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Penname: Daylen [ Contact]
Real name: Daniel
Status: Member
Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.
Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.
Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).
Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)
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Summary: What if Bella hadn't moved her junior year with her father. Instead she moved with her mother to Florida. Upon visting her father before leaving for college she encounters two members of the Cullen Family. Alice's vision tells her that Bella would change their lives forever.
Edward's first encounter with Bella is 30,000 feet in the air on the way to Darthmouth. With no means of escape will he be able to resist the temptation of her blood? Or will he bring the whole plane down for a taste?

~Edward's POV: Chapter 2
I closed my eyes to listen to the tones of voices around me. I heard at least one hundred passengers. It would be a massacre. Could I really justify destroying all the lives of everyone on this plane just to taste her blood?
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 71150
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2009 Updated: May 15, 2010
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Catalyst
ahh so I "think" Bella is going for the small dose of venom, directly where it's needed, to repair the aneurism, but then try to burn it off before it can do any actual Changing of her (which her heart probably wouldn't be able to take etc)?
The timing on how conscious she is, and how much control over her abilities is going to be tight.
Edward's going to be more than a little pissed at next chapter, I'm guessing.
I'm a little worried about that Vision, but hopeful that everything will work out - for our favourite family, at least :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Her Deception
ruh roh... Bella's shield ability has gone haywire maybe? hehe
Summary: 
Edward Cullen needs to pass Statistics. Bella Swan is his tutor. She thinks he's a flighty, arrogant--albeit sexy--asshole, and he thinks she's Bipolar, but tries to win her over, anyway.
Can he change her mind, or do first impressions really last?

Thanks to my baby momma, Maximista, for the banner! <3
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: No
Word count: 258464
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2011
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 25: Amends
Edward's got his work more than cut out for him now!! hehe
I'm thinking Bella's smarter than Edward though, and won't have to kiss Jace for "comparison"... she might kiss him for other reasons though :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
YES!!!! OMG longest prelude to a romantic kiss ever - though I'm half expecting to have the diner applause after the dancing leading up to it hehe
Hope there isn't too long to wait for "part 2" but I also know how much real-life can kick up a fuss sometimes :S
Oh, and I actually find myself hoping they're not in a hurry to take additional steps... they should spend some more time shunp-ing each other first hehe
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
That was another crack-me-up chapter - even *I* had forgotten about the restaurant surroundings by the time B&E stepped out of their dance and kiss and "moment" hehe
The whole getting lost and neither one printing out directions etc was hilarious (been there, done that, though not quite so far off course)
Now I wonder what will happen the day after... both between B&E AND with the extended group :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
YES! Whilst I totally enjoyed the girl-bonding time Bella had with Rose, I really loved Edward setting up the piano performance for Bella after work :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked
Geez, Edward, how you could possibly think that was a good "test" to run, the boy has more than just Stats issues :S
guess that's the last for a while though, thank god for email alerts :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 23: Space
Great to see a chapter up :)
Such a relief to see Rosalie decide to help Edward after his confession, and I don't doubt that she'll hold him to that promise if he screws up again!
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 24: Giving In
great to see a new chapter; hope real life is going well :)
As for Bella's musings at the end there... I'm thinking a combination of all three events... maybe start with a beating, then the tears, and then the icing ;)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 27: Surprises
Finally! Geez Edward, it took you long enough hehehe
I wonder how Bella's feeling about all this now? Really looking forward to the real feelings out for each of them...
Hmm maybe Jace should be introduced to the T.A.?
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 28: Hello/Goodbye
ok some roller coaster emotions through that chapter, and I did end up feeling kind of sorry for Jace.. .not enough want him with Bella, but still... :)
Looking forward to more when you get the chance :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 29: Go
YYYEEESSSS!!! Finally they've confronted each other and are back on each other's "seeing" list :)
Summary:  Scarred by events in her past, Bella relies heavily on her best friend and roommate, Jasper. When Jasper falls in love with a girl named Alice, Bella is excited for him but can’t help but wonder – where will she fit in? Her answer partially arrives in the form of Alice's older brother, Edward, but as their friendship grows, Bella comes to realize that she may be too broken to give Edward everything he needs. Canon pairings, AH/AU
This contains explicit content, elements which may be offensive to some, and dark themes. It is intended for a mature audience.

Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No
Word count: 256064
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2009 Updated: March 09, 2010
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Curry Confessions
these guys are going to be able to track their relationship changing via ringtones in the end :)
Author's Response: Haha, maybe so :) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Courage and Revelations
awww that was soo cute and intense all at the same time :)
Emmett is just so damned funny and easy to admire even with his too-much-information comments, because he's always genuine.
Big steps for Edward & Bella - looking forward to where this goes next. Author's Response: I really do love Emmett hard. He's a lot of fun to write, and he actually has great insight. I'm glad you can tell he's genuine :) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Jealous Guy
whew... well the ice has been broken on the male-bonding-territory-marking at least lol
And Bella voluntarily went shopping with Alice - wonder how that day actually went? hehe
great build up to the date too :) Author's Response: Haha, yes, the ice has definitely been broken :)
And you will be reading all about Bella's day with Alice in the next chapter...it's the prelude to the date (which will be in the same chapter - it's likely to be a monster).
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: In the Garage
wow... you weren't kidding about it beinga long chapter! But it was so good!
It's almost agonizing how slowly they're having to move with their feelings for each other. Having to be sure of things before moving the next steps.
Looking forward to more! Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the longer chapter because I'm not sure if they'll be much shorter from here on out...
I know they are at times painful with their pace, but I hope you're enjoying it all the same :) I appreciate you reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Helplessness and Hope
wow... intense - but good that they were both able to get their respective declarations out finally!
Author's Response: *smiles* So glad you liked it! Thanks!
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: The Aftermath
whew... Jasper had some intense conversations with himself through all that... it's great to see him realising so many things, from Edward being an ok guy, to not blaming himself for all the negative things that have happened around him.
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: The Horde Descends
aww Emmett and Edward are both smitten so completely!!
Emmett and Felix's meeting was hilarious :) and the whole Ranger vs Warrior debate between EmRo lol
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Some Lovely Glorious Nothing
I'm with Quil on this one: Go Bella!! woohoo!
Even with the memories not completely beaten down to their proper place in history, it's an incredible step for her!
Edward's struggle was intense... and I was finding myself just as confused at the counting.
Hopefully there's a slightly better understanding for Jake in the future :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Ink and Instinct
wow a long chapter but with so much progress for Bella and a few of the others :)
I like Edward's tattoo... although it makes me wonder about the prospect of Bella getting one, and what it might end up being. Transformers related or something else, maybe a 20-sided die? :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Blister in the Sun
hahahaha oh wow!! Edward being so openly honest with Bella was priceless! Even more was Bella being so amused by his words; perhaps this has helped her confirm her feelings for him, more than Edward even realises?
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Please Please Please
great chapter. Especially enjoyed Bella's falling asleep against Edward and allowing him to get her to bed hehe
Though now I'm wondering... will Bella be the one to walk in on Edward and Emmett in bed the next morning? lol
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: The Long and Winding Road
That was a super long, fun and intense chapter all in one!
So much progress with Edward meeting Bella's 'family'; the Charlie interrogation and then the hot times at the end :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Unkindly Kind
It was good to see Jasper calling Jake on his crap, even better to see that Bella appears to be accepting some truths into herself too.
Looking forward to Edward's return though (almost, but not quite the same way) as much as Bella is ;)
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