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Penname: Daylen [Contact]
Real name: Daniel
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Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.


Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.


Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).


Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)


 


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Help Wanted by jaxon 22 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3037]
Summary:

Bella Swan applies for the job of PA to the rude, arrogant Hollywood film star Edward Cullen.

Can Bella keep her feelings for her boss in check so she can do her job?

A/H, OOC, luscious and graphic lemons and bad language.

A million and one thank yous to Rachel1313 for the spectacular banner! You are my hero, bb!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 52 Completed: No Word count: 473901
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2009 Updated: March 28, 2011


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Confessions

argh when I saw the chapter title I was so hopeful, but I guess it was more about their inner-monologues than talking to each other the way they both want to.

I do wonder about the possible future conversation where Bella admits to the shower episode, I can just see Edward being jealous of his imagined-self ;)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Coming Clean

I don't think they'll ever be able to look at the breakfast bar the same way again? hehehehe

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Making it Real

err... just had to take a cold shower after that chapter before I could type anything hehe ;)

It's so good to see Bella and Edward managing some very important conversations amidst all the antics... it's an immense relief, in more ways than one ;)

Looking forward to Seth's fanboyishism (I know it's not a word but it's been in my head for a while, so it was time to use it :)

Loved the Whitlock Wednesdays idea, I'm surprised that Edward hasn't asked about HIS films getting a special day... I guess he's saving that question for later! Or perhaps he enjoys not being the ABSOLUTE centre of everything for a change? I think it's a bit of both :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Rising to It

hmm I have to say i'm happily surprised that it was only barely a part of a chapter there... though I can see Jacob being a bigger problem.

I wonder will Edward try to do a "save Bella from himself" move and try to push her away at some point... I hope not, they seem to be working out the kinks in their communications already :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Plan of Action

heheh loved Edward's "less than a dollar" gift for Bella, and her trying to figure out what it meant :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: London Confessions

hmmm it almost looked like they were going to declare themselves at the end there... guess it'll take a little while longer.

Loved Jasper's "flight" hehe, and Bella calling Emmett's "dream cartoon combo" :)

Looking forward to the premier and the birthday (that Bella doesn't want celebrated) Edward's going to have use ALL his tricks to get her to accept it :)

Oh, and I wonder if they're looking forward to the next time they are kept "apart" for 10+ hrs ;)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: In the Blink of an Eye

ohh wow! They finally declared - and that's one really nice pendant!!!

Hmm those handcuffs are going to be seeing some hard use I think too hehe :)

SOOO looking forward to the night/day after now!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Naked

Hmm I'm thinking Edward just needs to point out the benefits of Bella staying at his place (dare I say "their" place), such as the bed, the bath, the kitchen, the shower.... ;)

As for Emmett's surprise - I'm REALLY hoping it's Rose!! Because I think the poor guy needs some relief being around B&E and A&J :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Tipo Geloso

sigh.

Frustrated that Edward's felt the need to lock himself away from Bella, I'm hoping that she doesn't let that go on for very long.

I can 'sort of' sympathise with Edward's reactions in that he's not just reacting to the possessive boyfriend jealousy, but also just that everyone else is 'allowed' to touch Bella, but he cannot.

I think if Edward had been able to allow himself to stay next to Bella as her 'boyfriend' the encounter wouldn't have needed to get so violent. It doesn't excuse him, but it's possible to see where he's coming from. Combine all of that with the lower inhibitions we all get whilst under the influence, and it's a dangerous cocktail :S

Of course, now he's beating himself up for scaring Bella - although I suspect she wasn't so much scared of Edward, as FOR Edward.

Looking forward to how they both deal with the fallout from this, and for that matter, the public reaction that may or may not happen if anyone figures out it was Edward Cullen? hmmm

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: A Safe Place

whew i was worried they'd let that carry over more than one night.

I'd actually forgotten by this stage that Edward was adopted, so it was kind of doubly-shocking to hear this part of his back story.

I think the last 24hrs or so for B&E have gone a long way to neither of them ever underestimating the other again.

Looking forward to whatever Angela's been up to with the way you cut yourself off hehe

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Fate

geez... if that's Edward idea of a "date" what's he going to do for the eventual proposal? He's setting the bar pretty high for himself hehe

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Surprise (Part One)

I really liked the conversation over the magazine article, it's sad that false stories really happens like that. It's one reason I refuse to follow the gossip columns and magazines because I don't want to add to the feeding frenzy :P

It's getting closer to being completely out in the open for the two of them.

 

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Surprise (Part Two)

hmm I think that gym's going to see a whole lot more action than it ever has in the past ;)

Good to see B&E should be moving in together, shortly. Though it's still a little frustrating Bella's not "sure" of her place by Edward's side... they're getting there.

Italy looks like it should be a lot of fun hehe

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Moving Forward

That turned into a 'beautiful-happy-tears' chapter in the end. Although I can see more Ms Swan-Mr Cullen moments in the future even after they (presumably) marry hehe

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Sharing

really long and fun chapter there! ;)

I wonder will Bella use the costume again when she's in a better position to use it with Edward? hehe

Can't imagine the flight(s) to Italy are going to be very enjoyable at this point, though :S

Edward was really sweet sharing his "boring" room (I guess he's more than amply rewarded though ;)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Italy Part One - Arrivals

I suspect things are going to be VERY interesting when they return to the US. For now, however, I'm expecting Bella will drool just a little bit over Carlisle before she can stop herself... then they'll all have a laugh at both hers and Edward's expense, and it'll be fun times from then on :)

Maggie will smooth the way :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Italy (Part Two) - Family and Places

great long chapter there, and such a relief for all of them to get the family inside the circle of "knowing" now :)

I think Bella and Edward both resisting what they were 'wanting' to do in the library was particularly amusing hehe

oh and Carlisle pausing for dramatic effect!! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you xx

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Dreams

Holy OMG *&()!

That was an awesomely long and enjoyable chapter, right until she-who-must-not-be-named entered the show :S
However, I'm REALLY hoping that Bella's new confidence and the support of Edward and the Cullens etc will give her the strength to knock Tanya down (metaphorically, of course, although a well-timed "accidental" nudge would be pretty darned funny ;)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Courage

whew!!

I can just imagine Edward's face lighting up every four weeks... he'll be wondering if Bella's got something more up her sleeve again? Although he's such a sweetie we all know he'll never be sad about it hehe :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Inevitable

ohhh boy! I'm almost surprised that Edward & Bella got that sorted - I was pretty concerned there was going to be a "give me space & time" separation coming on the heels of that fight.

I love that they duked it out and got it more or less settled though :)

I wonder what sort of contract Bella's going to negotiate now? Oh, and really liked when she gave the verbal smackdown to Jess hehe :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 46: The Big Picture

well, well, I'd say both Bella and Edward have got what they wanted from the new contract... and the best part would appear to be that they'll always ultimately enjoy the negotiations of any changes hehe

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 50: An Educational Visit

hehe loved Renee's meeting Edward :)

oh and I wonder am I being paranoid suspecting Tanya somehow got to that film? Especially considering Rosalie has something she's hugely worried about?

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 45: A Meeting of Minds

hmm there'll be some pictures out there, but it might actually be delayed a bit because of Bella's bluff... if they're lucky at least hehe

Interesting to see Edward's sounding like there's a clause in the contract that probably says something like "and other services, as required"?? ;)

I'm thinking Bella should make a contract for him though!! That'd be fun :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Dish the Dirt

whoa! Ok firstly, I'm really hoping that Edward gets whatever "foot in mouth" responses he might make out of the way while talking to Emmett.... and that he then takes his cue from Bella and not only supports Rose, but works on what I'm assuming is likely to be a very devious plan to close the Tanya-gate for good :)

Other than that, there may just be a hell of a showdown between Bella and Tanya coming up hehe

 
Ethan Church by Dryler Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 503]
Summary:

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*Banner by time_lights over at Livejournal*

After receiving an invitation to write the biography of the severely reclusive author Ethan Church, Bella develops a reluctant obsession with his novels and by extension him. When she accepts his offer, the old, dying man she's presented with and the young, too perfect man she comes across on the nearly empty estate have her convinced she's missing some very important parts of the story.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 36732
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2009 Updated: May 13, 2010


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Letters

Entralling start - can't wait for more (and I think if we're here on Twilighted, we can associate with the sensation of being stalked by some books? ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

lol Yeah the Twilight books do have a bit of that effect, not quite so intense though.

 




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