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Penname: Daylen [Contact]
Real name: Daniel
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Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.


Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.


Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).


Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)


 


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Reviews by Daylen
 
Summary:

When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath. 

Hurt/Comfort/Romance, ExB

***Gorgeous banner artwork (above) was made by the talented Fernanda. Many thanks to her for allowing me to use this masterpiece for my banner. View more of her work here***


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 160351
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2010 Updated: November 21, 2012


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I'm not sure id call that just a filler chapter since there's obviously something happening with Charlie. Plus we're seeing more of Bella struggling to face her fears (which aren't really unreasonable for those of us with experience in trauma. We "want" to move on, but it takes longer for our... instinct? to catch up):)

Author's Response:

Yes, there were definitely some important things going on. I'm very pleased you agree. Although it may seem like there wasn't much going on, I felt it was important. You have hit it exactly - Bella is frustrated because she knows her fears are irrational and she desperately wants to move on from everything, but it's just not happening fast enough! 

Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts! It truly means a lot to me.

 
Summary:

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Bella meets Edward while she is a pre-kindergartener, and Edward becomes her best friend.  When Bella’s life is in danger, Edward is forced to leave to prevent her death.  As Bella grows older, Edward is forgotten.

A new family moves to Forks at the start of Bella’s senior year and changes Bella’s life forever.  What the mind forgets, the heart will always remember.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 69283
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2010 Updated: December 20, 2011


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Change of Plans

very cute beginning - looking forward to where you take it :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Forgotten

argh that was actually painful to read - the memories fading away and Edward eating himself up inside being forced to stay away.

It's a relief that Angela is there for Bella at least, her arrival showed impeccable timing ;)

The reunion's going to be very difficult for Edward when it finally does happen - having all those memories and not being able to really "use" them... I think it might help Bella in the long run that she doesn't have clear memories of him, though, it'll make it easier (just a little) to see him as a potential boyfriend than it might've otherwise been.

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Dead Man's Party

A deliciously long chapter there!

It's good to see Jacob so supportive of Bella's choices and feelings... now for Edward to get on board, looks like they're set up good for the next chapter. Just hoping this current trip to the treehouse doesn't get tainted by unexpected guests :)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Leave the Memories Alone

ahh I think aside from being happy that Edward's "trying" all I can say is "hehehehe" to his avoiding the truth :)



Author's Response:

Like Alice said, he can run but he can't hide!!!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Secrets Are Sinister

whew actually relieved that Lauren & jessica didn't become meals... just yet, at least :S

Fun times ahead as Jacob goes through his change and B&E get closer... curious to see whether Angela is going to factor more heavily into things with being included in the concert trip and all :)



Author's Response:

The Lauren and Jessica twist was a blast. I couldn't just have James and Victoria kill them off, there's no justice in that! I thought that karma giving them a huge dose of their own medicine would be better.

Lasting Public Humiliation + Grounded for Life = WIN!!!!!!!!

Yes, Jacob's change is going to be an interesting dilemma for Edward.  Will he be able to handle Bella hanging out with a volatile young wolf?

Angela is a constant in Bella's life, so we will definitely see more of her!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Right Where It Belongs

It was good to see Edward actually relaxing and having fun for a change there :)



Author's Response:

Edward's needed some fun in his existence for a long, long time!  I loved giving them a weekend to remember...

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: This Dance

wow that Tree House sounds amazing!!!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: I Wish the Best for You

ugh I knew it was coming but still didn't like reading it... though I'm guessing B&E like it even less! :S

Hopefully it's not too many chapters til they're back? I don't know if that makes the story too short that way?

Looking forward to seeing them reunite - and wondering how much "older Bella" recalls :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Am I Missing

gah Edward!!! After all that time, to just confuse the poor girl like that?! I suspected he would, but really hoped I'd be wrong :(

Ah well, guess he's got some repair and sucking up to do ...

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Divine Intervention

I'd like to say that was a close call - but they havent' got the concert done or got past the timing of the nomads, so it's still a bit of a worry.

On a different note, looking forward to B&E enjoying some awkward attempts at connecting and couples-time hehe



Author's Response:

Yes, it was a close call indeed.  That's twice Alice has saved Bella from James and Victoria, so far...

Bella and Edward (as well as Alice and Angela) are going to have a fantastic (although well-chaperoned, so no alone time yet) weekend in Portland!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Protège Moi

hehe well Edward certainly got shocked - wonder how he's going to be around Bella the next few days? ;)



Author's Response:

Yes, he did!  He never knew what hit him...

I'm going out on a limb here, but I'm guessing it's going to be a little AwkWard...

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Two Steps Back

good work, Edward! Nice to see you're starting to come around... just hope there's not too many backwards steps with the forward ones :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Somewhere Only We Know

woohoo!! That treehouse is going to have so much importance to B&E now - really hoping nothing happens to it!

Curious how Bella "disappeared" from Alice's Visions though... perhaps her shield overloaded enough to blank her out for a bit there? Or was there a pesky rock on the ground that was she was fainting onto before Edward caught her?



Author's Response:

Yes - I love the treehouse!

You will find out why Bella disappeared in Chapter 14, which hopefully will be posting by the end of this week!  (And no, it was pesky, but not a rock...)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Death and Destruction

nice timing on Jake's part... should be interesting to see what Victoria does this time around since she 'knows' now about at least one wolf...

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Mystery Zone

hmm so Edward's starting to accept the love he and Bella share, but still has no intention of Changing her...

I wonder will he come around with less fighting than canon or will he be able to allow Bella to make her own mind up as well as accept his own chance of happiness? :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: All My Senses

That tree house has seen a lot of action, in more ways than one ;)

 

 
Growing Pains by Beckylady Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 143]
Summary:

The new treaty with the Quileutes forces Leia and Adam to make some tough decisions about their relationship. Meanwhile Edward and Bella begin their new life as husband and wife. When the honeymoon ends on a startling note, how will the Cullens deal with the unexpected situation? How will it affect the new, fragile peace with the Quileutes? And more importantly, what happens when the Volturi bring the entire guard to Forks to address a broken law? 

This story is the fourth in the Baby Sister Series, an AU parallel of the Twilight Series as seen from through the 'eyes' of Leia Cullen, the youngest member of the Cullen family. Mostly canon couples, but as it is Jacob/OC, there will be major differences in the dynamic of some relationships. And yes, Renesmee will be a part of this story.


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Billy, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Leah, Marcus, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: Baby Sister
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 80181
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2010 Updated: November 28, 2011


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

oh they've surely stirred a hornet's nest... though I'd really say that the Volturi did the stirring?

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hehe Bella's so much more "take charge" :)

It kind of felt wrong to chuckle at Leia's near-misses over the pillows/cushions and everyone's comments on trying to avoid it when it had already happened, sort of. :)

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I see Bella as a force to be reckoned when she's got the motivation. SM gave us glimpses of that but not enough, I think. As for Leia, don't worry about chuckling over the pillows. It was both meant to be somewhat amusing but also a reminder that Leia's handicap, though she handles it well and has so many tools to compensate for it, still gives her trouble sometimes. Thanks for the review!!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

well aside from the tense moment with the Pack at the start, that chapter was very warm. Oh, and not forgetting Leia's unfortunate pizza & soda incident :P

 



Author's Response:

Heh. Yeah, the idea of tossing up human food is kinda gross, but its an unforunate part of life for the Cullens. Thanks for the review!!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Next chapter looks like it's going to be a kicker - with the meeting and discussing both Bella and Adam's futures with the Cullens.

Leia's moments with Edward are always so cute, I'm not sure if it's entirely accurate given that they really have a lot of mutual support of each other, but I always get the strongest sense in these sorts of scenes how much Leia idolises/looks up to Edward.

Even at the same time as he looks to her, for her strength which he tends to perceive as being so much greater (rather than "different") to his.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's getting a little intense now, but honestly I'm having a wee bit of writers block. Hehe...and my beta is kicking my chapters out like two days after I post them I I'm nearly caught up to myself!!  Love my beta, loathe writer's block. As for Leia and Edward, I just adore them together and love writing them. And yeah, Leia does idolize Edward. Always has. She knows he's not perfect though and the events in NM/Rebellion have basically knocked him off his pedastal for her, but he will always be her adored brother. And Edward seriously craves her bright presence and thinks she is the strongest of them all but due to her inexperience he is extremely protective of her. For almost ten years, they were the odd ones out in the Cullen family and so that often pushed them together. They have a very strong, if completely platonic, bond.

Oh, lord, you made me start rambling about them. Bad Daylen!  Hehe...Thanks for the review as always.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

hahaha I know there was a bit of a mix in that chapter for serious and sweet, but I love how Bella (and myself, I guess ;) was completely distracted by the strawberries :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

hmm well first thing I'd say is if that Elder had requested the blood-signing from Bella, she probably would've passed out or at least had a rather visibly bad reaction herself... not that the Elder would've cared from the sound of it.

Really, if the Cullens have been in the area twice, and no one's gone missing or been bitten in either of those times, how is that not "proof enough" of their commitment at least. Ah well, sometimes road blocks can't be helped :P

I liked Bella & Leia's chat in the morning... though I think I've said before I like their whole dynamic, along with Edward & Leia.

I don't think the move to Alaska is necessarily going to go off without a hitch... the Pack might be forced to ask the Cullens for help... at least, that's currently a suspicion I've been toying with in my head.

Looking forward to seeing where we go next :)



Author's Response:

Heh, yeah, Bella would have passed out. But some of the Elders refuse to give the Cullens the benefit of the doubt. I'm still deciding how the pack will figure into the story later on, but I know they'll need them when it comes time to face the Volturi, if they come like then did in BD. Still working on that, too. :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

aaannnnd... continues holding breath !!!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

It's good to see Adam settling in with Leia and the Cullens!

I can imagine there'll be a lot of stuttering and blushing when they finally broach the intimacy subject hehe :)



Author's Response:

hehe...I'm looking forward to writing that chapter. It will probably be soon, probably before Renesmee is born. Thanks as always for reviewing!

 




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