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Penname: Daylen [Contact]
Real name: Daniel
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Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.


Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.


Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).


Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)


 


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Reviews by Daylen
 
Summary:

 

Edward left Bella, forcing his family to stay away from her. Six years onwards, the Cullens are a mess without Bella and Emmett decides to get away from his angry, angst ridden family and let loose. What he finds in the meanest biker bar in Seatle will send shockwaves through his entire family.

 

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Categories: New Moon Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 112765
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Dying Again

rofl omg that was actually really funny all the way through... Especially Rose & Alice's bet lol

Looking forward to what Izzy has in store for Ed :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11:The Goddess+The Pixie+The Badass=Pure Evil!

ohh so there's the new and improved Izzy, plus two people with a combined century or two of knowledge on how to get under Edward's skin the most... this is going to be fun! and probably painfully frustrating among other things for Edward hehehe

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Izzy Comes Bearing Gifts

loved it. Alice and Rose's reactions to the restaraunt and cars was hilarious, Jasper and Emmett just as fun too.

I think Izzy was always going to end up feeling the love eventually - it's been buried and morphed all these years, but it's still there - it'll manifest differently to doe-eyes... I sincerely hope that she never pulls those out again, or maybe only as an opening salvo during one of her confrontations with Eddie ;)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Edward Enjoys His Torture.

So things are really starting to get interesting now that Edward's decided to become a more active player in the game :)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14:Fun At Tonka's

ohh both Izzy and Ed are playing Russian roulette now... wonder who'll be the one to snap and 'fess the feelings first? hehehehe

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Red Like Human Blood

sigh... hot blooded, anyone? hehe

E&B have got some snarking to catch up on now... but eventually the first-time-make-up sex ought to be pretty darned hot lol

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16:A Bloodied Kiss

haha omg Edward, that's one hell of a game of chess going on now ... just wondering about the kind of payback Bella, I mean Izzy, might go for when she realises she's being/been played :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17:Izzy vs. The World

whoa! Whilst it sort of feels out of the blue - it was an open door that had yet to be closed or otherwise stepped through. So I'd say I'm surprised, but in a "oh yeah NOW we're getting serious" kind of way.

I wonder how long before the rest of the pack shows up, and before Edward and the Cullens find out and join the race to save Izzy...

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18:An Unexpected Visitor

booyah! super-friends-of-Bella-I-mean-Izzy UNITE! lol

Looks like we've got the fixings of a great battle and rescue/escape :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36:Boy Scouts(TB)

ahh great chapter!

I think three words says it all "Izzy is Awesome" :)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19:Red Comes To Play

omfg hahahahaha Vicky got Bell-owned!!!!!

I'm loving how this encounter has been going so far and can't wait for the next chapter!!! :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20:Charlie

woohoo!! Charlie's ok - for now, at least!

But PLEASE let Izzy get some ice or something on that hand before she goes kicking any more vamp-ass :)

As for Izzy's ultimate revenge, I'm thinking SHE saves Edward, and I can't wait!!

Oh and Happy Birthday!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21:De Ja Vu Reversed

woohoo! Outstanding moves, Bella!!!!

I'm so sad for Emmett that he didn't lay money down on that bet! the one time someone could've bet against Alice and really cleaned up! lol

Oh, and speaking of the pixie - she's pissed as hell at Edward now - and the rest of the family will be too when they find out what he said to Bella all those years ago.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22:JB Man of Mystery!

awww Jake, you rock!

Emmett was so happy when Izzy let him know she was actually staying hehe :)

and now... emoward... should be interesting to see what he ends up deciding to do

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23:Epiphanies suck...

wow I actually liked Tanya here as well :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24:...and The Truth Blows

Ahh yes, the heart to heart is moving on to the citrus stage ;)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25:Cotton is Calling

hehe I could just imagine Alice strutting back and forth, gesticulating wildly in her tirade about Izzy and Edward's behaviour! :)

Oh and OH SO GOOD to see them FINALLY get some lovin' at the end there.

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26:Sweets After Sex

ahah loved Izzy calling the Cullens out on how they looked from her perspective on top of the cliff, though Edward's moves when he got up there were surprisingly enjoyable too. It's a relief to see him much more comfortable and relaxed with Izzy :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36:Boy Scouts(TB)

heheh loved that movie - not afraid to admit it :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28:Limbo

aawwww so NOW what's happening to Izzy? It sounds like the Cullens were saying their goodbyes and there's no hope for Changing her?

But then the unknown-yet-familiar voice shows up and throws a curve ball?

geez... all I can say is that I really hope real-life doesn't get in the way of the next few chapters because I'm not sure I can handle Izzy being gone-gone for very long! :S

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29:Strangers In The Night

ooook... I have NO idea what's going on any more - and I love it! hehe

Who're the two strangers? They would seem to be related to vampires but not actually them, apparently with no scent for Edward to detect; and what did they do to Bella/Izzy? hmm... can't wait for the next few chapters to see this unfold :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30:Stolen

hrm very strange goings on... still feeling confused but trying to just let the chapters percolate in the head until the "a-ha" moments hehe :)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32:Explanations

gee the big reveal and re-introduction to the Cullens should be REALLY interesting now hehe

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33:Izzy Learns To Hunt

haha it may have been filler, but it's setting up SO MUCH potential for humour in the next few chapters, not just Edward's but also Alice's and the rest of the Cullen's reunions :)

Can't wait!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34:New Life

hahahahaha LOVED IT!!!!

Very much looking forward to the Cullens showing up too... and the subsequent chats with Tanya after all this hehe

 




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