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Real name: Blaine
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Recent Twilight convert.  Completely in love with the outdoors and Emmett Cullen. ;)


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Invidia et Salus by Rialle Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

A vignette about Emmett McCarty, his life from a human to a vampire and how he struggles with the most deadly of sins: envy. 


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Emmett
Challenges:
Series: The Seven Deadly Sins
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2946
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2008 Updated: June 09, 2008


Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed
Date: July 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a wonderful piece.  Beautifully written and a fabulously executed idea.  Oh, Emmett.  *squee*  I love that he has a weakness.



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very glad that you like it :)

 
Breathe Again by Ysar Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5438]
Summary: Feature

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards  


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010


Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Curiosity: Jacob's POV

I was really hesitant to read a Bella/Jacob fic, but I'm completely in love with what you've written!  I'm just so afraid Jake's going to imprint on another girl.  That would be awful.  Like really awful.  Like I'd metaphorically die because the happiness and love that is radiating from Bella and Jake is so wonderful and it does not need to be crushed!

Anyway.

Great story!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I love my Team Jake readers, but it's just a wonderful feeling when others give my story a chance as well! 

 
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Peace: Bella's POV

Cute!  It's so nice to see Bella happy and fitting in so easily.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Peace: Jacob's POV

So, I stalked your thread on the forum.  And I am so anxious for what's to come.  I just want Jake and Bella to be happy and have lots of cute bi-racial kids.  But then I guess there would be no plot...

Anyway, fabulous as always!



Author's Response:

Oooh, I bet they'd have the cutest kids!

 
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed
Date: May 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Unease: Jacob's POV

Super fast update YAYYYYY!  But the imprint question makes me so sad.  I only hope that they work something out.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I think everyone will be happy with the imprinting thing when it is finally resolved.

 
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Mischief: Bella's POV

I don't know what mischief you're working, but I can't wait to find out!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Retribution: Bella's POV

Oh, retribution is sweet.  I love how you write Bella and Jake's chemistry.



Author's Response: Thank you!

 
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed
Date: May 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Questions: Bella's POV

Very hot.  Very very very hot.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed
Date: May 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Questions: Jacob's POV

Ahhhhhhhhh I love Jake's point of view!  Masterful, as always.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed
Date: June 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: Admission: Jacob's POV

AHHHH THE SUSPENSE IS INTENSE!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 45: Homecoming: Bella's POV

They're home safe!  Yay!  Of course Bella would run straight to a pack of werewolves.  It's in her nature.  ;)

Still enjoying the ride, and can't wait for Jake's POV!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13645]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010


Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: 13 Days

AHHHH I LOVE IT!  The ending of this chapter made me cry.  Very very nice.

 
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: The Wedding

Perfect.  I cried.  Everything's coming together. :)

 
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed
Date: May 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Super hot chapter.  And super hot photo at the end.  I am so glad that Robert Pattinson and I are close in age.  Now if only I could make hime love me.

Anyway, this was great, and I look forward to the after-change sex!  BTW thanks for NO PREGNANCY.

 
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Good-Byes

So sweet.  *tear*

 
Out of Her Head by Blue25 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2757]
Summary:

Bella Swan moves cross country to take a teaching job, trying to escape the man who broke her heart. Edward Cullen is the school's music teacher with secrets of his own. Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together trying to work through their issues and unexpected feelings for each other.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 272412
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2009 Updated: June 26, 2009


Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

I'm in love with you for writing this.  It's fabulous.  It's taken me three/four days to read through it, but oh dear, it's GREAT.  Yay happy sex!

 
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed
Date: May 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

So lovely.

 
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

I love this story.  It's incredibly complex, and the characters you've built are wonderful.   I'm so anxious to know what will happen next--as lame as that sounds!

 
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37

SAD.  Jack Senna will pay.

So good.  Sooooo goooood.  I'm sad that it's over soon!

 
Summary:

After her father dies, Bella Swan is thrown back into the arms of the family she believed she never really left. Sometimes the worst events become the best opportunties for change. AU-Human, BxE. Rated for language.

Nominated, Winter 2010 Eddies: Mid-Length Fiction. A million and a half thank yous!

Banner by nastey. Thank you!

All the Places that Matter


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 40066
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2009 Updated: May 27, 2009


Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Epilogue

Oh my goodness.  Read it all in one go! and it was FANTASTIC!!!!  I'm crying right now because it was just such a perfect ending, and a wonderful plot, and just wonderfulness and perfection period.  I love this story, and I will most likely read it again very soon. :)  Thank you for sharing it with us.

 
Show Me by booboo_kitty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 148]
Summary:

An entry for *A Twilight Teasing Story Contest*

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Bella comes into her room, fresh from the shower, wrapped in only a towel, to find Edward lounging on her bed instead of out hunting like he's supposed to be.  Slightly OOC Edward, but not too much.

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4481
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2009 Updated: February 17, 2009


Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Show Me (v)

Whew! That was HOT. I love it when Edward and Bella let their hormones show.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed my little fic!!  Please, check out the companion story to this called, The Acclimation Diaries!

*MWAH*

 
Summary: Feature

 

Edward Cullen needs to pass Statistics. Bella Swan is his tutor. She thinks he's a flighty, arrogant--albeit sexy--asshole, and he thinks she's Bipolar, but tries to win her over, anyway.

Can he change her mind, or do first impressions really last?

 Thanks to my baby momma, Maximista, for the banner! <3


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 258464
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2011


Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed
Date: May 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2

Verrrrry interesting.  How will Edward take this?

 
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed
Date: May 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Outtake 2: Operation: Stranded

Sweeeeet.

 
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed
Date: May 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 13: Fairy dust & Bubble butts

Fantastic!

 
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police

NO, CLIFFIE!  But, I loved the tension between Edward and Bella.  I'm so ready for them to get it on.

Fab job.  I'm following you on Twitter because I like your story that much.

 




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