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Summary: Feature

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This is Edward's side of the bedroom reunion scene in eclipse (Chapter 8: Temper, pages 185-195).

Many thanks to psymom and MarcyJ for very thorough and extremely helpful betas - they're amazing!

As usual, all the regular disclaimers apply: Stephenie Meyer owns all things twilight; no money is being made from this work; and absolutely no copyright infringement is intended. The dialog from eclipse here is copied only for clarity. Thanks to Stephenie for creating such wonderful characters!

One other note: I am a member of team Switzerland - I do not dislike Jacob, so don't be upset with me. Edward, on the other hand, has his own opinions...

In Edward's words...


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Totality
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 7339
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2008 Updated: April 18, 2008


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed
Date: July 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Teasing

AWESOME LUV IT MORE PLEASE ! Will you write other stories from Edward's point of view?

Author's Response:

I've started teh proposal scene, and am working on more of New Moon from EPOV.  Thanks so much for the review!

blondie

 
first light by blondie Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 117]
Summary:

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Bella and Edward have faced nearly every obstacle imaginable in their quest to be together, and yet have overcome them all.  Now they face what may be their greatest challenge:  Marriage.  As promises are fulfilled and relationships change, Bella and Edward try and reach the fairy tale ending that true love should bring.  One threat still remains and now it hangs over the entire Cullen family.  Bella is the key to protecting the family; but can she find enough control in time to save them?

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Billy, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Gianna, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Marcus, Mike, Phil, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 66837
[Report This] Published: May 08, 2008 Updated: August 31, 2008


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed
Date: August 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Thirst

I love it! You must update! DEADPAN: Seriously, you have to.

Author's Response:

I'm in the process of doing a quick edit and putting up the rest of the chapters... hopefully tonight and tomorrow. 8-)

You won't have to wait long!

blondie (I should change my name to Rosalie...)

 
Summary: After Twilight, Bella spends the happiest summer of her life with Edward. What did they do? Lots of dating!
Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 30793
[Report This] Published: May 08, 2008 Updated: August 28, 2008


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed
Date: August 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

This is really great you must continue! Just cause Bella has the flu does not mean no more dates! You're on a roll here!

 
Summary:

Edward discovers that Bella has a talent he didn’t know about. He makes the mistake of telling Emmett and Jasper, who find great humor in it. Will Bella -- or Edward -- ever live it down?

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Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 8781
[Report This] Published: May 14, 2008 Updated: October 21, 2008


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed
Date: August 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Emmett!

Ooh Is Emmett ever... devious! Great job. However, i suggest you update this. I read this motns ago, hoping for you to update this, and you have to! Don't leave your fans hanging at the edge. Remeber that! We are humans and ... I really need to know what happens next! Why are they going shopping? Will bella be able to blow again? Why is Emmett so MEAN? WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE THIS? Its MADNESS! I feel TORTURED! Any ways, good story :) Sorry for being so dramatic! Seriously, it's killing me on the inside. I have to know what happens next!

 
Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed
Date: August 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Explosion

I cannot wait! thank you x 100 for posting up a new chapter. sorry about my previous comment.  like i tell the others:Keep on writing.

 
Juxtaposition by akaibara Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

Edward/Bella. Edward POV. Reality turns on its ear and you have no choice but to forget everything you think you know about Twilight. Is it AU? I guess you'll just have to read to find out.

Disclaimer: Twilight and all associated characters and concepts are the property of Stephenie Meyer. I'm just borrowing them and wreaking mild havoc~


Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 19062
[Report This] Published: May 14, 2008 Updated: June 21, 2008


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed
Date: July 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: An Inconvenient Truth

Great story! Will you add more chapters?

Author's Response: Chapter 15 is the end. They should be all up there. =)

 
Summary: Bella has a nightmare about someone other than Edward chasing her.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 449
[Report This] Published: May 17, 2008 Updated: May 23, 2008


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed
Date: July 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice

 

 
Summary:

Did you ever wonder what the other Fork High Schoolers must have been thinking as Jacob Black walked onto the school compound like a James Dean wannabe? Did they think it was a gang war? A teenage abuse ring? Or just a normal love triangle, this is my take.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Edward, Eric, Jacob, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 4207
[Report This] Published: May 22, 2008 Updated: July 20, 2008


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed
Date: July 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ooh fiesty! Keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

 
Summary:
"This is what his love did to her. Just when it all seemed remotely possible—normal, even—something happened to make it all too much. Too good. As the small, cruel voice in her head began to say, 'Too good to be true,' she felt a pair of now-familiar arms envelop her." This fluffy little one-shot takes place during Bella and Edward's visit to see Renee. I'm not sure if it can/should be categorized as AU.   Disclaimer: I do not own Twilight, but I do own a grey scarf. 
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3015
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2008 Updated: May 29, 2008


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed
Date: July 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Intertwined

What a great story

 

 
Under Arrest by vjgm Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary: Feature

An add-on to Family Therapy - Cullen Style. Read Family Therapy FIRST!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 3919
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2008 Updated: May 29, 2008


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed
Date: July 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Rosalie

OMG! That was HILARIOUS

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen, just finished his senior year in highschool, decides to spend his summer vacation in Phoenix, Arizona. He's not expecting much - all he wants is to get away from the gossiping residents of Forks. He's certainly not expecting the beautiful girl next door. But can he trust her? After he's already been hurt once? And how much can three little months really change? AU All Human. Canon pairings.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 30394
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2008 Updated: February 21, 2009


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed
Date: August 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Interrogations

Well, what does the little pixie have in mind HMMMM..... Anyway, great story. Thank you for updating, blah, blah, blah, and the usual good stuff people say.

 
My Immortal by Eclipse Rated: PG starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Daddy, close the door and leave this room. Your daughter is gone, wandering after her fickle Romeo. She isn’t coming back. Meet your new child, this ghost. She will try to smile, but she will fail.


A four-piece exploration in Bella's mindset in New Moon and consequences that stem from it.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1728
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2008 Updated: June 01, 2008


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: My Immortal

I love it. It's so sad.

 
Resistance by Cocoa Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Edward's POV from the end of Eclispe at the point where he takes Bella to the Meadow.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2097
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2008 Updated: June 05, 2008


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed
Date: July 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Resistance

Great Job

 
Summary:

Edward’s out hunting. Alice is on her way over to see Bella, but leaves a cryptic message ordering Bella to stay inside the house. Alice’s visions can spot danger before it happens…and of course, Bella always does what she’s told. Doesn’t she?

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 74273
[Report This] Published: June 09, 2008 Updated: August 29, 2008


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed
Date: July 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: Don't cry, sweetheart

This is a great story!

 

 
Summary:

Bella Swan is attending Hogwarts, and Dumbledore has warned of attacks on the students. These attacks are invisible... and they don't leave any part of the bodies behind... just a note. Between gaining new friends, and making sure she doesn't get attacked... who has time for adventure?


Categories: Crossover Characters: Angela, Bella, Billy, Charlie, Edward, Jacob, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 8606
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2008 Updated: July 10, 2009


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed
Date: July 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Traits

Great! I had the same idea too! I imagined Bella going to Hogwarts and then moving to Forks pretending to be a Muggle. it's a series. You are welcome to add to it if you like!

Author's Response: Awesome! Is it new? I must\'ve missed it haha. Thanks sooo much for youre reveiw! :)

 
Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed
Date: August 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 The Story

OMG I've been waiting months for thid! Please remeber to update this! Is Edward coming to the sotry too? And the other Cullens? Volturi too? Are you going to inclue Harry, Hermione, and Ron? If so, that'd be great! Will this be like a witch/vampire story? (Sorry for all the qeustions!) I really like this story and how it's going! Oh and please ignore my other comment! It turns out it isnt a series! Oops! i should fix that!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for this reveiw! It almost made me tear up! yes, Edward is coming into the story (of course haha it wouldn\'t be worth reading or writing without Edward!) as for the rest of the questions... you\'ll find out soon I hope! :)\r\nYes, I am trying to make it a series, but as soon as I posted the first chapter, I realized that I hadn\'t clicked add series... darn, do you know how I can fix that? I may have to delete the whole story and just repost the chapters... \r\nAgain thanks for the reveiw!!! :)

 
Summary:

What if Edward had gotten to Port Angeles too late and was faced with Bella begging him to do everything in his power to save her? She knows he has the power no one else does...what will he do? One night changes everything.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 38841
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2008 Updated: April 30, 2009


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed
Date: July 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Piano Lessons

Excellent

 
Fear by NoMoreThanUsual Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 128]
Summary:

Bella’s courage does have its limits.   The day Edward was dreading – the day in which Bella runs away screaming – has finally come.  Jasper’s POV and Edward’s POV.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Missing Pages Series
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3702
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2008 Updated: June 21, 2008


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed
Date: July 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice story

Author's Response: Thanks!

 
Summary:

When an assumed vampire shows up on the beaches of La Push, all hell is about to break loose. In a fiery frenzy the Quileute's confront the Cullen's, ready to go to war. But, this creature is unlike anything the Cullen's have ever seen, and certainly not one of them. Confronted with a mysterious creature the Quileutes and the Cullen's attempt to handle the situation. But how will Jacob's aching heart handle this newcomer?


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 11064
[Report This] Published: July 02, 2008 Updated: December 27, 2008


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Bleeding Love

What a cliff hanger!

Author's Response: Thanks! I enjoy cliff-hangers lol. I'm finishing chapter three today, so it should be posted soon.

 
Lullabies Go On by jliane Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 146]
Summary: Edward lost his passion for music a long time ago. Bella is fighting to keep her music alive. Can the two of them overcome the odds and see what they could have together?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 20530
[Report This] Published: July 15, 2008 Updated: July 31, 2008


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three

I love this! Update more often! That was funny when Edward said 'Your adroable when you're upset

 
Summary:

 

Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more.  As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow.  Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted.  Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse.  J/B at first, but eventually E/B. 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed
Date: August 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Irresponsible

I really like how this is going! Wait, what ot happen to Bella? Did she trip or fall? I don't understand

Author's Response: Bella was hopping up and down at the end of the dock, trying to take the brace off of her foot.  Then, she slipped and lost her balance.  Her feet went up in the air and her head would've hit the dock if Edward hadn't caught her.  Sorry if that wasn't clear!

 
Summary: After getting out of Phoenix, Bella is a successful editor in the Uptown life of New York. Just when she thought she had her life completely figured out, she comes across a dazzling taxi driver.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 13084
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: August 15, 2008


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Mirror

Edward a TAXI driver?! Wow, BIG change! I like how this is going. Please update. And is ALice & Rosalie included in this story? If so, what are they? Is ALice Bella's friend, Edward's cousin or sister? SOme stories change it up. Anyway, this FANTASTIC!

Author's Response:

Haha yes, I'm tired of Edward always being the famous musican, doctor, etc. Many, many updates are on the way soon. ;P

To answer your questions, Alice and Rosalie are in this story along with Jasper and Emmett.

Hmm, I hope this won't spoil to much to explain their connections. I'll say that it is already AlicexJasper and RosaliexEmmett. Bella doesn't know Alice and Jasper yet, but Rosalie and Emmett are friends from college. That's all I'm gonna say for now. :P 

 
Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed
Date: August 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Horses

OMG don;t leave us hanging! What did she drop? I'm guesssing cell phone. Anyway, great story!

 
Selfish by MizzB Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 145]
Summary:

“There is no way Bella is going to fall for you, Edward,” Emmett said with a laugh. “Wanna bet on it?” was Edward’s cocky reply. It started off as a bet but when he finds himself falling for her things begin to get complicated.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 46880
[Report This] Published: July 23, 2008 Updated: March 06, 2009


Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Encounters

OMG I luv it! More please!

 
Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire Signed
Date: July 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Encounters

I love it!

 




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