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Penname: Bart [ Contact]
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Summary: 
Ten years.
Ten years have passed since Edward left Bella that day in the woods. He doesn't know what happened to her. He doesn't know if she's happy. He doesn't know if she's had the life that he intended for her.
Alice has developed a new talent closely related to her precognition, and she finally prevails upon Edward to check up on Bella, for her and Esme's sake if nothing else.
And what they see will destroy the fragile peace that Edward has lived in for the past decade.
(Note: this is most definitely not a Bella/Jacob story. In fact, it is at its heart a Bella/Edward story.)
The rating is for violence and character death, not erotica. If you're looking for erotica... sorry. Wrong place.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes
Word count: 39016
[Report This] Published: July 27, 2009 Updated: February 27, 2010
Reviewer: Bart Signed 
Date: October 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
Powerful! Author's Response: thank you!
Summary: 
Edward lowered his eyes to his lap, obviously uncomfortable with my question. But there was nothing odd about it. It shouldn't cause tension, or reveal hidden secrets, or cause the amount of angst currently contorting his features.
I had simply asked him why he lived in the woods.
He grabbed a grape off the table, popped it in his mouth, and raised his head while he slowly chewed - scanning the trees ringing my office, as if he was searching for an answer to give me. I could see a faint blush to his cheek, and a hint of unshed tears in his crystalline green eyes. I could almost hear his heartbeat pick up speed as he finally turned to me. Closing his eyes for a moment he took a deep breath, willing himself to calm. Then his eyes snapped to my face and with renewed determination took another deep breath.
"Bella, I live there because I'm a vampire."
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Word count: 119614
[Report This] Published: August 02, 2009 Updated: March 09, 2010
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Playing House
I am very rarely surprised, but although I expected Edward's father, I wasn't expecting "that" Edward from Bella's childhood! Powerful plot twist! Author's Response: Thank you!!!!! I don't know how, but I managed to surprise everyone :-)
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Beginnings
Wow! A unique twist on Twilight lore! Your story has been a haven this evening! Your characterization of Edward touches the heart! Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: February 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: True Lies
A fascinating plot twist! What an incredible tale!! Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy it :-)
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: February 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Return to the Beginning
Again, WOW! I am so enjoying the growing relationship between Eli and his father. This plot has drawn me in! What were the vamps looking for and what pictures will we find in the camera? On to the next chapter I go! Author's Response: I can't tell you. if I told you I'd have to...
Hehehe
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: February 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Revelations
Oh my! 14 days! I'm not sure my nerves can handle the wait!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: February 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Endings and Beginnings
Didn't see this chapter coming! Wow!
Summary:  
Thank you, hellacullen, for the awesome banner!
Edward’s rebellious period didn’t last a few years; it lasted seventy. A solitary hunter on the fringe of society, he stumbles across a young woman praying. Can he seduce her away from everything she's ever known? And will he be willing to fight for Bella instead of fighting against her?
AU, a bit OOC, canon couples. Rated for lemons, violence and adult subject matter.
Banner by Zesty_T, awesome!
Banner by n7of9 Thank you!
Banner by readergoof, thank you!
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Word count: 129165
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2009 Updated: March 27, 2010
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Apologies to Isabella
I just found your story and am impressed! I have a feeling I will be up most of the night. 19 chapters to go! Yeah!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Choices
You write Carlisle so well!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions
OK! Nightmares if I do get to bed tonight!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Cygnus
The weaving of the Yeats poem into the plot couldn't be more perfect! Awesome!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The Caged Tiger
A priceless evening for our favorite couple!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 I Will Not Be Denied
Fun dialogue between Edward and Jasper!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Lazarus Rising
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Pouring Gas on the Fire
Fun gas station scene! I wonder if anything is going to happen with the shirt pocket!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The Falls
Poor Edward! What does he do now?
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Returning Home
Oh my! What a tangled web you are weaving!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Before The Fire
This story just gets better and better!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: January 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat
A precious conversation!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: February 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 1743
You let us feel their emotions! Powerful!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: February 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 The Whirlwind
Wow! Your descriptive writing style is so vivid, reading this chapter was like watching a 3D movie! Please, please, don't make us wait too long for what comes next!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: March 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 This Is My Blood
I hope Sergio had a snack!
Wow! Now what? Wounded wolves and arrogant Aro!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: March 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Gethsemane
Perfect!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: March 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 I Am Delivered
Perfect!
Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: March 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Amen
Thanks for sharing your gift of writing! Hopefully you have another tale to weave for us! Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I think I have a bit more up my sleeve!
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