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Penname: Daylen [ Contact]
Real name: Daniel
Status: Member
Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.
Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.
Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).
Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)
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Summary: The Cullens have peacefully lived in Forks for two years when Alice has a vision of a visiting vegetarian vampire. Who is she, and why did she move halfway across the country to find them? AU, E/OC. Rated for language and lemons in later chapters.
Special thanks to the fabulous readergoof for the awesome banner!
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Caius, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Word count: 120454
[Report This] Published: May 21, 2009 Updated: February 27, 2010
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Where I'm Supposed to Be
hehehe loved Theda's first day at Forks High! So much fun! Wonder if she & Edward will christen any janitor's closets at some point? :) Author's Response: Haha, maybe! Unfortunately, it won't be in a chapter, but that would be something they'd do. I'm so glad you liked it, bb.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: The Meadow
Edward finally got around to asking!
Hmm so Theda made the scene, albeit without realising and having a LONG time to wait for the leading man to show up.
Edward certainly took his sweet time hehe
Author's Response: Yes he did...but all is well between them. Epilogue is coming up, as is the first chapter of The Disillusioned. I hope you tune in for that one! :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Epilogue
Well it's been a long and interesting ride, but the happy couple got there eventually. Thanks for sharing your vision with us all.
Theda turned out to be very easy to love and accept; of course, you have to admire her for putting up with Edward's taciturn nature ;)
Loved Emmett as the celebrant, found myself chuckling through a fair bit of that ceremony.
Goodluck in the new stories, I'll try to keep an eye out for them :) Author's Response: Thank you so much, bb! Definitely check out the new stories if you have a chance. I'm so happy that you enjoyed this ride with me. :-)
xoxo Sarah
Summary: 
Bella Swan applies for the job of PA to the rude, arrogant Hollywood film star Edward Cullen.
Can Bella keep her feelings for her boss in check so she can do her job?
A/H, OOC, luscious and graphic lemons and bad language.
A million and one thank yous to Rachel1313 for the spectacular banner! You are my hero, bb!!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 52 Completed: No
Word count: 473901
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2009 Updated: March 28, 2011
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49: A Union
beautiful wedding & hot reunion sex in one chapter!
Still a little paranoid about some of those camera flashes - the large one that dazed Bella briefly in particular - hopefully that's just my own paranoia at work though :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 48: Two Nights
Even over the phone B&E can cause a jump in the number of cold showers going on ;)
I do wonder if the tabloids are going to be making their own minds up on certain things based off photos etc of Bella and Jasper - especially with Jake thrown in the mix... hmmm
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 29, 2011
Title: Chapter 52: Conflicted
welcome back! I think I can see some anger-management classes for Edward in the future? With Bella as his tutor, perhaps? hehe
Poor Rosalie though... let's hope things don't get too public before they handle the threat Tanya poses :P
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Playing by the Rules
whoa Jessica got owned :)
Looking forward to the London trip now... and loved how Edward was able to play his cards so well :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Protection
Personally, I LIKE the longer chapters!! It's easier to bury myself in the story that way hehe
As for this chapter, I loved watching B&E get slowly to the same page for each other, with a little help from the rest of the gang. I started cringing at the introduction of James and am hugely relieved it didn't get further before Bella was found.
Can't wait to see what happens in the morning! There's definitely going to be an interesting conversation, and hopefully some true feelings coming out :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 41: Wishful Thinking
whew and wow!! There were a few points there I was grinding my teeth thinking things were about to go south in a bad way... thankfully, I've never been happier to be proven wrong :)
I'll be surprised if Bella can look at the Aston without blushing in the morning though ;)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 47: Apart
whoa sounds like Edward's got some shopping to do? hehe
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Leaving on a Jet Plane
woohoo London Calling ;)
I do feel a little sorry for Edward, getting all worked up both at the house, then on the plane, and no relief possible just yet :S
Although I'm certain B&E will more than make up for it once they're in the hotel... the first night could be interesting, jetlag not withstanding ;)
Oh, and lost it completely at Alice's arrival and actions :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Acting the Part
Alice has a secret hehe
Wonder what could it be? ;)
looking forward to more!
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Assumptions
whoa nicely handled, Bella!!
Of course, Edward's apology at the end is going to contribute to the emotional whiplash those two seem to get with each other hehe
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Reality Check!
Ahh Nurse Bella, how lucky for Edward!
Shame he wasn't in the condition to really enjoy it, although it's probably better for them both in the long run that they have the comfort in their relationship first :) Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review - i really appreciate it
Jax x x x x
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Truth
argh! so very close to coming clean with each other!!!!
Sigh... wonder if they'll make it next chapter? It was great fun to see Bella interacting so well with the family once she settled in enough :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: First Aid
hehehe nice variation there having Edward talk in his delirious sleep and dream about Bella with her being able to hear it and realise it :)
Looking forward to the Fox night although I'm too much a Team-B&E fan to want to see too much of Jacob and Bella.
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Honesty
ooohhhh well it's a huge relief to see the two of them getting things out in the open (more ways than one!)
Looking forward to the morning after... and the next day and the next etc etc :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Hide and Seek
Awesome chapter!! Lost it completely when Bella decided to show up for the party and then taunt/tease Edward hehehehe
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Ugly Duckling
ahh B&E love the angst of "should I, shouldn't I" hehe
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: A Good Defense is a Good Offense
It's always frustrating to see both Edward and Bella almost at the same page in trying not to "force" themselves on the other person - it feels like those children's pantomimes where the bad guy is lurking in the background and the kids are screaming "BEHIND YOU!" but the hero and heroine don't "hear" them hehe
Frustrating - and yet I'm addicted to reading it hmm... :)
I'm relieved that Jasper is "in the loop" so to speak though! Hopefully, it will lead to Alice being more involved on Bella's end of things... though I don't doubt they've got more angst and 'urst' to get through hehe
Looking forward to it.
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: The Swan
crazy crazy times; looks like Emmett's spotted someone he likes, Alice and Jasper have their thing, now for Bella and Edward to get the truth out :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 33: Questions and Answers
wow that was a LONG chapter!! But oh so great with the efforts B&E are taking to level the playing field as it were... and the Wii sports were hilarious - I can see Emmett getting beaten a few more times in the future perhaps? hehe
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Unlucky for Some
NNNOOO!!!
I was worried just by the chapter title, but then B&E looked like they were getting closer to 'fessing up to each other... and you had to take that twist right there omg!!
I'm "hoping" that Edward's high-tailed it to the hospital to support Bella though :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: In Control
So... hopefully Angela's going to be ok.
But Bella and Edward's URST is about to go up a few notches hehe
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Mr. Nice Guy
woohoo Edward's hopefully going to let his walls down, and even more hopefully (because angst gets old sometimes) Bella can see it happening and accept it. There'll be plenty of other problems to worry about later hehe :)
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