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Penname: Daylen [Contact]
Real name: Daniel
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Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.


Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.


Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).


Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)


 


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Reviews by Daylen
 
Summary:

Bella believes in reincarnation, since, after all, she can remember her past lives.  When tragedy strikes in Phoenix, forcing her back to Forks to live with Charlie, what will happen when she runs into her past?

OOC Characters/OOC Vampires

Jasper/Bella, Edward/Alice, Rosalie/Emmett, Carlisle/Esme

Thanks to jlove34 for such a kickin' banner!  I love it!

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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 20580
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2012 Updated: November 21, 2013


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 21, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Nice place to end the chapter! I'm glad that Jasper's absence didn't go over too many chapters :)

 
A New Beginning by numtwelve Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 220]
Summary:

Bella has recently lost her husband of 10 years to a tragic accident. Follow her through the pain of loss and in trying to build a new life for her and her three children. Edward comes back into her life after losing each other in high school...will they be able to build a friendship (or anything else) when Bella is so hurt? Can they rekindle their high school romance?

**This story deals with the aftermath of death as well as drugs and adult situations. Rated for future lemons as well.**

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 57468
[Report This] Published: January 12, 2013 Updated: September 20, 2013


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 06, 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 - Challenges

Awesome work. It's good that Edward is actively involved in helping them all remember Jake.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 30, 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - Thanksgiving

JJ really nailed it for everyone I think :)

 
Fresh Rain by Fleurs Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 123]
Summary:

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Banner made by the wonderfully talented payday00, who was so kind as to put up with my incomprehensible babble and restrictions. Go send her love and read her things.

 


 

Bella has always felt alone, but that was fine. She's always had her books, her dreams.

She tends to blame herself, even for things that aren't her fault. Especially when things aren't her fault.

Which makes it harder to get to know people, really. Which is why she turns to stories, to dreams, and to those who reside within them.

What would happen if Bella faced herself? What would happen if the Cullens had more to their histories than a sense of compassion and an impossible biology?

[This is an AU Twilight Re-Write]


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 66575
[Report This] Published: January 25, 2013 Updated: January 11, 2015


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 03, 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Rondeau

Awesome to see a new chapter! Hope everything continues to improve for you :)

Enjoying the slow reveal at least... though it is fun to see the two Bella's at work.

 

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Respite and Displacement

Hahaha so Bella's having to learn the "baby bird" way :) Shifting a helicopter across dimensions is pretty impressive given the mass! I could almost see a future option for Bella to shift all of something into a volcano ;)



Author's Response:

You. I like you.
[Avatar Aang and Prince Zuko perform the Maximum Brofist. It is epic.]

I'm ashamed of not having any volcanoes in my reaction-gif folder, now.

And given that extremely specific example— any chance you've read HPMoR? (It'd have to be a very subtle reference, if it were.) But I am generally approving of extravagent and creative usage of Godlike powers, yes. We'll see.

(I thought Baby Birding it would be more fun than an info-dump. I was right. {Thank you for the review! Those make me happy.} [Writing is hard when you think in unrelated parentheticals.]})

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 24, 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Blind Spot

I do have to confess to having to reread some chapters to attempt to make sense of some stages. It's more about not being able to read each chapter without some kind of interruption in real life - which messes with where i was up to :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 31, 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Stable Loops

Great to see a new chapter :) and what a doozy with the revelation of Renee's birth (I hadn't quite connected the dots yet)

 



Author's Response:

Next should be up soon; submitted last night. Thank you so much for readin~ :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 14, 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Storm

Fun times ;)LLooking forward to Bella "owning" Emmett :)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 30, 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Many Lives -> 49 MP

Such a shame, really. This chapter felt like it was really opening the story up for more. Hope you're able to move forward to bigger and better things soon :)

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Fresh Rain is off-hiatus. Chapter 15 is undergoing edits and is due for completion within the next week.

Thank you for your kind support; it really did mean a lot to me.

—Fleurs

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Key

Hehe liking the sound of the future people - very polite! Far better than the customers I've had lately at work.

 
Summary:

 

Home for Thanksgiving, Bella wakes up in her childhood room . . . but, much to her surprise, she's not alone. The man she's unknowingly shared a bed with just so happens to be the source of her fantasies for years . . . and her dad's closest friend. Can her fantasies finally become a reality?

 

 

 

Romance/Drama/Humor

 

 

 

WARNING: This story will contain drama. This could be, but may not pertain to, the drama surrounding a couple entering a relationship with a twenty-two year age gap. Please consider this before continuing. 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 109701
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2013 Updated: January 28, 2015


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20. Afternoon Delight

Fun chapter there :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24. If I Could Turn Back Time

I think that's the harshest cliffie so far! Paul's "hours" comment was gold though :)

 
Summary:

I hadn't liked 17-year-old boys even when I was 17. So what is it about Edward Cullen that's so compelling? Whatever it is, I can't afford to find out.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 71527
[Report This] Published: March 30, 2013 Updated: May 11, 2014


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 17, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Chu Jie

It does look like Justin's inability to be discreet is going to cause more drama later on, but it was good to see Bella's observations of everything at the Res etc -- hopefully she will figure a few important things out soon :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 11, 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Quelle heure est-il au Paradis?

Good chapter. The awkward "experience" conversation was quite amusing :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 26, 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Iamundernodisguise

Wow! Can't wait to see what the fallout from Jacob's reveal is - this was a much more deliberate tretay violation than canon.Hopefully Bella doesn't take too long to question the Cullens.

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 30, 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Khwaishein jagi hain ...

Loved it. It's great to see Bella finally able to really talk to Edward... among other things ;)

 
Summary: Feature

 

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Set after new Moon. The Cullens realize exactly how much damage Edward's leaving caused Bella. A few simple words can cause immense pain and emotional wounds that only a family's love can heal, specifically the love of a father.

 


Categories: New Moon, Eclipse Characters: Bella, Carlisle
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 48731
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2013 Updated: August 30, 2014


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Bella & Edward have both crossed a threshold there :)

 
Summary:

Bella Swan has had a tough life so far. Her mother Renée is abusive and negligent, and her father Charlie is barely present in her life. She has no friends either. Worse of all, no one had ever treated her with sincerity. No one except for a vampire named Carlisle Cullen. It was because of him. . .and his children. . .that Bella had experienced kindness. . .and found out how it truly felt to be loved.

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 70532
[Report This] Published: August 16, 2013 Updated: April 12, 2015


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 05, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: WHAT THE. . .?!

hehe that would have been quite the surprise all around :)



Author's Response:

Oh yeah :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 12, 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: A Potential Couple & A Basement of Pain

Good to see Edward & Angela make some progress



Author's Response:

So am I :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 25, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Happy Birthday!

Some awkward moments, but enjoyable to read. Renee's call being the exception :)



Author's Response:

Understandable. Which moments were awkward to you?

 
The Fleeting Moment by Camilla Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

 

Edward and Death

 

 

 

It starts with a tragedy: a desperate immortal is seeking his own death, horrified by the outcome of his last, deadly mission. But suicide isn't easy for vampires, and this applies to Edward Anthony Masen, the Volturi’s Inquisitor, until Death challenges him… what must he do to get what he really desires? Edward and Bella, AU

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 49269
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2013 Updated: June 12, 2014


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 A Letter to Aro

I can just imagine Aro having quite the tantrum after that :)



Author's Response:

Yes, probably some heads rolled, in Volterra!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Imprinting

Nice. So now they've got Kevin on their side, sort of hoping that everyone gets through this story ok. But it isn't always possible.



Author's Response:

In tghe summary I wrote "It starts with a tragedy ..." But I didn't wrote  "it ends with a tragedy..." Thank you so much for r&r

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 18, 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Stay, Fleeting Moment

Awww nice build up there! I had it on my list of suspicions but it was still really awesome to read it through and let the tension build!



Author's Response:

Yes it was the only possible oucome for a HEA. I coud imagine this Edward - who loathed so much to be a vampire - either dead or human. Thanks a lot for the review.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 30, 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Redde Rationem

Tense chapter but with a bittersweet conclusion. I'm happy to see the end of Demetri, but the cost was high :p



Author's Response:

Edward has two problems now: one is to ensure that there will be no retaliation form Volterra. For that he has a great and daring plan. As for his relationshib with Bella ... you have to wait and see.

Thank you.

 
Summary:

Our skin is ice cold and hard like diamonds, but we are flawed. Fine lines where we should complete each other are empty. We are like cracked marble, but can we put ourselves back together after all this time? For almost a century, Edward and Bella have lived a life that neither imagined. Can an unexpected reunion in Forks repair it all? ExB/AU/OCs/M - for vampire violence


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 55801
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2014 Updated: March 05, 2015


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 19, 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

The old man's thoughts were a nice touch to parallel Edward's own feelings of loss, even if he has "let go", he still mourns.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

 




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