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Penname: Daylen [Contact]
Real name: Daniel
Status: Member
Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.


Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.


Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).


Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)


 


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Reviews by Daylen
 
Summary:

Bella Swan has had a tough life so far. Her mother Renée is abusive and negligent, and her father Charlie is barely present in her life. She has no friends either. Worse of all, no one had ever treated her with sincerity. No one except for a vampire named Carlisle Cullen. It was because of him. . .and his children. . .that Bella had experienced kindness. . .and found out how it truly felt to be loved.

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 70532
[Report This] Published: August 16, 2013 Updated: April 12, 2015


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 05, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: WHAT THE. . .?!

hehe that would have been quite the surprise all around :)



Author's Response:

Oh yeah :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 12, 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: A Potential Couple & A Basement of Pain

Good to see Edward & Angela make some progress



Author's Response:

So am I :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 25, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Happy Birthday!

Some awkward moments, but enjoyable to read. Renee's call being the exception :)



Author's Response:

Understandable. Which moments were awkward to you?

 
The Fleeting Moment by Camilla Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

 

Edward and Death

 

 

 

It starts with a tragedy: a desperate immortal is seeking his own death, horrified by the outcome of his last, deadly mission. But suicide isn't easy for vampires, and this applies to Edward Anthony Masen, the Volturi’s Inquisitor, until Death challenges him… what must he do to get what he really desires? Edward and Bella, AU

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 49269
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2013 Updated: June 12, 2014


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 A Letter to Aro

I can just imagine Aro having quite the tantrum after that :)



Author's Response:

Yes, probably some heads rolled, in Volterra!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Imprinting

Nice. So now they've got Kevin on their side, sort of hoping that everyone gets through this story ok. But it isn't always possible.



Author's Response:

In tghe summary I wrote "It starts with a tragedy ..." But I didn't wrote  "it ends with a tragedy..." Thank you so much for r&r

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 18, 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Stay, Fleeting Moment

Awww nice build up there! I had it on my list of suspicions but it was still really awesome to read it through and let the tension build!



Author's Response:

Yes it was the only possible oucome for a HEA. I coud imagine this Edward - who loathed so much to be a vampire - either dead or human. Thanks a lot for the review.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 30, 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Redde Rationem

Tense chapter but with a bittersweet conclusion. I'm happy to see the end of Demetri, but the cost was high :p



Author's Response:

Edward has two problems now: one is to ensure that there will be no retaliation form Volterra. For that he has a great and daring plan. As for his relationshib with Bella ... you have to wait and see.

Thank you.

 
Summary:

Our skin is ice cold and hard like diamonds, but we are flawed. Fine lines where we should complete each other are empty. We are like cracked marble, but can we put ourselves back together after all this time? For almost a century, Edward and Bella have lived a life that neither imagined. Can an unexpected reunion in Forks repair it all? ExB/AU/OCs/M - for vampire violence


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 55801
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2014 Updated: March 05, 2015


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 19, 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

The old man's thoughts were a nice touch to parallel Edward's own feelings of loss, even if he has "let go", he still mourns.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

 
Summary:

A Light in the Darkness

 

On one of history's darkest days, Edward finds his other half. Bella wakes to find that her guardian angel may just be a figment of her imagination. A journey of two lost souls as they find the light when darkness surrounds them.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 120820
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2014 Updated: July 20, 2014


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 28, 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm really liking Jake this time around. He's demonstrating a youthful maturity and openness that I wish there was more of in the world :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

At least Bella has paved the way for her interest in Edward and the Cullens to rise in front of Charlie :)



Author's Response:

Exactly. :) Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Well I think that went well :)



Author's Response:

Hehe Thank you! :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 26, 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I sort of expected Carlisle to feed Bella a hint or something to keep her going. Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Heh No, Edward was clear about leaving, so Carlisle wasn't free to say anything. Thank you. :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Awww Edward's really off to a good start with Charlie :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :) I'm glad you're enjoying it! :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Eh I think Bella has enough to deal with before getting into the discussion about mates. That was a great chapter, feels like I can breathe now, since they're finally back together and talking.OOthers will just have to wait their turn! ;)

 



Author's Response:

LOL Yup. :) Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 11, 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I skipped a few reviews, sorry, but it's been a great read in between work :) "Stopping there sucks"... I see what you did there! Charlie's memories  were a beautiful touch, and it gave Edward so much more to be thankful for, I think. He's had a chance to see Bella "grow up" in more ways than one. Looking forward to the Awakening now :)

 



Author's Response:

Hehe Thank you! :) I'm glad you're still enjoying it. :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Fun start to the year for the family. More interesting than normal :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 26, 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Interesting. Even though Facebook wasn't around, there have been lots of text based services like Bulletin Board etc in the old dial-up days of the Internet. Given that it's showing my age a bit to reference that, it's easier for a modern writer to use Facebook for simplicity :) Looking forward to Bella's hunt!

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Haha Yes, exactly. :) I could've chosen IRC or MySpace, even, but...nah. :)

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Epilogue

So sad that it's over. It's been a great read. Thanks for sharing your vision :)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 07, 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Jake and Edward are off to a very interesting start. Looking forward to seeing what you do with that friendship :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Sigh.. Edward. .. I'm hoping Bella's about to make a move that brings her closer to the Cullens again :)



Author's Response:

Hehe We'll see! ;) Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Nice bit of fun all around. Though it almost felt unfair of Bella to "out" Edward on his peeping hehe



Author's Response:

Hehehe Nah, he took it like a champ. ;) LOL Thanks. :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

It was still a tense and emotjonal chapter, but I think some of the sting was gone because Charlie had already made his peace with what needed to happen in the previous chapters.



Author's Response:

Yeah, probably. :)

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 02, 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love that Alice is taking a more active role and helping Bella :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 02, 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Nicely staged there. All the characters are almost where they need to be, both geographically and emotionally.



Author's Response:

Hehehe Exactly. :) Thank you!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 06, 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Torn between the peeping aspect and Edward finally "waking up". It will be interesting to see Bella's reaction to him :)



Author's Response:

LOL Thank you. :)

 




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