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Penname: Daylen [Contact]
Real name: Daniel
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Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.


Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.


Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).


Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)


 


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Reviews by Daylen
 
Summary:

 

Edward left Bella, forcing his family to stay away from her. Six years onwards, the Cullens are a mess without Bella and Emmett decides to get away from his angry, angst ridden family and let loose. What he finds in the meanest biker bar in Seatle will send shockwaves through his entire family.

 

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All canon couples!


Categories: New Moon Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 112765
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20:Charlie

woohoo!! Charlie's ok - for now, at least!

But PLEASE let Izzy get some ice or something on that hand before she goes kicking any more vamp-ass :)

As for Izzy's ultimate revenge, I'm thinking SHE saves Edward, and I can't wait!!

Oh and Happy Birthday!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21:De Ja Vu Reversed

woohoo! Outstanding moves, Bella!!!!

I'm so sad for Emmett that he didn't lay money down on that bet! the one time someone could've bet against Alice and really cleaned up! lol

Oh, and speaking of the pixie - she's pissed as hell at Edward now - and the rest of the family will be too when they find out what he said to Bella all those years ago.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

awww Jake, you rock!

Emmett was so happy when Izzy let him know she was actually staying hehe :)

and now... emoward... should be interesting to see what he ends up deciding to do

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

wow I actually liked Tanya here as well :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

Ahh yes, the heart to heart is moving on to the citrus stage ;)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling

hehe I could just imagine Alice strutting back and forth, gesticulating wildly in her tirade about Izzy and Edward's behaviour! :)

Oh and OH SO GOOD to see them FINALLY get some lovin' at the end there.

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex

ahah loved Izzy calling the Cullens out on how they looked from her perspective on top of the cliff, though Edward's moves when he got up there were surprisingly enjoyable too. It's a relief to see him much more comfortable and relaxed with Izzy :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36:Boy Scouts(TB)

heheh loved that movie - not afraid to admit it :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28:Limbo

aawwww so NOW what's happening to Izzy? It sounds like the Cullens were saying their goodbyes and there's no hope for Changing her?

But then the unknown-yet-familiar voice shows up and throws a curve ball?

geez... all I can say is that I really hope real-life doesn't get in the way of the next few chapters because I'm not sure I can handle Izzy being gone-gone for very long! :S

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29:Strangers In The Night

ooook... I have NO idea what's going on any more - and I love it! hehe

Who're the two strangers? They would seem to be related to vampires but not actually them, apparently with no scent for Edward to detect; and what did they do to Bella/Izzy? hmm... can't wait for the next few chapters to see this unfold :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30:Stolen

hrm very strange goings on... still feeling confused but trying to just let the chapters percolate in the head until the "a-ha" moments hehe :)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32:Explanations

gee the big reveal and re-introduction to the Cullens should be REALLY interesting now hehe

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33:Izzy Learns To Hunt

haha it may have been filler, but it's setting up SO MUCH potential for humour in the next few chapters, not just Edward's but also Alice's and the rest of the Cullen's reunions :)

Can't wait!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34:New Life

hahahahaha LOVED IT!!!!

Very much looking forward to the Cullens showing up too... and the subsequent chats with Tanya after all this hehe

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35:A Lil' Less Conversation

hehe Alpha Edward was fun to see, though it'll be more fun when Alpha Izzy makes an appearance (or three), I think :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37:The Lost are now Found

hahaahah omg I was getting worried that someone was going to smack Tanya and/or Edward around bit there!!

Izzy's re-introduction to the family in general was hilarious - take THAT Emmett :)

As for wrapping up next chapter, sounds like you've got your hands full there anyways, so I'd say thanks for sharing such an awesome story and take care outside... looking forward to whenever part two shows up... and yeah, the summer down here decided to show up just before the end of spring with that crazy heat wave across a fair bit of the country :S

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38:Twilight

aww so sad it's ending there but looking forward to the sequel when you get the time :)

I don't think I stopped laughing all the way through the "way things might've gone" discussion between the Cullens hehehe

 



Author's Response:

Well I'm glad y'all liked it and were not offended that I made fun of SM in a way! But I suppose if you like my writing then its a given that I'm gonna take the road less traveled! Hehe!

Thanks!

 
Guarding Edward by katmom Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1578]
Summary:

  Guarding Edward

 

A stalker is trying to get close to Edward Masen, a green-eyed 24 year old concert pianist.

 He hires Elite Guardians to keep him safe from the one who is hunting him.

 Bella Cullen is the owner/operator of the company.  She's also a 110 year old vampire.

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  In the MYSTIC AWARDS:

GUARDING EDWARD WON FIRST RUNNER UP IN THE

CUTE CATEGORY:

Story that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy!


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Completed: Yes Word count: 200265
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: August 30, 2010


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13~~Taken~~

That was a very clever, and sneaky, chapter title! hehe

Enjoyed it all - looking forward to more :)



Author's Response:

Sneaky, yet clever!  LOL!

Mean too....

Thanks for reading Daylen!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~

I think Edward's going to choose to be Changed, of course - since he's almost certainly going to realise with or without the shield, what Bella would do once he passed on. Letting her end her existence is something he'd go to any length to prevent.

It was kind of funny to see Bella growling at Tanya, and Edward showing his fire :)



Author's Response:

So you think he'll choose to be changed?  But would they change him *in cold blood*?  Or wait until an asteroid (or van) hits him?

Ah, questions.... ;)

I rather like Bella GROWLING... ;D

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue 8 Jacob and Vee

Tessa was interesting albeit troublesome. Fate was cutting it close having Jacob imprint just barely in time for that encounter though hehe

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 ~~I Love Him, He's MINE~~

and i'm wondering if Mama isn't a separate physical entity from the stalker... so much of the chapter feels like the stalker talking to another identity inside her own head :S

Feeling sorry for Jessica and Mike!



Author's Response:

Very insightful Daylen!

Yes, poor Jessica and Mike...but they are in good hands now...

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7~~How Fast Can This Baby Go?~~

I'm not big into cars... but damn those Vanquish's are nice :)

I'm wondering if Edward's got some old family photos that happen to have a certain petite pretty brunette in them? perhaps that's where the nagging recognition is coming from? hehe



Author's Response:

You are so close, Daylen!  So close....

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8~~Too Close To Home~~

pixel cookies - yum! they're the low-cal kind, right? ;)

should be interesting to see how they end up catching the stalker!



Author's Response:

Yep, Daylen!  No calories in these pixel cookies....so you can eat LOTS!

Thanks for reading...AND rating!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~

so there IS a picture! Though not exactly what I had originally guessed - didn't even think of a painting :S Wonder what Bella was annoyed about that day? hehe and what Edward's reaction might be when he eventually discovers it WAS her posing for it? :)



Author's Response:

We'll find out what she was annoyed about in the next chapter...

AND Edward will get to see the painting AND Bella together at some point... ;)

Thanks for the review Daylen!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 39: Epilogue 2.0...Alice

hmm I think this was kind of a "happy tears" chapter. Loved it, and I think Alice's newly discovered niece may find herself the recipient of a scholarship if she needs it later - or maybe a startup grant for her designs? hehe



Author's Response:

Ah, HAPPY TEARS!  I was actually quite surprised at how many people said it made them cry...

I think that the niece has a couple of surprises in store for her... ;D

Thanks for reading Daylen!

Kathie

 




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