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Penname: justafan [Contact]
Real name: Tracy Hamilton
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Summary: Feature

A story about love, about death, about keeping secrets, and dealing with the consequences.  Bella and Edward meet at a hospital when she is diagnosed with a life threatening disease and he is recovering from knee surgery.  She confides her fears to him; he changes his life because of her.  This is a story about their journey through the confusion, awkwardness, pain, and beauty of first love.

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Excerpt from Chapter 2:
“What are you most afraid of?”  Edward asks one last question.

“I'm not afraid of dying,” I answer truthfully.

“You're not afraid of dying?” he repeats, incredulous.

“No.  There's so much more.  I'm afraid of losing my hair but that's not my biggest fear.  I'm afraid of leaving my mom and dad all alone.  I'm afraid that if I survive, I'll never have children of my own.”  I yawn again.  Edward is quiet and I think for a moment that he's fallen asleep.  “Edward,” I whisper, in case he is asleep, “What are you most afraid of?”

“I'm afraid I'm falling for you,” he whispers back so softly that I'm unsure if I've heard him correctly. 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 82940
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2011


Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: May 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The Interim

Very nice lemon without going over board for teenagers.



Author's Response:

Thank you--the scene just came to me and I wrote it a long time ago...I wanted it to fit with these characters. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

-Melanie

 
Summary:

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Bella and Edward were best friends for years. When Bella finally decides to tell him that she has fallen in love with him, it's too late and he is to marry someone else. Human AU.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 22651
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2009 Updated: January 25, 2010


Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I can't wait to read this story.



Author's Response:

yay. Thank you so much for your review. Next chapter should be up soon.

 
Summary:

Alice can’t remember a time when Edward didn’t wear his navy blue sweatshirt. He never let anyone else wear it. So you can understand why Alice was stunned when she saw Edward hand his sweatshirt to Bella Swan. AU/AH.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3099
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: August 30, 2009


Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Oneshot

That was cute. Nice way to portray high school. it is so like that.

 
Summary:

 

 

When Bella and Edward meet the first day of High School, he is a chubby misfit with no friends in a new town, aside from his popular cousins.  He meets Bella Swan, a well-liked, if uncoordinated, local with problems of her own.  This is the story of their friendship, their loss, their love and destruction.  Can they find their way back to each other?  And can they survive the changes they have both gone through since the fateful day they met?

HUGE THANKS TO ATHENALOVE and READERGOOF FOR THE AMAZING BANNERS!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 41 Completed: No Word count: 164271
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: December 03, 2012


Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: March 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Words I Couldn't Say

Happy Birthday! And yes poor Edward does need some hugs. But he needs to sanp out of it like charlie said, she will be back.

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: October 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 38: My love

Ok I nearly pissed my pants with the whole Tanya thing. It was hilarious. And I think Bella is unleashed. And as for steamy, well, mine was in the snow. A trip up to the mountains one day. And as we were going at behind some huge snow coverd boulders a couple of families decided that that would be a could spot for them to have their fun, hense ruining the moment. But up until then it was freaking awesome and I never really felt how cold it was.

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: August 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Return to Innocence

Welcome back. And thanks for not giving up chubward.

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: February 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 38: My love

OH I miss these guys, update soon please.

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: September 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Fields of Gold

Ya hoo! That was amazing, and beautiful, and romantic, anad just perfect for them. Thank you so much.

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: April 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Far Away

That was so sad and hilarious at the same time. Emmett and Rose are such big personalities and their situations and big and comical I love them. Can't wait to see what happens next.

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 1997-New kid

I love how this story is staring out. I can't wait till the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  Next update will be in one week from now!

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: 1998 - The Rescue

That was a great chapter. it's unfortunate that kids have to be put in these positions by their parents. But in this case Bella was lucky to have edward to help her. i can't wait for the next update.

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: April 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Maybe I'm Amazed

That was beautiful.

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: September 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: It Won't Seem Like Christmas Without You

I love this. I was crying like a baby. Thank you so much for the update.

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Crash

Well that was intense. I love how Edward finally through himself out there.Although Bella didn't take the bate at first she came around. I can't wait to see her POV and how she came to that decision. As always i am looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

Her POV is up next and coming soon!

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: 1998 - The Dance

I love how even though Edward isn't in the best of shape, he is still Edward. I'm glad Bella sees past that. And I loved the end when she finds he didn't go to the dance. I can't wait to see what happens next.

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: September 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: 2000-Christmas

Ok ya I was balling. Poor Edward. And Bella way to step up. I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Our poor boy.  Thank goodness Bella is there for him.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: 2001-Grand Gesture

Kleenex anyone? Ya I was teary eyed. I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Pass the box this way...and hold me please....Ellie is going to destroy me with her next chapter.....

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: September 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: 2001-Goodbye to You

Crap! crap! crap! I'm so sad. i can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for updating so soon.



Author's Response:

The next chapter brings us back to 2009!  Stay tuned!

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: October 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: 2009-Bed of Roses

This whole chapter was so sad, I can't wait to see what happens next.

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: October 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: 2009-Ordinary World

I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Next chapter is up!

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Stolen Away

OME! I wanted to keep reading. I kept finding myself holding my breath. I can't wait to see Bell's POV.



Author's Response:

Don't hold your breath too long....Dr. Cullen is busy right now......lol!  Thank you.

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: November 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Changing Channels

This chapter killed me. I was teary eyed. I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Cry

I so excited, I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

There is definitely more to come!  In the meantime, go check out their little Smut Monday outtake!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: How to Save a Life

That was great. can't wait for the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: justafan Signed
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Drop in the Ocean

Awe! the ever patient Edward, I think he is going to have to be extra patient. There seems to be alot to work through. Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Oh, he is going to have to be all kinds of patient!

Thank you so much for reviewing!

 




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