read.
Thanks to steffyxxface for the lovely banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 115 Completed: Yes
Word count: 365612
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2009 Updated: July 06, 2011
Reviewer: Bart Signed 
Date: December 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84
Excellant!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
Your ability to paint a picture with words is incredible!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: July 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
Your imagination is keen and your characterization is so dynamic!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111
What an unexpected twist!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: August 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
Another vivid and powerful chapter!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: September 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63
Great conversation with Rosalie! Dynamic characterization!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75
Another gut wrenching chapter! You are a powerful writer!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: November 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
I did not see that last line coming! Too spooky!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: December 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80
Another excellent chapter!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 19, 2011
Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88
Sweet scenes!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 19, 2011
Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89
Oh, know!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: February 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91
You capture the raw reality of the situation so well! Powerfully written!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: February 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93
Precious moments shared!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: February 25, 2011
Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94
Bravery personified! Wow!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: May 21, 2011
Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108
I have been out of the country and just returned to your incredible story and the news of your personal loss. Both you and Edward are on a "hero's journey." Thank you for sharing your strength with us. My thoughts and prayers are with you.
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: May 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109
Wow! Just...WOW!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: May 31, 2011
Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110
I wish I could say something besides "WOW," yet that is how I feel at the end of each of your chapters!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 30, 2011
Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114
Thank you so much for sharing your time and talent with us!
Summary: What do you do when the one you thought would love you forever up and leaves you? You move to Vegas of course!
It's 3 years after Edward left Bella. She's discovered a new life, and made new friends, but has never really gotten over Edward's abandonment.
When a chance encounter with Alice at a local Vegas night club brings the Cullens back full force into Bella's life, how will she react? Is there any hope for them to rekindle their friendships? More importantly, is there any chance that she and Edward can work through her distrust and his shame and guilt to get back their undying love, or does attention from a new love interest have Bella distracted?
Come on in to the world of Crooked Halo's and Ink Junkies, and find out!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 96581
[Report This] Published: November 19, 2009 Updated: April 15, 2012
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Attempting Redemption
I have been away from your story for a long time. I appreciated your character development in this chapter. I can't wait to see where you take Bella.
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: June 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Complicated
Yeah! Go girl! Alice and Bella might just whip the boy into shape yet!
Summary: 
Edward left Bella after she was almost attacked by Jasper at her birthday party. A few months later a tragic accident leave Bella all on her own. Will the return of the Cullen's be a good thing or will it just turn her world even more upside down?
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 34059
[Report This] Published: November 24, 2009 Updated: June 27, 2010
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Visions
I'm angry with Edward! He should have been the first one run to Bella's side!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Being Human
You can feel Bella's numbness of depression.
Summary:
Ascension of the Morning Star is a novel-length work that offers an alternative to Breaking Dawn. The work is represented in two books, Evening Star and Morning Star. Each book will appear as a separate story on this site. This is Part I.
In Part I: Evening Star, we find Bella and Edward preparing for their marriage. From engagement to wedding night the whirlwind of 55 planning days is a roller coaster of emotion, intrigue,and surprises for everyone. Exploring sexuality & intimacy, will Edward be ready? As the big day draws nearer, everyone realizes this is a good-bye, but not everyone realizes how true that is...
The facets of their transition to marriage are much the same as other young couples, however, they are not like any other young couples and they face a specific set of challenges on their way to the altar. Their journey will force the Cullen family to confront the demons of their hearts and rediscover their connection to humanity they thought to be lost forever. Even the humans find compelling forces of change in their lives because of this one strange human. A young woman's presence has altered the destiny of those she loves.
Post Eclipse, AU, Cannon Characters and Relationships. Mature for sexual situations.
The story of Ascension of the Morning Star continues with Part II. A major shift in tone, action, and impact from Part I. Hang on to your hats. It is a thunderbolt from the begining and rarely lets up. Whereas Part I is light and laughter, Part II is darkness and tears.
When Bella's transformation is not a dream come true, the future is anything but assured, yet, one thing is clear. By her existence, she will rock the foundations of both the human and mythical worlds. Although there are bright signs of possibility in unexpected places, but the question is simply this: Would you follow your destiny if you knew it would cost you your eternal life?
What if Bella isn't the only one changed by her choice to follow her Destiny?
Canon characters and relationships explored in greater detail. Contains family relationships, humor, mature situations, sensual exploration, action, and inference; horror, angst, hurt, gore, limited violence, loss, mystery, psychic phenomenon, and mythic/religious references.
Many opportunites to discuss the themes of this story...Come join the thread!
http://twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=8085
Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No
Word count: 297219
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: April 13, 2011
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: February 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: June 19: The Meadow
Tears, tears, and more tears! Beautiful! Author's Response: Oh, honey! I fear you have only begun to wash your soul with tears. If it helps, I weep still...almost every chapter. Thanks for writing!
Summary: Edward isn't fast enough to save Bella in Port Angeles. When faced with her death as the alternative, he decides to force her into a vampiric eternity. How will Bella handle being thrown into a new existence? Can the journey lead her to find herself, her mate....and her spine?
WARNING: This story contains scenes that involve violence against women and rape.
Categories: Twilight Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Word count: 10181
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: January 22, 2010
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Frightening! Author's Response: Chapter 1 was kind of scary! There's a little more of that coming up. A different kind of violence and mayham for the characters we all know and love!
Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
The fast pace adds to the tension! Author's Response: Thanks for the reivew! I appreciate it! The next chapter is in the works now. Trying to stick to the length but it has a lot that has to go into it.
Anyway, thanks again!
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