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Penname: Daylen [Contact]
Real name: Daniel
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Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.


Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.


Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).


Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)


 


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Reviews by Daylen
 
Summary:

 

 

Bella has the gift of second sight. After a tragic accident her world collides with Edward's. She is expecting him, but he is not ready for her.

An exploration of Edward's growing feelings for the woman he is, at first, salivating to consume.

*** A/U Mostly Canon pairings. Vampire/Human/Wolfpack *Will contain Lemons in later chapters*

**Indie Twific Nominee**

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Completed: Yes Word count: 233653
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2010 Updated: August 15, 2014


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 ~ Island in the Stream of Consciousness ~

ohhh Angela's about to get in on the secret! Well, she would've anyways I guess, being Jake's imprint and all hehe

Had to chuckle at Bella's (successful) attempt to get her Prince to kiss her ;)

 



Author's Response:

Yes, Angela will eventually be let in on the secrets since she's Jake's imprint.  I do like to add humor into what is a dramatic story, so there will be moments like Bella tricking Edward into kissing her throughout my writing.  :-)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 ~ Welcome Home ~

ohh Laurent's joining the fray, this should be fun hehe

But even better, Angela and Jake can finally start getting know each other properly :)



Author's Response:

I promise lots of fun, drama coming up!  Laurent is a vamp, but things might not go the way people expect it to--that's all I can say without ruining things.  Yes, Jacob and Angela will have their chance now...if the hospital staff lets them.  Hehe  Thanks for reading!  :-)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 ~ Shifting Gravity ~

lol Alice :)

Have to wonder about the medico's getting over-zealous in checking Angela over - conjured up images of a media-scrum :S

It's a good thing Jake can be intimidating when he wants, and would've been more than strong enough to handle the guards - though it's a relief he didn't have to.

 



Author's Response:

Yes, it would have been awkward if Jake had to phase there at the hospital, wouldn't it?  LOL

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 ~ Seeking Truth ~

ohh Angela's in for some interesting discussions with Jake! Bella's got her work cut for her, helping those two as well as Laurent and Sandra... oh and then there's the whole "saving the future thing" and whatever Laurent needed those paintings for in the first place? Looking forward to all the fun and games still to come! :)



Author's Response:

Yes, some interesting discussions are ahead!  The saving the future theme will be a long standing one--that issue will not resolve itself overnight.  But there will be lots of fun and games!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 ~ Advent of Change ~

Angela & Sandra are both up to speed now it seems, & Sandra's gone through her burning. James is obviously still hovering & planning but hopefully the gang will figure that out soon.
It may be wrong of me, but I'm looking forward to whatever it is that Bella's going to call Edward out on, it's been sort of amusing to see them debate/argue together. In a way, it feels like its a contest between Bella's wisdom versus Edward's knowledge :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 ~ Mine ~

woot, Bella finally got a chance to talk about BB to Edward :)

 



Author's Response:

THAT'S what you're excited about?  Not the bump and grind?  Hehe.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 ~ Pushing Limits ~

ahh Bella's teasing/tormenting Edward there, though I think we're about to see both of them get what they've wanted for a while now?

Laurent's connection to James makes things even trickier, but it does seem that Laurent is more good than bad... we'll see how Sandra influences his behaviour as well.

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 ~ Ours ~

hmm what did I think... I think I thought something along the lines of "nom nom nom" hehehe

oh and more than a little nervous for what's looking to be coming up in Seattle :S

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 ~ Can't We All Just Get Along? ~

Fun chapter all around. Especially enjoyed Angela bringing Jake back into line :)

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen has hunted the darkest minds since he became a vampire.  He's grown weary of the dregs of society and longs to taste the blood of a true innocent.  Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take them both?  Language, lemons & some violence.  All EPOV.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 194210
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2010 Updated: January 28, 2011


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

nice saves there a few times Edward :)
Even nicer to see them talking happily of "forever"!

Author's Response:

Haha yeah he had a couple good moments.  Not bad, not bad at all :) 

Forever, for them, really is so.  And it makes me happy to have them there too!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think it should be wrong how much I enjoyed that chapter? Couldn't stop myself from chuckling all the way through Edward's dialogue with Jacob's corpse. Then the shopping and finally Bella's reaction to his little blood test :)



Author's Response:

:) You know, I was thinking the same thing as I chuckled my way through it!  But if it's wrong I don't wanna be right.  I already miss Jacob's corpse and he hasn't been gone very long at all.  I wish I could keep him around as a secondary character but I didn't want him to get old!  Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Bella's Past Outtake

Well that was a revealing and painful flashback... to be honest, I'm thinking Edward would simply arrange things so that our new and improved Bella would cross paths with Mike in a way that would allow her some closure... and he wouldn't have to break his promise, because Bella would take care of things herself.

But on the other hand, Bella would potentially feel guilty later, and Edward knows this, so he's still working to avoid her having to feel that.

I'm looking forward to the phonecall to Charlie though, and how Bella interprets the gift from Edward :)



Author's Response:

He still may arrange a personal interaction, but it'll be down the road when Bella won't kill unless she wants to.  He knows how important that is to her and it would really violate her trust if he brought Mike around her for her to kill himself.  Though it would be funny, I must say :)

The Charlie phone call is a comin :)  I think you guys will like it, I hope so anyway :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

ok after all that, I'm with Edward on that one - "Holy fuck, it worked?!" geez... I can see both Bella and Edward taunting each other with the "what if I did this with that random person over there" :)

 



Author's Response:

Hee, well Bella can't really do that since she can't be around anyone but Edward at this point.  And just cause it worked for a moment doesn't mean it worked for good :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

It builds and builds and then goes sideways in funny ways again ;)

"I was hot, she was hot, together we’d be molten hot, what more was there to analyze?"

seems like it should be on a T-shirt!!



Author's Response:

Ha, that would be an excellent T-shirt indeed.  What more is there, really?  Poor Edward!  He'll find out!  They made a lot of progress though!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

great chapter! :) I was a little concerned that Bella was going to hold off ln her reciprocal declaration, but it seems Charlie's pushing made her focus her thougbts & answer from the heart :)

Author's Response:

hee, I always knew she'd tell Edward while on the phone with Charlie.  Him giving her father back in the only way he could for now really drove his true feelings home to her, and she needed that shield at the same time.  Glad you liked it :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

oohhh this should be REALLY interesting to see what happens next! :)

Edward's really done so well learning to love and be more human (in a way) for Bella, now I'm thinking we'll be seeing just how vampiric Bella can be in how she deals with Victoria? :)



Author's Response:

Yes, Bella's definitely brought out the human in our vamp :)  He's a real man now, I think!  Bella vs. Victoria is coming up!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

hmm not sure exactly what Edward has in mind on his way home to Bella, but I think, if he's lucky, and presents all the information "just right" to Bella... she might just forgive him. Well, her human-self would've, but the more primal vampire in her is probably going to want to throw him through a wall hehe

Looking forward to seeing which way it goes :)

Oh and it may make me a bad person... but I couldn't help cracking up at Edward's recalling of his special time in church ;)



Author's Response:

Hee, if you're a bad person for laughing at the church scene, what am I for writing it?  I'll be on the lookout for lightning the next time I approach a church!

I think you're quite right.  Rational Bella would understand but volatile, newborn Bella might have an adverse reaction.  At first.  For awhile.  For a long time. hehe We'll have to see if he's able to convince her to listen to reason.  Though, we all know he likes her when she's raging as well.  At least Edward Junior does! :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Cowtake

hahahaha ahh geez... i spent the whole time reading that having to choke back a lot of laughs... it's late and I didn't want to wake anyone with my guffaws :D



Author's Response:

I love making you laugh!  Glad you didn't wake up the fam though! ;)  Too much fun!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

that was so cool!! (and i don't really care how adolescent I sound at that lol)

Really glad Edward managed to restrain himself from asking that question at the end - after all they've done, and all the changes we've seen in Edward especially, I think they need a more memorable moment.

So sad that it's virtually over, it's been intense, dramatic, comedic and just awesome :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Cool works for me, always been one of my favorite words.  We can be adolescent together!

Haha I'm sure he'll do his best to make the moment memorable.  We'll see how it goes!  My plan is for it to be very true to who he is. hehe

Two more to go!  Hopefully they'll be just as well enjoyed as the others :)  Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

hahahaha I know I probably shouldn't be laughing since there's Bella's feelings and a whole lot of human lives in the balance, but I was chuckling throughout most of the chapter and finally lost it at Edward's "Game on, Bella Swan"!! :)



Author's Response:

:) I laughed a lot while writing it, so I'm glad to hear others laughed as well!  I adore writing Edward's special brand of logic and it'll be fun to watch these two take one another on, I hope!  Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Well, I think I was laughing all the way through that chapter. Edward's little comments to himself and apparent uncontrollable urge to tell the truth to Bella are just too funny to read :)

I think Bella almost pimping him out steals the scene though, even if it does make a strange amount of sense! Can't wait to see how the date works out, hopefully not badly for anyone involved... except maybe Edward, considering he'll probably have to eat some human food etc!



Author's Response:

:) Is it wrong to admit that I kinda giggle my way through the chapters as well?  He amuses the hell out of me even if he is mine.  Since I don't know where he's coming from, perhaps I'm laughing at something another personality of mine wrote. 

Like you, I have fun with that interior monologue.  He thinks about lying to her but then decides it's really not worth the effort and she'll only get more pissed down the road.

Bella definitely identifies with Angela and in her own sweet way she just wants to make the girl feel good.  It might not be a wise choice but hopefully Edward can use it to his advantage to get her under his thumb a little.  It's only fair!  I look forward to seeing how it goes myself!  Thanks so much for reviewing :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

uh oh!!

While Edward's been out righting wrongs in a way that Bella may not approve of, someone's been paying a visit to Bella???

hmmm

Aro??



Author's Response:

Hehe I'm not saying!  But I love the guesses I'm getting .  Makes me laugh :)  Yeah, I'm sure Bella knew he was hunting, we'll see how that ends up going!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

oh wow, Bella's so much fun when she's flying off the handle like that! It's good that Edward's choosing the full-honesty path and having it work for him so far :)

 



Author's Response:

Hee, she is indeed.  Now he has to worry about throwing along with hitting and kicking.  Our boy has his hands full!  He can't lie to Bella, even when he'd like to.  I think it's kinda sweet!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

oh I can totally see Edward letting that L-word out without even realising it! He'll be a couple minutes into responding to Bella's reaction before he puts it together hehe ;)



Author's Response:

Hee..yes, I imagine the first time he says it out loud will be a bit of an accident :)  I can't see him wanting to share that on purpose!  Denial it is a coming. hehe

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

hehe Edward's amusing at his attempts to convince himself he's not in love... but Bella's hilarious with her teasing there :)



Author's Response:

Hehe well yeah, Love isn't something on Edward's radar and he's not overly happy with the idea but at least he's starting to admit it to himself!

 




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