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Summary: Feature


He's a young but jaded keyboard player writing lyrics for his band, Breaking Dawn, and she's a naive and frustrated poet looking to break out of her shell; their words collide on-line.
What happens when they meet in high school, unaware of their literary connection?

OOC, canon at heart.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 146168
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2009


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Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Visuals

Did he figure it out? I've been looking for a clue. So caught up in this. You're awesome!

 
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Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Dazed and Invited

Squeal!!! I am bouncing in my seat. That was awesome!!!

 
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Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Invited and Confused

Damn hot

 
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Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Type set

Ugh, why is he being so damn insistent that he can't be with her again??  Grr.

 
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Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Bloody Hale

Holy shit! My jaw dropped - I so did not expect that but it was beautiful!!!

 
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Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Ghost Stories

So excited she sang. So pissed at Lauren. Fucking Lauren.

 
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Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Night Marish

Fucking Lauren

 
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Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Complicated

Aaaugh - I am so lost in this story...

 
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Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Lost Angeles

Hooooooot

 
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Date: May 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Matters

That was absolutely wonderful! A great way to start Tuesday morning. :) Your poems kick ass. And so do you... 

 
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Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Games

Fan-fucking-tastic! This is easily jumping up the list to my favorite story! I am loving the interaction between Bella and Edward. Thank you for being so good about updating!!

 
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Date: June 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Aisle C

Hot - like your story. Great update - made my morning!

 
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Date: June 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Patience

That was sweet how they finally admitted they like each other... But by the end, all I could think was 'oooh, Bella's pissed...' :)

 
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Date: June 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: The Goods

Eww, they're nasty.

Great chapter! Love it!

 
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Date: June 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Imps

Everything you write is like poetry. I love it. Thanks for the update. You're awesome!

 
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Date: June 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Short Ended Stick

Twilight: obsession

Edward: clueless

Bella: empty

Tanya: manipulative bitch

Great chapter!

 
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Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Truths

I have no idea. I'm too small to give blood, even though I'm more than old enough. No major surgeries (yet, knock on wood), so I've never been typed.

I like that there's some semblance of peace at the end of this chapter. There's just so much that could be fixed if they were just honest with each other... Stupid teenage thing, I guess.

Great chapter, thanks for the update!

 
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Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Party Favors

Great chapter and you even humanize Tanya. Honestly, I can sympathize with the girl, just a little bit. So Edward's a shipwrecked sailor and Bella's the mermaid who saves him. Wonder if that's the poem that clues him in...

Best Halloween costume... Statue of Liberty, 8 years old, complete with pointy hat and torch. :)

You Rock and congrats on your nomination!!

 
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Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Angles

No jokes - I am SO excited they have figured it out!! I am on pins and needles until your next post. Love that the lyrics gave it away. As always, your words are like poetry and you rock my socks.

 
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Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Hunting

That was beautiful. Thank you.

 
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Date: July 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Seeking

Fiona Apple - Smooth like Honey or maybe First Taste

Great chapter - I love that they've figured it out and that they're finding a way to still be themselves. Lauren's got a good idea actually. Knock a producer's socks off, even if they do get disqualified. And she sounds so sad - thinking this is the only thing she'll ever really do. Thanks for the update! You rock!!!

 
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Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Call Time

Awww! Great chapter and I LOVE that James was a joke, even though he had some talent. If they lose it will be because he couldn't share the stage.

So excited to hear more about the contest. This story is SO incredible!! :)

 
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Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Hidden

I can't eat hot dogs anymore. Bad camping experience. Ick.

Great chapter - i can't BELIEVE they didn't find her till the end though. That sucks!!

I'm glad that Carlisle talked Edward and Charlie down from doing anything that might get them in trouble, no matter how fulfilling it would have been. Damn Victoria though... I can't believe Edward hadn't said "I love you" since his mom died. Was that hidden throughout the whole story and I just missed it?! Now I have to re-read to see if you were dropping clues... Yay!

I love you and all your poetic awesomeness!! :)

 
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Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Overture

EEEEeee!! Well that was totally worth being late to work! You rock!!

I love that Rose got Victoria to admit everything. She was just bubbling over with information, wasn't she... :)

Thrilled that Bella won - surprised that E's group didn't, but it is the only way they could play together so, I'll go with that.

And I love that Edward didn't tell Bella he was uncomfortable with her sitting on his lap for 2 hours. It's just such a sweet thing to do.

Cherry slushy - all the way

 
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Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Curtain

EEEEEeee!!! OMG that was the absolute most exhilarating chapter EVER!! I am psyched beyond belief. That was awesome. You just made my whole me tingle. Fantastic!!

 




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