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Penname: Daylen [Contact]
Real name: Daniel
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.


Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.


Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).


Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)


 


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Reviews by Daylen
 
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Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would send her life in a direction that would surprise her beyond belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell...What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them?

AU/AH...Canon Couples...with a twist.  NC-17 for smut, dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemons. 

Stephanie Meyer owns all things Twilight.  I like to put them into awkward positions and see what happens.  Take the ride?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 264490
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2010 Updated: March 10, 2011


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal

(deep breath) long chapter, but lots of ground work/progressive steps for everyone involved :)

Still got a ways to go, I think, but at least they're committing to the counseling and not running from each other

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style

hmm Edward's got some convincing to do... Emmett as well, for that matter :P

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Pumpkin Patch Incident

I think maybe Emmett had more fun than even Carlie with the Trick or Treating? ;)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to)

aww they finally had the talk that was long overdue :)

Just a little bit ticked at Edward's behaviour on the wedding night, really hard to see how he could do that... getting all you ever dreamed should really make you greatful :S

They sorted it out at least :)

Really looking forward to Carlie's reaction to the news about the baby :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)

oh wow... nice little mess/tangled web apparently happening there :P

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On

felt a bit jumpy towards the end there, but i can see the usefulness at getting to the destination... Carlie stole the show though - so happy to be able to call Bella "mom"

:)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Now That's A Party!

err Edward had more than one slip of the tongue in that chapter... though I'm pretty sure some of those were deliberate ;)

Bella certainly enjoyed the first ones, I'm sure she's not going to be too upset about the accidental one :)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Revelation No.Two (It's a Biggie) (Pt. 1)

oook "we need to talk" is right up there with "let's just be friends" or "it's not you, it's me" as most feared cringe-inducing phrases for me hehe

I'll admit to having a slight concern whilst reading the chapter about the possible BDSM direction, but by the end of it, I was seeing it as B&E just exploring the sidelines perhaps. Edward's line about it being something that he has moved into and out of with relative ease, that it's not a "lifestyle choice", is what leads me to believe it's just an element of the story and isn't going to be a... huge deal... if that makes sense. My own suspicions are that there's going to be some people from Edward's time amongst that community popping up here and there and causing some mischief perhaps, B&E will explore a few things for themselves, but ultimately they'll not be particularly attached to the style.

Now that that's out of my head, I did enjoy Bella's modifications of Edward's demands ;) It's good that both of them are so able at taunting the other :)

Now that they've said their "I love you's", I wonder how soon things like moving in might happen... oh, and I'm guessing it's a certain ex at the door of Bella's appartment, but we'll see :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?

whoa Momma Bear Bella was out in full force there :)

I'm very curious to see how Mrs Cope explains herself!!

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two -- It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)

awww yeah... kinda enjoying "take names and kick ass" Bella... even if I don't exactly enjoy the stress it puts her under :P

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)

some intense moments there, but there were also some hilarious ones with Princess Carlisle & Rose making the bike after the guys failed hehe :)
Looking forward to Bella's response... oh & curious if any more intuitive parents at Carlie's party may have figured out B&E's true connection ;)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)

whoa! Marta's a bit of a surprise - I guess she really had hopes for her neice? or perhaps she's just being over protective of the little family she's been caring for all these years? Having seen Edward in harsher times and not wanting to see him return to it? I'll try to give her the benefit of the doubt for now - but only if she actually tries to get to know Bella and doesn't continue to dismiss her out of hand :P

I was very impressed with Edward going to Bella though! Good to see they're both working on the communication to help deal with this present issue since that'll help with future bumps in the road too.

Oh, but I do wonder what game Emmett and Carlie played, and how much of a mess the house is in now hehe ;)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Nannygate (Pt. 2)

well well fun times for Bella and Edward - great warm up for them ;)

Carlie's hopefully going to have a great time with Bella - and perhaps spill a few "state-secrets" for Bella regarding her Daddy? hehe

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating

err yeah... I think B&E more than amply demonstrated they're back in the saddle, as it were hehe

Carlie's spy-moves are something that could come in handy for our favourite couple at times too... as long as she overhears the sorts of things that make B&E happy rather than concerned ;)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Settling In

ohh I think Mrs Cope suspects or knows more than she's letting on, but she is correct in at least chasing up the paperwork :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - A Shot of Harsh Reality Kills a Fairytale Buzz Everytime

hmm well that's one big hole Edward managed to dig himself out of :)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - As the Comdom Breaks...

oh yeah, Edward's in trouble with Bella - she seems awefully happy about the idea of that necklace being a Collar hehe :)

Looking forward to how Emmett and Rose makeup :)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming

Esme's quite the plotter, but I think Bella's just as good really :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...

I did wonder about the trip back to the salon... and now I know :) Although I do think that the security guard should've still checked in, just because Bella suddenly went quiet doesn't mean she wasn't intimidated into it (which she kind of technically was ;)

But anyways, that would've prevented us from getting Edward on his knees begging Bella to stay :D

Looking forward to Heidi's testimony - I'm choosing to believe it won't be quite so damning as Bella fears...

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Unexpected Surprises

awwww right on the good part!!!! lol

Looking forward to how Carlie asks Bella hehe :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Commitment and Commitment Issues

erm Emmett should be getting a slap upside of the head :P

But the overwhelming sweetness of Carlie and Edward's Proposal to Bella was so enjoyable :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain

O M G !! did not expect them to really split like that!

This is so bad for both of them, but I'm really hoping that Edward hasn't been as silent as he appears to have been :P
Looking forward to seeing how this gets resolved

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Heartache

Edward's still taking control of things, and I'm sort of looking forward to when Bella pulls him up short :)

Emmet's been fun though :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - The Next Phase

ahh so much covered, so much still to go through, but oh geez, Edward, how could you possibly let yourself go like that when you knew the prize awaiting you that night? Not sure i liked his almost cavalier reply to Emmett that another few weeks wouldn't be noticed. The whole point is that he SHOULD notice :P Maybe Bella should bring on the teasing even beyond the note and the pink vibe? :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

hmm the "with a twist" and memories of past chapters had me thinking that's what was going to happen, but I just wasn't sure if Bella was up to that stage - whether she was still going to scuttle that side of their bedroom life :)

The wedding gift was great! Talk about instant-family for Bella :)

Renee's illness (whatever it is) will presumably come back into it at some point... but Bella's a lot stronger now to set some boundaries on just how involved she wants to be.

 




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