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Penname: Daylen [Contact]
Real name: Daniel
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Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.


Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.


Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).


Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)


 


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Reviews by Daylen
 
Summary:

 

 

Bella has the gift of second sight. After a tragic accident her world collides with Edward's. She is expecting him, but he is not ready for her.

An exploration of Edward's growing feelings for the woman he is, at first, salivating to consume.

*** A/U Mostly Canon pairings. Vampire/Human/Wolfpack *Will contain Lemons in later chapters*

**Indie Twific Nominee**

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Completed: No Word count: 225646
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2010 Updated: July 24, 2014


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 ~ I Know What You Are ~

hmm so Laurent is apparently very much a "good" guy as far as these things go. BB has an idea that should save Edward, though I'm sort of thinking it might not? Because that would almost be too easy ;)

Oh and B&E finally confessed their real feelings for each other... times are on their way to being really good hehe

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 ~ Soul Mates ~

uh oh ... i believe "dun dun duuunnnn" was the only thing missing there hehe



Author's Response:

ROF!  Queue creepy music...next chapter is waiting in the queue for approval, so the mystery will be over shortly!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 ~ Yours ~

hmm so I'm thinking Bella needs to give Edward some intel on James and Victoria - at least we know "which" psychic they seem to be after now...

or perhaps Bella could get some things written down to be found by the Cullens should the need arise?

At least she's finally getting Marked though :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Christmas Interludes

hehe kinda liked Jane in that one....

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 ~ Burn, Baby, Burn ~

hmm so it appears Alice is the target, and Bella's going to be the sweetener when they find her?

At least the Pack and the Cullens are working on their alliance quite well so far :)

Really looking forward to Angela waking up, I get the feeling her friendship with Bella, and the connection of both of them to Jacob, is going to help smothing any ruffled fur or bruised egos as the alliance grows :)



Author's Response:

We shall see as the story goes on what Vic and James are really up to.  It seems easier for the pack to work with the Cullens when there is another enemy to fight.  You are very observant--Bella and Angela's friendship may come in handy over time in helping to bridge the gaps.  Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 ~ Every Life Has a Measure of Sorrow ~

uh oh... I really was hoping I was wrong, or that the family would react faster... I wonder now though, whether vamp-time-travelling-Bella knew about this in her sojourns with her younger self :P

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 24, 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41 ~ Rescues and Ruses ~

All I can say is oh wow!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 ~ The Big Reveal ~

ahh loved Sandra's reaction to Laurent's revelations, but I think I'm really looking forward to Bella and Edward's discussion coming up??? Is "discussion" even the right word? And is it wrong of me to be enjoying the thought of Bella telling the big bad vampire his "place"? ;)

 



Author's Response:

ROFL, Bella is saucy in my story--she'll never let anyone, including Edward, get away with telling her what to do.  Although, she isn't silly about things--she knows when she needs help and when to admit she's wrong.

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 ~ Run For Her Life ~

and there's another story I'm waiting on baited breath for the next chapter...

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 ~Foundations and First Sightings~

lol enjoyed Bella's Visions of the wolves and what sounds like a typically mischievious Jacob :)



Author's Response:

Jacob will be a little bit mischievious in the story, but essentially this is an Edward/Bella romance.  There will NOT be a love triangle and I am not going to demonize Jacob.  He will actually get his own love interest and be a major part of this story.  :-)  Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 ~ The Eyes of My Adonis ~

I'm not sure why, and if it's appropriate, but the idea of Bella and Alice being able to meet in Vision/Dream world is fun and appealing... potentially migraine-inducing for Edward - which makes it all the better hehe :)



Author's Response:

ROFL!  I have many chapters already written.  The visions will continue, but Bella and Alice will meet in the flesh somewhere around chapter 9.  Don't worry, there will be lots of migraine inducing moments for our favorite vampire, hehe.  Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 ~ Date Night ~

ahh I always like Angela :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear that!  Angela is going to be a major character in this story.  :-)  I always thought she was underutilized.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 ~ Brown Haired Girl ~

Hmm that was quite interesting really - Alice has her work cut out for her to keep that from Edward :S

I wonder if she'll have any other chances to communicate with Bella before they meet in person?



Author's Response:

Um...Edward is going to be difficult at the beginning of this story.  Things will get better, but he will give them all a run for their money, LOL.

Yes!  Alice and Bella will have a bit more communication before they meet in the flesh.  Thanks for reading!  :-)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 & 6 ~Possession~ ** ~Waking Visions~

ohh I can't wait to get into the real fun. I'm really liking the support Bella has from Angela, and now Alice. I do wonder how Edward's going to handle having two prophetic women shoving & nudging him where they want him ;)

 



Author's Response:

Things are going to be dicey with Edward at the beginning--and it's not all because of Bella's gift!  He's going to have to get over his blood-lust before he has to worry about other issues.  I think you will find that Bella's gift often enhances her relationship with Edward.  :-)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 ~ La Tua Cantante ~

so glad to see Alice and Bella meeting up for "real" now - even better that the rest of the family looks like they're getting on board. Edward's got some impulses to control, but he does appear to be on the right track at least, more or less :)



Author's Response:

Yes, it's exciting that Alice and Bella get to meet in the flesh and they will become really good friends.  Jasper will be a really good friend to Bella as well (no control issues for him in this story) and he will be instrumental in helping Edward get over his blood-lust.  But the romance won't happen overnight...Edward is going to struggle a while yet.  Emmett will be helpful, Carlisle is supportive...Rose will be her usual bitchy self, LOL.  Thanks so much for reading!  :-)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 ~ Sanguinary Aftermath ~

ohh i'm so glad that Angela's prognosis is better than the characters know right now :)

Very curious to see how Bella deals with the new knowledge of the wolves... and perhaps is able to change that vision of the confrontation.



Author's Response:

Yes, Angela will be back with us, but it will be a while yet.  Some things will happen around her and inside her head, so she won't be completely out of the story.

Although we don't have a love triangle in my story (I so didn't want to go that route with Edward and Jacob) there will be some confrontation and male posturing before things settle down--just because it's fun!  Hehe.  I will drop you a little clue though...Edward will be instrumental in helping Jacob reach Angela at some point.

As far as visions go, Bella's are not all literal.  Some of them are symbolic or likely, but none are set in stone. For example, the one of Edward and the wolf in the clearing was more of an introduction to what was coming up.  Thanks for reading!  :-)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 ~ I Don't Feel Anything...Or Do I? ~

uh oh... looks like there's a Volturi-influence about to show up? :(

Edward's always funny when he's in denial hehe :)



Author's Response:

The Volturi foreshadowing is waaaaay down the pike.  There will be hints of things to come here and there, but nothing will happen with that for quite a while.  Yes, Edward in denial is amusing!  Next chapter is up!  :-)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 ~ Changing Currents ~

oohhh boy! Poor, poor sad naiive innocent Edward ;)



Author's Response:

Even hundred year old virgin vampires can learn new trix...hehe

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 ~ Making Connections ~

Bella's got some serious mojo there! Forcing vampires and shapeshifters alike to settle down and listen to her, then getting inside Angela's head as well! wow!

I'm a little concerned about Edward's upcoming setback... but you're only saying he "contemplates" leaving, not that he does... certainly not if Bella has anything to say about it hehe :)



Author's Response:

Yup, Bella's got the mojo!  She's saucy.  hehe

There will be NO New Moon stuff here!  I screamed and suffered through New Moon..would never do it.  Bella would kick his marble ass first!  Hehe

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 ~ Hope Rising ~

aww really loving the way Bella's looking out for everyone in this so far... looking forward to her and Edward getting some real quality time at some point though :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 ~ Bella's Closet ~

hehe I don't know why (aside from admitting yet again my brain is broken) but I just found it really funny that Edward came out of the closet (Bella's) and was better able to be near her?? ;)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 ~ Tipping Points ~

woohoo!! they kissed!! hehe :)

Even better than that, I think, was Jake's grudging respect for Edward and the Cullens... good sign for the future!



Author's Response:

There's something better than Edward and Bella smooching??!!  LOL  Jacob is going to get along better with the Cullens in the future, right you are.  :-)  There will be other angst to worry over without the wolves being a problem...

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 ~ Island in the Stream of Consciousness ~

ohhh Angela's about to get in on the secret! Well, she would've anyways I guess, being Jake's imprint and all hehe

Had to chuckle at Bella's (successful) attempt to get her Prince to kiss her ;)

 



Author's Response:

Yes, Angela will eventually be let in on the secrets since she's Jake's imprint.  I do like to add humor into what is a dramatic story, so there will be moments like Bella tricking Edward into kissing her throughout my writing.  :-)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 ~ Welcome Home ~

ohh Laurent's joining the fray, this should be fun hehe

But even better, Angela and Jake can finally start getting know each other properly :)



Author's Response:

I promise lots of fun, drama coming up!  Laurent is a vamp, but things might not go the way people expect it to--that's all I can say without ruining things.  Yes, Jacob and Angela will have their chance now...if the hospital staff lets them.  Hehe  Thanks for reading!  :-)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 ~ Shifting Gravity ~

lol Alice :)

Have to wonder about the medico's getting over-zealous in checking Angela over - conjured up images of a media-scrum :S

It's a good thing Jake can be intimidating when he wants, and would've been more than strong enough to handle the guards - though it's a relief he didn't have to.

 



Author's Response:

Yes, it would have been awkward if Jake had to phase there at the hospital, wouldn't it?  LOL

 




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