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Penname: Daylen [Contact]
Real name: Daniel
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Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.


Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.


Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).


Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)


 


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Reviews by Daylen
 
Entwined by La_Tua_Cantante_83 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 524]
Summary:

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Six months ago, Edward Cullen left Forks, trying to escape the bloodlust that was sure to be his downfall. Now he's returned, only to find that he can never truly escape what the Fate's have destined for him. Together with the one whose fate is twisted with his, he must find a way to protect what matters most. Rated Mature. Vamp, AU.    


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 220424
[Report This] Published: February 28, 2010 Updated: November 18, 2012


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: As Always, Unexpected

on the plus side, this means Bella and Edward get some more one-on-one time, even if they're aboout to spend part of it debating on whether to scout out what's going on...

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Burning Questions

hehe love the way Bella's got them all off balance, except maybe Alice :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review... Yes, Bella will have a way of turning their world and what they know of it upside down. And I wouldn't be so sure that even Alice saw her coming...

=)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: No...

I was a little confused about the Cullens' removing all trace of Bella from the crash. Though I guess it does at least leave the way open for her to return without having to hide.

Very much looking forward to when she wakes up and (hopefully) gets a chance to tell Edward it's ok and that she appreciates his words and presence through her Change :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing.

It isn't so much about her being able to return (that discussion came after the act of clearing) as much as it about not giving them a trail to follow. If her car was there, and there was no body, there would either be evidence of foul play, OR she'd be taken off by a bear or something.

THey decided to wipe her out completely, so there wouldn't be any evidence to follow. They will obviously still be missing her, and looking for her, but they won't have anywhere spoecific too look.

Hope that clears that up for you! 

And waking up? Next chapter! Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Keeping Secrets, Telling Lies

hehe ah Edward, so much to learn, hopefully without hurting Bella's feelings too much. :)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: How Easily the Wind Carries Our Ashes Away

powerful stuff - though I'm not certain that Bella will be able to bring the same blood-less resolution to the problem with the wolves, but we'll see :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Poisoned Peaches & Ballerina Daydreams

well, they're getting closer, it's nice to see them really working on being friends before they let themselves go further :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. They are really going to grow in these upcomeing chapters. Without the saga backstory, they need to learn about each other. Thanks again!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Snapshots

hmm I think the one thing im most happy about there is that neither of them really took bad steps backwards. had a good chuckle at Emmet's losses, oh & the Denali's interactions are always interesting to see hehe :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Space-Time Continuum

well , well, Edward's "waking up" to his feelings... now I just hope Bella's getting onto the same page soon. I'm guessing the presence of the Denali's will push things along a bit too.

Oh, and Edward's probably lucky to still have his arm attached with the way Bella stopped on that run hehe :)

 
Summary:

Bella Swan has had a difficult life, but she has no memory of it. Her new boss, Edward Masen, is a striking man with a dark past of his own. As their paths cross her life takes a turn, sending her pain to the forefront. Will Bella be able to overcome her past?  Will she be able to free Edward from his?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: No Word count: 137751
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2010 Updated: May 14, 2011


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: 22 - Love Distended

wow Bella's really got her hands full keeping those three boys in line hehe :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Ch 32 Balancing on the Edge

is it hugely wrong of me that I kinda broke into a maniacal crazy laugh as I read the slip? :S

I'm hoping I don't feel guilty at the revelation of what happens next...

 



Author's Response:

You're not crazy, Bella is a clutz!  LOL

 
Heal Me by way2old4this Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 162]
Summary:

  Takes place about five years after the battle in Eclipse.  Things didn't go so well in the fight and Jasper was left devastated.

  Five years later, will a chance encounter with a unique girl begin to change his world for the better?

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Jasper, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 49881
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2010 Updated: December 06, 2010


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

and we see that Ember sort of lives up to her name now - with her burning anger reducing one vamp to dust :)



Author's Response:

:) Don't mess w/ her Jasper! :) Thanks for the note!
~Mary 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

ok I think I have a new catch-phrase: "Life sucks, and then you un-die" - thanks, Ember! :)



Author's Response:

:)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

while it's never 'fun' to read about any of the Cullens, especially Alice, leaving us, Ember seems to have settled a few things in her own mind to be more comfortable with how her life appears to be going right now :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Good to hear that a few more wolves from La Push survived :)
I had been wondering if taking Michael out of the picture would fix the memory damage, it would appear his ability worked similar to how we've seen Chelsea's & Jane's in most cases, requiring some kind of constant attention.
Finally, though, Jasper & Ember can have some happy times with the family :)

Author's Response:

Yes, finally time for some peace and quiet for J & E :)  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
~Mary

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Jasper and Ember finally get some fun times after all that drama :)

Here's hoping Carlisle's theory is correct!!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

jasper would appear to be in for an interesting journey with Ember, though I'm still kind of bummed that it's cost us Alice (she's always been my favourite :S)

Looking forward to how Ember reacts to what's happened :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Alice is also one of my favorites, so it was kind of hard to take her away like that.  But I didn't want them to break up, so I chose this route.  I really appreciate you giving my story a chance.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

aww so cute but oh so nice to see Jasper and Ember finally get on the same page together hehe :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

nicely done Ember and Rose hehe ;)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Liking the T-shirt! Oh and hey, nice work on keeping Emmett under wraps hehe ;)



Author's Response:

I do love picking on Emmett. :) Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

hmm so with the tangled web that Caius seems to have been weaving all this time, I wonder should we be sighing in relief that Ember and Jasper are "free" or maybe suspicious that they're tracking down the Cullens now... Ember's going to be more than a little pissed & devastated if Jasper and/or Daniel turn out to be playing her.

 



Author's Response:

*twirls imaginary mustache* MWAHAAHAA

I have actually thought about this...still thinking about it...

Thanks for reading & reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

hmm as much as there's so much drama happening, I think Ember and Jasper are "practicing" to eventually add to that eight.

Although Emmett would probably claim Jasper has to start over? Now that I've typed it, it sounds in poor-form given the reasons, but I can still see them being able to get the humour out of it somewhat :)



Author's Response:

LOL  I have thought about that. Not sure if I'm going to do it yet or not, like you said, the circumstances aren't the greatest.

Thanks for reading & leaving a note :)  ~Mary

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

whew - while i wasn't too worried about Ember being bumped off, I was a little concerned about her and Jasper being separated or her being badly hurt. Especially after the happy proposal that Jasper made (even though he doesn't consciouslly remember her just yet hehe) just can't beat love, it seems :)

 



Author's Response:

:)  Thank you for the review!  Definately can't beat love. :)

~Mary

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Ember and Jasper got there eventually. I have to admit I was more than a little concerned a few times. Especially right around the time Jasper's memories were manipulated and Ember was captive.. I wasn't sure just how dark you'd go for the story. Happily, they've ended up together and stronger than ever :)

 

 
Summary:

When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath. 

Hurt/Comfort/Romance, ExB

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No Word count: 165768
[Report This] Published: March 05, 2010 Updated: October 06, 2013


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 06, 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Congratulations on the job front! As for the chapter, I think both Bella & Edward just HAD a major turning point! so if that's not it, then the next chapter must be aiming for the stratosphere :)Good luck with the trip!

 



Author's Response:

Ha ha. Well, you're right there was a big milestone reached in this chapter as well. It just wasn't the one I was thinking of when I mentioned it in the last chapter and I didn't want anyone to think I'd led them astray. Thanks so much for coming back to read. It means a lot.

FYI: MT was nominated for Favorite MY EMOTIONS Fic at the 2013 TwiFic Fandom Awards! If you are so inclined I would love your vote! Polls close Sunday, November 3, at 11:59pm EST. Vote here.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

As much as I don't like the circumstances, I was happy to see Bella defend Edward, and their relationship.

Next chapter is going to be very intense :P

 



Author's Response:

The next chapter is going to be VERY intense. Thank you for reviewing! 

 




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