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Penname: Daylen [ Contact]
Real name: Daniel
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Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.
Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.
Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).
Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)
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Summary: 
Bella has the gift of second sight. After a tragic accident her world collides with Edward's. She is expecting him, but he is not ready for her.
An exploration of Edward's growing feelings for the woman he is, at first, salivating to consume.
*** A/U Mostly Canon pairings. Vampire/Human/Wolfpack *Will contain Lemons in later chapters*
**Indie Twific Nominee**
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: No
Word count: 202250
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2010 Updated: November 19, 2012
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 ~Foundations and First Sightings~
lol enjoyed Bella's Visions of the wolves and what sounds like a typically mischievious Jacob :) Author's Response: Jacob will be a little bit mischievious in the story, but essentially this is an Edward/Bella romance. There will NOT be a love triangle and I am not going to demonize Jacob. He will actually get his own love interest and be a major part of this story. :-) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 ~ The Eyes of My Adonis ~
I'm not sure why, and if it's appropriate, but the idea of Bella and Alice being able to meet in Vision/Dream world is fun and appealing... potentially migraine-inducing for Edward - which makes it all the better hehe :) Author's Response: ROFL! I have many chapters already written. The visions will continue, but Bella and Alice will meet in the flesh somewhere around chapter 9. Don't worry, there will be lots of migraine inducing moments for our favorite vampire, hehe. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 ~ Date Night ~
ahh I always like Angela :) Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that! Angela is going to be a major character in this story. :-) I always thought she was underutilized.
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 ~ Brown Haired Girl ~
Hmm that was quite interesting really - Alice has her work cut out for her to keep that from Edward :S
I wonder if she'll have any other chances to communicate with Bella before they meet in person? Author's Response: Um...Edward is going to be difficult at the beginning of this story. Things will get better, but he will give them all a run for their money, LOL.
Yes! Alice and Bella will have a bit more communication before they meet in the flesh. Thanks for reading! :-)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 & 6 ~Possession~ ** ~Waking Visions~
ohh I can't wait to get into the real fun. I'm really liking the support Bella has from Angela, and now Alice. I do wonder how Edward's going to handle having two prophetic women shoving & nudging him where they want him ;)
Author's Response: Things are going to be dicey with Edward at the beginning--and it's not all because of Bella's gift! He's going to have to get over his blood-lust before he has to worry about other issues. I think you will find that Bella's gift often enhances her relationship with Edward. :-)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 ~ La Tua Cantante ~
so glad to see Alice and Bella meeting up for "real" now - even better that the rest of the family looks like they're getting on board. Edward's got some impulses to control, but he does appear to be on the right track at least, more or less :) Author's Response: Yes, it's exciting that Alice and Bella get to meet in the flesh and they will become really good friends. Jasper will be a really good friend to Bella as well (no control issues for him in this story) and he will be instrumental in helping Edward get over his blood-lust. But the romance won't happen overnight...Edward is going to struggle a while yet. Emmett will be helpful, Carlisle is supportive...Rose will be her usual bitchy self, LOL. Thanks so much for reading! :-)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 ~ Sanguinary Aftermath ~
ohh i'm so glad that Angela's prognosis is better than the characters know right now :)
Very curious to see how Bella deals with the new knowledge of the wolves... and perhaps is able to change that vision of the confrontation. Author's Response: Yes, Angela will be back with us, but it will be a while yet. Some things will happen around her and inside her head, so she won't be completely out of the story.
Although we don't have a love triangle in my story (I so didn't want to go that route with Edward and Jacob) there will be some confrontation and male posturing before things settle down--just because it's fun! Hehe. I will drop you a little clue though...Edward will be instrumental in helping Jacob reach Angela at some point.
As far as visions go, Bella's are not all literal. Some of them are symbolic or likely, but none are set in stone. For example, the one of Edward and the wolf in the clearing was more of an introduction to what was coming up. Thanks for reading! :-)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 ~ I Don't Feel Anything...Or Do I? ~
uh oh... looks like there's a Volturi-influence about to show up? :(
Edward's always funny when he's in denial hehe :) Author's Response: The Volturi foreshadowing is waaaaay down the pike. There will be hints of things to come here and there, but nothing will happen with that for quite a while. Yes, Edward in denial is amusing! Next chapter is up! :-)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 ~ Changing Currents ~
oohhh boy! Poor, poor sad naiive innocent Edward ;) Author's Response: Even hundred year old virgin vampires can learn new trix...hehe
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 ~ Making Connections ~
Bella's got some serious mojo there! Forcing vampires and shapeshifters alike to settle down and listen to her, then getting inside Angela's head as well! wow!
I'm a little concerned about Edward's upcoming setback... but you're only saying he "contemplates" leaving, not that he does... certainly not if Bella has anything to say about it hehe :) Author's Response: Yup, Bella's got the mojo! She's saucy. hehe
There will be NO New Moon stuff here! I screamed and suffered through New Moon..would never do it. Bella would kick his marble ass first! Hehe
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 ~ Hope Rising ~
aww really loving the way Bella's looking out for everyone in this so far... looking forward to her and Edward getting some real quality time at some point though :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 ~ Bella's Closet ~
hehe I don't know why (aside from admitting yet again my brain is broken) but I just found it really funny that Edward came out of the closet (Bella's) and was better able to be near her?? ;)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 ~ Tipping Points ~
woohoo!! they kissed!! hehe :)
Even better than that, I think, was Jake's grudging respect for Edward and the Cullens... good sign for the future! Author's Response: There's something better than Edward and Bella smooching??!! LOL Jacob is going to get along better with the Cullens in the future, right you are. :-) There will be other angst to worry over without the wolves being a problem...
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 ~ Island in the Stream of Consciousness ~
ohhh Angela's about to get in on the secret! Well, she would've anyways I guess, being Jake's imprint and all hehe
Had to chuckle at Bella's (successful) attempt to get her Prince to kiss her ;)
Author's Response: Yes, Angela will eventually be let in on the secrets since she's Jake's imprint. I do like to add humor into what is a dramatic story, so there will be moments like Bella tricking Edward into kissing her throughout my writing. :-)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 ~ Welcome Home ~
ohh Laurent's joining the fray, this should be fun hehe
But even better, Angela and Jake can finally start getting know each other properly :) Author's Response: I promise lots of fun, drama coming up! Laurent is a vamp, but things might not go the way people expect it to--that's all I can say without ruining things. Yes, Jacob and Angela will have their chance now...if the hospital staff lets them. Hehe Thanks for reading! :-)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 ~ Shifting Gravity ~
lol Alice :)
Have to wonder about the medico's getting over-zealous in checking Angela over - conjured up images of a media-scrum :S
It's a good thing Jake can be intimidating when he wants, and would've been more than strong enough to handle the guards - though it's a relief he didn't have to.
Author's Response: Yes, it would have been awkward if Jake had to phase there at the hospital, wouldn't it? LOL
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 ~ Seeking Truth ~
ohh Angela's in for some interesting discussions with Jake! Bella's got her work cut for her, helping those two as well as Laurent and Sandra... oh and then there's the whole "saving the future thing" and whatever Laurent needed those paintings for in the first place? Looking forward to all the fun and games still to come! :) Author's Response: Yes, some interesting discussions are ahead! The saving the future theme will be a long standing one--that issue will not resolve itself overnight. But there will be lots of fun and games!
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 ~ Advent of Change ~
Angela & Sandra are both up to speed now it seems, & Sandra's gone through her burning. James is obviously still hovering & planning but hopefully the gang will figure that out soon.
It may be wrong of me, but I'm looking forward to whatever it is that Bella's going to call Edward out on, it's been sort of amusing to see them debate/argue together. In a way, it feels like its a contest between Bella's wisdom versus Edward's knowledge :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 ~ Mine ~
woot, Bella finally got a chance to talk about BB to Edward :)
Author's Response: THAT'S what you're excited about? Not the bump and grind? Hehe.
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 01, 2011
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 ~ Pushing Limits ~
ahh Bella's teasing/tormenting Edward there, though I think we're about to see both of them get what they've wanted for a while now?
Laurent's connection to James makes things even trickier, but it does seem that Laurent is more good than bad... we'll see how Sandra influences his behaviour as well.
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 07, 2011
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 ~ Ours ~
hmm what did I think... I think I thought something along the lines of "nom nom nom" hehehe
oh and more than a little nervous for what's looking to be coming up in Seattle :S
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 ~ Can't We All Just Get Along? ~
Fun chapter all around. Especially enjoyed Angela bringing Jake back into line :)
Summary: 
Edward Cullen has hunted the darkest minds since he became a vampire. He's grown weary of the dregs of society and longs to taste the blood of a true innocent. Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take them both? Language, lemons & some violence. All EPOV.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Word count: 194210
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2010 Updated: January 28, 2011
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
nice saves there a few times Edward :)
Even nicer to see them talking happily of "forever"!
Author's Response: Haha yeah he had a couple good moments. Not bad, not bad at all :)
Forever, for them, really is so. And it makes me happy to have them there too!
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I think it should be wrong how much I enjoyed that chapter? Couldn't stop myself from chuckling all the way through Edward's dialogue with Jacob's corpse. Then the shopping and finally Bella's reaction to his little blood test :) Author's Response: :) You know, I was thinking the same thing as I chuckled my way through it! But if it's wrong I don't wanna be right. I already miss Jacob's corpse and he hasn't been gone very long at all. I wish I could keep him around as a secondary character but I didn't want him to get old! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Bella's Past Outtake
Well that was a revealing and painful flashback... to be honest, I'm thinking Edward would simply arrange things so that our new and improved Bella would cross paths with Mike in a way that would allow her some closure... and he wouldn't have to break his promise, because Bella would take care of things herself.
But on the other hand, Bella would potentially feel guilty later, and Edward knows this, so he's still working to avoid her having to feel that.
I'm looking forward to the phonecall to Charlie though, and how Bella interprets the gift from Edward :) Author's Response: He still may arrange a personal interaction, but it'll be down the road when Bella won't kill unless she wants to. He knows how important that is to her and it would really violate her trust if he brought Mike around her for her to kill himself. Though it would be funny, I must say :)
The Charlie phone call is a comin :) I think you guys will like it, I hope so anyway :)
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