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Summary: Edward's family hire Bella Swan to break the heartbreaker's heart in hopes to have him see the error of his womanizing ways. Bella realizes that they have a little too much in common and is having a little too much fun with this subject. EXB Lots of lemons later.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes
Word count: 322353
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2008 Updated: September 13, 2011
Reviewer: stockholmgirl Signed
Date: May 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Assignments & Introductions
Hi! I Love love love your story, but there is just one REALLY Big mistake you put in there:
After the concert at Thanksgiving, there is this passage:
My lease was ending in February.
Hopefully, by then we could make our engagement official.
For now, she cleared out three drawers and a third of her closet. I couldn’t ask for more.
Bella’s parents weren’t able to join us. Jordan was visiting with Julie’s family for Thanksgiving.
Uhm, i guess that Bella's parents weren't able to join them because they're already both DEAD?
I just laughed when i read this, but I think you should correct it ?
Author's Response: You're right. At the time I was also doing a thanksgiving scene for my other story where Bella's parents were alive. I got them confused for a moment. I thought I fixed it but I must have just done it on fanfiction. Thank you very much for pointing that out.
Check out the forum, I'm posting a couple of teasers.
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Summary: Edward Cullen made Bella Swan’s life a living hell from age ten to twelve. Finally fed up with the torment and teasing, she moved to Phoenix. Now she’s seventeen, beautiful, and has a new sense of confidence. When her mother sends her back to Forks for her senior year, she is determined to shake things up. 
NC-17 for sexuality, underage drinking, and language. OOC, just to be safe. Some canon pairings, some absolutely the opposite.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Word count: 55461
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2009
Reviewer: stockholmgirl Signed
Date: May 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Five Years Ago to the Present
Ooh man, I really love this fanfic! I've always been a big Jasper/Bella shipper, and this just brings music to my ears.
However, I was just wondering about this... Strange little me:
You let Bella and Jasper have unprotected sex? and after Edward brings Bella back to her car, she drives back home herself (even though you can't drive that quickly after a heavy night of drinking: your alcohol promilage is too high to drive). I guess my upbringing just hammered this stuff in for me to even notice. :P
But please keep writing, I love how you portray the feelings between Jasper and Bella, and the jealousy that comes along from all others. Also, I sort of relate to her in a way because I went from nerd to pretty myself aswell. (not trying to brag about it, but just very confident now).
Oh and a friend of mine is hoping you could put more Angela/Alice stuff in ;)
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin? 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010
Reviewer: stockholmgirl Signed
Date: August 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Homecoming
Another great chapter!
I just lived in Stockholm, Sweden for a year and this chapter remembered me so much of how I made the whole 'moving to another place' trip on my own aswell.
Except I wasn't moving in with the love of my life haha.
Oh, and I'm from the Netherlands by the way;) Already have a reader from there?
Summary: 
Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...
Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.
Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010
Reviewer: stockholmgirl Signed
Date: March 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Great new chapter,
can't wait for the next one!!! Author's Response: Thanks so much! Soon!
Reviewer: stockholmgirl Signed
Date: March 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Glorious, but who would suspect otherwise
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