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Betrayal by rozebudz Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 36]
Summary: Feature

What really happened on the return journey back to Forks after Edward and Bella's honeymoon? How did Edward deal with the fact that Bella wanted to keep the baby?

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Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3517
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: August 18, 2008


Reviewer: lovealways567 Signed
Date: March 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, I have to say, I haven't read a better story that fills in that part of the story than yours.  I absolutely love it!  I've read other versions, but this is definitely my favorite.  Thanks for posting!

 
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*An explanation for my recent behavior*

So... it's been a while.  I'M SO SORRY!  I started a new AU-H fic called Primary Colors and it has taken over my fic-writing life.  I know you're never supposed to do that.  It's not cool to start a new story when you already have one going, it's not fair and people hate it.  I'm sorry that I have no self-control, I'm sorry I left you hanging.

The good news is that I AM going to finish this story.  I'm not giving it up.  I have it mapped out in my head and it's going to happen.  I just can't seem to focus on it and my writing really, really, really, sucks when I try to force it.  Primary Colors is just pouring out right now, so I'm taking advantage of that.  I really am sorry.  I've been consumed with guilt over this.  I hope you won't hate me, and I hope you'll still be here when I come back.  If you delete this fic from your favorites list right now I'll completely understand.  Please accept this apology.  Thank you so much for reading, have an excellent twilight. :)

It's page 449 of New Moon.   Bella is running across the plaza in Italy.  She has to get to Edward before the clock chimes.  Before the Volturi do.  His life depends on it. 

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This time Bella stumbles and doesn't get there in time.  What will happen to Edward now?  Will Alice make it out of Volterra and keep her promise to Jasper?  Will Bella be able to survive, thinking she's failed... alone in Volterra?

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Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 38464
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2008 Updated: May 10, 2009


Reviewer: lovealways567 Signed
Date: May 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

You rock...Big time!  I have to say, I was just as disappointed with Stephenie's ending in New Moon in which Bella gave in so easily.  I'm not criticizing Stephenie's writing.  She's a brilliant writer, but that part-I don't know.  It just didn't resonate with me.  Your ending, I absolutely love.  Keep writing!  I can't wait to read more!





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