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Penname: madiloca [Contact]
Real name: madeline
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Member Since: September 07, 2011
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Summary:

He thought he had it all. The perfect job, the perfect house, the perfect girl, the perfect life. After almost five years together, she can no longer stand by and be taken for granted. She warned him...and now she's left him. Sometimes being in love isn't always enough.

Hang on for the ride!

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***Rated for language and sexual content.***

Inspired by the song "She Wouldn't Be Gone" by Blake Shelton. Take a listen.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 69188
[Report This] Published: August 15, 2011 Updated: December 19, 2011


Reviewer: madiloca Signed
Date: September 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 :: Gestures

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!  xoxox  

 
Reviewer: madiloca Signed
Date: November 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 :: Deep Trouble

Too cute! Sounds like he really wanted a girl too.



Author's Response:

I think he was ok either way...he was just emotional to know. But let's see how this baby girl whips him, huh? lol  xoxox  Thanks for reading & reviewing!!

 
Reviewer: madiloca Signed
Date: December 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 :: Daddy's Girls

Oh no! I hope the baby makes it?



Author's Response:

I'm not THAT mean!!  xoxox

 
Stolen Dreams by Shasta53 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 432]
Summary:

Bella and Edward were ready to become parents as seniors in high school, but tragedy ended their dreams and pulled them apart. Ten years later, they reunite, but all is not what it seems. ExB


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: No Word count: 169508
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2011 Updated: November 11, 2012


Reviewer: madiloca Signed
Date: December 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Man, I really hope Edward Sr. Didn't have anything to do with it!!

 
Reviewer: madiloca Signed
Date: December 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

How cool is that, they watched their son play baseball!

 
Reviewer: madiloca Signed
Date: December 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Lovely.

 
Reviewer: madiloca Signed
Date: December 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great chapter. I'm glad Edward reminded Carlisle that his so was bought, not given up.

 
Sins of my Past by content1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
Summary:

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Bella was left by Edward to clean up the ruins of her life after his betrayal. What happens when Edward finds out that not all was as it seems. What are the consequences of his sins and what will he do to get her back?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 91 Completed: Yes Word count: 421991
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2011 Updated: January 14, 2013


Reviewer: madiloca Signed
Date: December 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: SOMP Outtakes Chapters 9-13

A great read!



Author's Response:

SO glad you like.  I hope you continue to enjoy.  Just a few more chapters, and everything is goign to start to go fast!  ;)

 

 
Reviewer: madiloca Signed
Date: October 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Monster

Carlie sounds likey a pretty mature young lady. Loved it. With her help, I'm sure Edward can win her trust back. But its going to take some time. :/



Author's Response:

Yeah, we have a little ways to go!  But at least this is a start!

Carlie's POV sent directly...

 
Reviewer: madiloca Signed
Date: December 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Humbleness

Wow. Great chapter.

 
Reviewer: madiloca Signed
Date: November 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Welcome

Love it!



Author's Response:

So glad you are enjoying!   I hope to have the next one up soon! :)

Carlie POV sent to you directly!

 
Reviewer: madiloca Signed
Date: December 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Deceit

Poor Carlie.

 




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