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The Gift by akaibara Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Edward/Bella. Post Eclipse, mild spoilers for up to that point. Bella's POV. Edward plots a special wedding gift for Bella.

Disclaimer: Twilight and all associated characters and concepts are the property of Stephenie Meyer. I'm just borrowing them and wreaking mild havoc~


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1611
[Report This] Published: May 14, 2008 Updated: May 18, 2008


Reviewer: Bart Signed
Date: March 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Gift

A fun moment in time!

 
Summary: Feature

The Cullens throw a Halloween costume party and take Nessie trick-or-treating. Hilarity ensues. For the Missing Moments challenge.

Humor Winner

 

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 2646
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: August 18, 2008


Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Who's Been Sleeping in my Bed

Cute!  Thanks!

 
Summary:

"By the way," he murmured.  "Happy anniversary."

One year on, Edward has a surprise planned for Bella. Edward/Bella fluff, part of my Anniversaries series.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 8934
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: September 02, 2008


Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: The Meadow

How precious!



Author's Response:

:D

 
Summary:

Bella Swan is twenty-seven years old, newly single, and mom to an adorable Kindergarten student with a knack for accidents. On a typical, fall afternoon, she experiences the shock of her life during a casual conversation with her son. When an unexpected revelation leads to the most emotional reunion imaginable, how will Bella reconcile the path her life has taken with the past she never chose? Takes place nearly ten years post New Moon. Canon - AU. ExB


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 61197
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2008 Updated: November 27, 2011


Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yeah!  You are back!  I so love this story!  Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Your writing is such a gift!  Thanks for another chapter to my favorite story!

 
Music Lessons by locqua Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 497]
Summary:

Music can be quite the aphrodisiac, even for vampires. When Edward shares his passion for classical music with Bella, they discover a whole new world together just weeks before their nuptials. Set at the beginning of Breaking Dawn.

Winner of "Best use of Music as Inspiration - Complete" at the Twilight Indie Awards!

 

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Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 78097
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2008 Updated: April 14, 2009


Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Wagner

WOW!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Beethoven

What fun!  Thanks for the smiles!  Promise that you will continue with the music lessons after the wedding!  Besides enjoying the precious moments between Edward and Bella, I am learning so much about classical music!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Unfortunately, I won't be continuing the story into the wedding and honeymoon - in fact, it's almost over.  :(  But I'm glad you're enjoying the music - I always love to hear that from the readers!

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Grieg

Please don't keep us hanging for long!



Author's Response:

The next chapter is in the works right now - I'll update as soon as possible!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Rachmaninoff

Please, please, please give us a wedding and a honeymoon set to music!



Author's Response:

I'm sorry - I just realized that my end note was misleading people to believe I was writing the wedding/honeymoon.  I'm actually not...but if you'd like, you can bid on my author services during the "Support Stacie" auction, and if you win, I will happily write you the wedding and honeynoon! 

Again, I apologize for any confusion - thanks for reading!

 
Summary:

Fluffy one-shot between Edward and Bella featuring an unexpected event. 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2568
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2008 Updated: December 02, 2008


Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Soft and beatiful!  Thanks!

 
Building Blocks by Subtlynice Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

A few years after the end of Breaking Dawn, Rosalie has an announcement to make. Not everyone is thrilled by what she has to say…


E/B pointless fluff. Post-BD. Canon pairings.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3490
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2008 Updated: December 03, 2008


Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Building Blocks

You reminded me that I need build more blocks with my hubby!  Thanks!



Author's Response:

LOL.  I kinda love the title of this one, which is wierd because the title and ending of this story came to me at the last minute, just before it was posted.  Glad you liked, anyway! x

 
Summary:

What if Alice had met Bella first?


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 7833
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2008 Updated: December 19, 2008


Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Cracked-Up Pixie

cute

 
Thy Beauty by Subtlynice Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 363]
Summary:

Thy Beauty banner by Anne Cullen

Death, that hath suck'd the honey of thy breath, hath had no power yet upon thy beauty.
Thou art not conquer'd; beauty's ensign yet, is crimson in thy lips and in thy cheeks, and death's pale flag is not advanced there.

Edward's POV in Volterra, just moments before he takes his first steps towards the sunlight. Will include the reunion between Edward and Bella, the conference with the Volturi, 'The Truth' and the vote, all from Edward's perspective.

Winner of two Twilighted Teen awards.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Heidi, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 73303
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2008 Updated: August 27, 2009


Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Mortal Fear

You are a very gifted writer!  Thanks for sharing your talents!  Please give us more of your dynamic characterization!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing and rating!  I'm so glad you thought it was good, I was a bit worried with this chapter... I'll be sure to update with the next chapter as soon as possible. ;)

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue

Excellant!



Author's Response:

:)

 
Summary:

AU. Based off the events in the beginning of New Moon. Edward did not tell the truth when he left Bella in the woods five years ago. Struggling to make a life without him, Bella finds herself still alone in an entirely different forest. But what happens if they are accidentally reunited? What was the lie that Edward told?  What will Bella do when she finds out?  Rated NC-17 for language and sexual situations


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 119106
[Report This] Published: December 18, 2008 Updated: December 28, 2010


Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Crouching Bella, Hidden Edward

Fun chapter title!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Moonlight Sonata

You have taken over a year of your time weaving this beautiful tale giving me a delightful winter day of romantic escape!  Thank you for sharing your time and talents with me!  

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Showdown at the Cullen Corral

CUTE!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: La Belle Dame Sans Merci

I am loving this tale!  It is snowing outside, I am drinking soup, and am transported by your words!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Pandora

Well done!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Resurrection of Lazarus

Yeah!  Alice!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Intermission: Electrocution

You don't disappoint!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Shangri-La

Alice killed Victoria!  Can't wait to hear the story!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Of Revelations, and Resolutions

I haven't moved from my computer all morning!  I really should at least get up and make the bed, but... I can't wait to see what happens to poor Eddie in the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Never Cry Wolf

I love Jake! 

 
Reviewer: Bart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Icarus I Have Loved

Let me guess!  You teach literature!  Your students are lucky to have you in their lives!

 




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