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Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more.  As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow.  Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted.  Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse.  J/B at first, but eventually E/B. 


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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 20, 2009

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: May 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Sixty Seconds

yeah i already told you that on for some of the last other chapters but here i go again...i still think bella isn't innocent as well and i still think that she's geeting a bit over her head...i know that sounds like i'm a total bitch. but okay we get it he lied but he wanted to keep her safe as well which is understandbly considering how someone elso who also claims to love her attacked her - meaning, yeah if you have such powers you can slip and hurt someone you love. so what's better - being lied to or being actually crushed? i mean, don't get me wrong, i totally get that she's in a horrible hurtful situation...but somehow along the way she got herself in's not like some shit like that wasn't coming a long way...i really like this story but to be honest, bella gets kinda on my nerves, she's (to me at least) kinda self-righteous (and now i really feel like an unsensitive bitch for saying that)...

sorry for the rambling and ranting! nice to see you're still there :)

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: May 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Tightrope

thank you! obviously i belong to the second group you mentioned and i loved that kiss...maybe because i think 34 chapters for a kiss are hell of a lot time and maybe because i am selfish and wanted that kiss. because i honestly can't hurt anymore that much because of a fanfic (and that is a hidden compliment for you and your writing skill!) ... yeah and i think edward and bella deserve to stop hurting and they're cut some slack...and if someone should suffer any longer it's jacob...okay i've said all i wanted to say! sorry again that my review last time was all ranting! i hope this one is better! as i said: go kiss go! (don't apologize for that kiss! :))

Lunière by SiDEADde Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 176]

TW/MS Alice's POV. Canon "Where Jasper and I were halves of the same whole, Edward and I were the same half. We understood each other more than the family understood us."

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Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 61922
[Report This] Published: August 08, 2008 Updated: September 14, 2009

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: March 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: When All Else Fails, Go Home

i really love this story and that it's written from alice pov! i especially love the relationship and bond edward and alice share! keep doing such a great job! i can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Alice is my favorite; I had always wanted to know what was going on in her head during Twilight.  Since there was no definitive word...I made up my own. =)



Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: May 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Angst

i just read it again and wanted to tell you so, even though i know i alrady left a review (that's why i review on another chapter) *blushes* i just really think you deserve more reviews! and someone to remind you that people ae still interested and anxiously waiting for an update cause this fic is really one of the best (well at least it is to me since i love how you portay alice and edward - how both of them feel and how well they understand each other...even though i always tend to be more on edwards side in conflict situations but i guess that i do have in common with alice again) anyways just wanted to say that! don't keep us waiting too much longer :)

Author's Response:


I am update fail.  It's not for lack of trying though.  Bit off a bit more than I could chew and now I'm paying the piper. (Could a throw a few more cliches in there?)  I really appreciate you waiting and being patient and especially being so supportive because that's really what my motivation is right now!


I really am glad you enoyed the story so far and I hope I don't keep you waiting much longer. 

Thanks for taking the time to review again!

Secret by Twilighter620 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 223]

As crime tarnishes the image of Seattle, Edward Masen lives as the disillusioned, hot-shot, Lieutenant of the Seattle Police Department's S.W.A.T. team. He soon realizes his fascination with the Seattle Weekly Journal's investigative reporter Isabella Woods - but all is not as it seems with Ms. Woods and her identity. Will Edward be able to change his ways and finally fall in love in a city that's tumbling to pieces?

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 111243
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: May 27, 2009

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: April 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

don't understand bella - never will...she should make up her mind and not string along other people...edward makes me sad...

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: May 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19

yeah an update! it's been quite some time...i really feel for edward (but i'm just a sucker for depressed/sullen edward, so i'm biased)! and i really love his pov! hope to read more soon!

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: May 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 20

i loved the bracelet scene!

A Person of Worth by tnuccio Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 457]

Just a small town girl, livin' in a lonely world
She took the midnight train goin' anywhere
Just a city boy, born and raised in south Detroit
He took the midnight train goin' anywhere

After multiple chance encounters can two strangers find their missing pieces within each other?

Or will their past mistakes hold them back? 


Two strangers passing in the night, searching for nothing, but maybe finding everything. 


A story of learning to trust and forgive, finding a way to risk opening yourself up. 


Inspired by Journey's song Don't Stop Believing.


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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 107099
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2008 Updated: July 10, 2011

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: March 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Pie's and Promises

i really like this one - and i absolutly love how edward tries so hard and has so sweet ideas! and i love hope - she's special...and i love how she challenges edward and he in turn takes care of her - not just as a doctor but as a friend. i hope she holds on for a long time - i can't imagine how devastated edward will be...

anyway, love the pie-idea - so cute! musical,sweet but broken edward is absolutely adorable :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Edward is trying hard, that's for sure and he isn't going anywhere!

Hope is ever so special, I love her to death.

I'm glad you're liking the story!  That makes me happy!

Thanks for taking the time to drop me a note!

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Flight of the Blackbird

still there, still loving it...makes me happy and makes me sad! but i loved it anyway!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  I'm glad you're still here and still reading.

Thank you for your review and for sticking with me!


Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: September 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Amazing Grace

you're back!!!! yay!

Author's Response:


Thank you!  I'm glad you liked the update!  I'm hoping the next chapter will have a quick turn around!


Edward is running from home, tired and lost he saves a beautiful hitchhiker from a terrible fate. They decide to travel the road together. Unknown to them there is a trail of brutal murders left in their wake.  The killer is closer to them than they think.  Lemons in future chapters

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 89315
[Report This] Published: December 03, 2008 Updated: August 01, 2010

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: In You I Trust

i really love this fic - edward & bella - both seen so incabable of taking care of themselves -'s a great storyline! and i love that alice is supporting those two! hope to read more soon! it's one of my favorites...what can i say, i'm a sucker for broken e and b fixing and taking care of themselves...e and b against the world (but  support of others is lovely) :)

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Vegas, baby

yay!!!!!!!!! an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you don't know how happy i am about this! loved it!

Out of Her Head by Blue25 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2754]

Bella Swan moves cross country to take a teaching job, trying to escape the man who broke her heart. Edward Cullen is the school's music teacher with secrets of his own. Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together trying to work through their issues and unexpected feelings for each other.




Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 272412
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2009 Updated: June 26, 2009

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: May 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

oh please, please don't let edward make the same mistake that his family has done with him! please!!!! that actually would kill me (well, okay, obviously i'm exaggerating...but you know what i mean!) pleas let him be so mad because he's mad at emmett and aro etc. for judging her...pretty please...i think they both should finally stand by one another...b/e against the world (well with a little help of papa charlie)! i don't think there can be a realistic happy ending if edward doesn't believe in bella's innocence - how could she marry someone who didn't stand by her in her dark(est) hour? especcially if that someone was exactly in the same position and knows how it feels to be judged unjustly...

as for alice - omg, i hope she's going to fine!


Form 1040 by giselle Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 71]

Because when you're immortal, the only certainty is taxes...

Carlisle has a moment alone with his granddaughter while getting some home office work taken care of. Takes place 7 months post-BD (in April, of course...)

A long one-shot; Carlisle's POV



Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Carlisle, Renesmee
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3802
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2009 Updated: January 28, 2009

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: March 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Form 1040 - One Shot

ahh just like all your other stories heartbreakingly beautiful! and i love that renesmee has such a bond with carlisle and edward - i was kinda sad that she didn't seem to have it in the books...but that's why i love stories like this! :)

and yes, i thought as well that being an immortal must include one hell of bureaucracy...

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I really enjoyed filling in Renesmee's relataionship with her father and grandfather. It would no doubt exist, and I don't blame Bella for not spending time thinking about it--but, I do like to fill those sorts of holes. :)  And for some reason I *love* thinking about how the Cullens manage their charade, and I work those ideas in wherever I can. I'm glad you enjoyed it.


After her father dies, Bella Swan is thrown back into the arms of the family she believed she never really left. Sometimes the worst events become the best opportunties for change. AU-Human, BxE. Rated for language.

Nominated, Winter 2010 Eddies: Mid-Length Fiction. A million and a half thank yous!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 40066
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2009 Updated: May 27, 2009

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: March 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i do like your story, but honestly i hate bella a bit right now...i mean i get that she's sad and has problems but honestly alice has a point...and yes she's hurting but i bet edward's hurting too, and she's not making this a bit better for him - honestly i'd be in pieces right now if i were edward...he's really fucking understanding and she just keeps pulling that crap. like what was that with the call? i mean clearly he has to get on with his life as well... so she's allowed to go back to work and do her stuff but he should wait for her, after all she doesn't even talk with him. sorry if i'm based and obviously i do tend to edward - call me insensitive and non-understanding ;)...sorry! i hope you don't get this wrong! i really like your story and writing...and you're doing a good work if you get me this much worked up over a story :)

Author's Response:

No, no! I appreciate your thoughts; I ENJOY it when people have opinions on my stories! The thing is that we're only getting Bella's side of the story. I know what Edward is doing, and I've got some secrets as far as he's concerned. Edward is patient, but he also has Alice and his parents to confide/yell in/at; we're not seeing his conversations with them. We know he can get just as jealous and angry as Jacob; he had that conversation on the phone, remember? And as far as Bella is concerned ... I really want her to make the mistakes that Edward makes in NM; namely that she tries to make a decision without considering what Edward really needs. It's egoism at it's purist form; doing something because you think that's what's best for them. That's Bella's tragic flaw in this mess, and Alice really hit the nail on the head in this chapter. So everything you said is dead on - these characters have to make some changes to every part of their relationship. You aren't insensitive at ALL - your thoughts are EXACTLY what mine are on the subject ... except I know a little bit more about Edward's deal. :) Thank you so much for sharing; I appreciate absolutely everything!

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: March 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i still don't like her very much (i'm totally on team edward even though i know he has faults etc. but he's still hurting as well...and why is it so hard to tell him what she needs and wants it's not like he can read HER mind...and why does she always end things (or phonecalls) if things turn out not to be how she envisioned them to be - i mean honestly her moodswings must give him whiplash)...yeah i'm stubborn like that - she has to do more than that to gain my love back (which i can assure is there - really, i do love that girl, just not right now)...but i seriously can't take jacob - does he always have to intrude? anyways, thanks for being so understanding and not taking my last comment the wrong way!!! i really think you're a great writer and doing an amazing job with this!

Author's Response:

Hah hah. If the characters were conflict-less we wouldn't have a story; that's why I don't take your comments as aggressive or mean! If I'm making you really care about them (or really hate them), I'm doing my job! :)  Everyone in this story has a fault, and it's come about because of this one little arrest incident. Bella is insecure and defines herself by her relationship with Edward; Edward is a little too patient with her - he's letting her figure things out because she's always needed him to be the silent protector, but what she really needs is for him to assert what he wants. Jake is ruled by his guilt, and it makes him do things that he wouldn't normally do because, deep down, all he can think about when it comes to Bella is that he screwed her royally. And Charlie was too passive; his aggressive action against Edward made him second-guess his place in Bella's life. I kind of think he gave up that day she graduated from med school. So ALL of the characters have flaws, and ALL of them have to learn to get over the incident. :D Thank you for commenting; please, please, feel free to rant all you want! I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know your thoughts!

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: March 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

fucking finally!!!!

Author's Response:

AH HA HA. I thought about you, when I sent this story off to be validated! :D

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: March 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

ahhhh lovely!!!!

and watermelon martinis sound great...or maybe a sexon the beach...? hmmm

Author's Response:

Oooh. A sex on the beach sounds good. Both kinds. Still involving RPattz. :)

Thank you!

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: April 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

ah great! finally she sees the light...:)

Author's Response:

Indeed! Yay! Thank you for reading; I very much appreciate it! :)

Collide by Martinibaby1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1057]

As usual, Bella is late for work and as she crosses the street -without looking-, a cycling music teacher, better know as Edward Cullen, must do all he can to avoid her. But the collision that follows will change their lives for good. All human and AU.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Tanya
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 137633
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2009 Updated: January 12, 2010

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: April 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Mojitos and Muses

stop being silly and post the update!!! :)

Author's Response:

OKay *makes note and stops being silly*

The next chapter is waiting to get accepted by my beta!

Ithaca is Gorges by giselle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 887]

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After the Cullens leave Forks and make the move to New York, Carlisle fights to keep his family together as Edward's pain threatens to tear them apart. Ithaca is the story of a son's quest, a father's love, and the unique family struggling to stand behind them both...

This is the Cullens' New Moon.



Ithaca starts one month into the Cullens' time away from Bella, and will follow New Moon to its end. Carlisle and Edward narrate in alternating chapters. Follows all known canon.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Carlisle, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 118422
[Report This] Published: February 19, 2009 Updated: December 07, 2009

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: March 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: The One Option Left

I'm enjoying this very much!!!! the story made it to my favorites - just so you know :) i can't understand why there aren't more reviews...

anyways, i really enjoy your portrait of edwards and carliles' relationship and the bond they share. it broke my heart when you wrote about esme asking carliles to send edward away, especially when carliles realizes that edward was there first - even though his love hasn't been romantic. i love the conflict all characters - but esp. edward and carliles - are feeling. edward hurting very much himself, but even more so because he can't bear to see those he loves being hurt because of him; carliles because he has to think of his whole family and what is good for them and his unique love to his first child that is - at least in my eyes - a bit stronger, or maybe stronger is the wrong word, deeper maybe than the love he has for his other children.

also i like that alice is on his side... i read another review where somebody pointed out how often alice seems to be rather 'against' edward - i think the person who made this review had a point! alice and edward share a strong bond (also because they have special talents) and they're their own favorite siblings - of course alice would support her favorite brother. maybe she wouldn't see eye to eye with him but she would anyway be there for him because that's what you do when you love...

anyway, i can't wait to see how this is progressing! i'm really looking forward to when edward is throwing away his cell or his departure to volterra and of course his return - especially since i can't wait to read carliles' reaction to all those events! i feel we got too little of him (and his bond to edward) in the books and i'm so grateful that you paint a believable picture for me!

also i want to compliment your writing - it's really nicely done. you capture moods and thoughts so well and i never feel confused or cut off...i love your portrayals and hope for more!

now i'm done with my ramblings - i think that might have been the longest review i ever did :)

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for taking the time to write such a lengthy review! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story and the conflicts between the characters. New Moon is really a book about internal conflict, and so I think it only makes sense that the Cullens' side of the story is about the same thing. The relationship between Carlisle and Edward is the central theme around which Ithaca revolves, so a lot more is coming on that front. (And I like the word "deeper" to describe it in relationship to the love he has for the others.) I've started to outline the Volterra chapters, as I think of them, and I *think* all of you who are looking forward to them will be pleased. But they're a ways down the line--there's a lot more to break and develop between now and then!

Thank you for your compliments as well! I hope you continue to enjoy what comes.   

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: March 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: C. C.

oh i absolutely adore this story and you can't possibly imagine how happy it made e to see you uodated!

i love the explanation for carlisle password! and i can't wait to read more!!!

i know this review isn't really long and lacking but it's 2 am in europe - and i'm just too tired toexpress myself in proper english...but rest assured i shall review more profundly the next time :)

great job! this is honestly my favorite right now :)

Author's Response:

I'm so glad to hear you're enjoying this! Profundity runs a distanct second to sincerity, and it is the sincerity that I appreciate. I'm glad you liked the password; that little bit was something I desperately wanted to work in and finally found a natural place to put it. Thank you for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: April 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: What We Have Left Undone

i love it every time you post an update!!! right now it's hard for me to write exactly how i feel - i just don't know what to write...i'm not sooo fond of rose but that's because i biased and i'd never say a bad word about edward (that's wrong, i know - but still)...amd i miss (of course) carlisle/dward interaction since i love them together - but i know that's not gonna happen someday day soon, so i'm doing with the thoughts they're having about the other :) i'd love to read more c/a since i think they think kinda along the same lines concerning edward (they love him to pieces and are (almost) always on his side)

i enjoy this fic immensly and am waiting impatiently for the next update!

Author's Response:

Hee. We've been discussing the likeable/unlikable nature of Rosalie over on the Ithaca board. The ways in which she is a terrific character because she is so strong and up front about her feelings, but of course this creates a certain abrasiveness that makes her difficult. There's a little Carlisle/Edward interaction due up in Chapter 8, and I hope it fits the bill. And Carlisle and Alice are on deck for further down the line, too. Glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for taking the time to review yet again.

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: April 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Intent to Kill

ahhh an edward/carlisle interaction! loved it - you really could feel how both of them felt - how both wanted to be together... i'm really impressed with the diary - and carlisle's thoughts on esmes' first husband - seems really fitting and kinda links c and e together again (i'm not sure that makes sense to you but ähm yeah...)

i also enjoyed that edward admits that he doesn't really know what he's doing in chasing victoria - that he doubts the iminent danger for bella. that adds to show his inner turmoil and his's all very visible and i think you picture it perfectly by not making it too dramatic (like other writers do at times - you know by giving their character loud exclamations followed by lots of !!!! and very dramatic choice of words) - no, you paint his depression and melancholy (and confusion) with so modest words and pictures that it seems incredibly believable. you might have noticed, i'm often a fan of "less is more".

i'm really excited to see what peter and charlotte have in store for the storyline! and i can't wait for another carlisle pov. it's not that i like his pov more than edwards but i guess i love to read about edward in c's pov (since, i have to admit, i love how c describes e and how lovingly and adoringly he does so and well i'm just a sucker for edward ;p)! anyway, i'd love to have a c/a or any other sibling moment (except rose...) but well i'm sure whatever you're presenting i'm surely going to love!

so keep up the good work - i can't wait for more! each new chapter proves me once again why this story is on my favorite list :)

Author's Response:

Haha. I was so happy to be able to tell you in my reply to your Chapter 7 review that there would be an E/C interaction in Ch. 8. I'm glad you like the journal--and yes, C & E have a lot in common on a number of fronts. And *thank you* for your compliments on the writing. I tend toward trying to key in on the one or two details that will convey what I'm looking for rather than beating the reader over the head with it. Glad it's reading well.

The next couple of chapters should be pretty fun. I'm looking forward to Peter and Charlotte, too. And there will be an interaction with a Cullen sibling in the next chapter--but it's not one that even I was expecting in the scene, so...chew on that. :)  So glad to hear you're enjoying it, and thanks for taking the time to leave such a long review. Totally makes my day. --g

Reviewer: UrbanAngel Signed
Date: October 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: The Fatted Calf

ahhhh finally!!!! it was soooo great! really! and the hug in bellas room...and...and... i'm a bit overwhelmed right now...not quite sure if i'm still feeling sad for edward (cause carlisles description from the airport was heartwrenching) or happy that e and c are finally together again! okay, more later on...i'm a bit speechless right now! hugs nora



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