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Penname: Daylen [Contact]
Real name: Daniel
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Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.


Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.


Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).


Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)


 


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Ethics Be Damned by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 914]
Summary:

 

Awesome banner made by my Beta xrxdanixrx...she is a genius and I can't stop staring at it...

 

“What are you thinking?” Edward asked me.

“I’m thinking about how big of a failure I am,” I answered truthfully.

We were still holding each other in his classroom and I realized quickly how dangerous that was...that was where Edward and I went wrong. The need we both felt to touch each other was costing us, and if I didn’t put a stop to it, well, I knew things were going to get worse way before they got better.

Edward narrowed his eyes at me disapprovingly. “You're not a failure, Bella.”

The furrow in his brow only increased as I put some distance between us. He reached out to bring me back in, but I shook my head stubbornly.

“I’m not running,” I assured him, “but we need to stop being so open. While I’m here, we need to at least pretend I’m your student.”

Edward ran his hands through his hair roughly and I envied him at that moment.  Only a minute had passed and I was already losing my resolve.

“She’s right, you know.”  

My body tensed to the voice that suddenly was in the room with us. It was unfamiliar and I couldn’t place it for the life of me, but this unknown voice was agreeing with me--which meant, this unknown person heard everything I said…

Oh shit, oh shit…

Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...

 

 

Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.

 Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?

 

 Beautiful banner made by SoapyMayhem....Thanks girl!!!

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 196714
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2010 Updated: December 23, 2010


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

hehe is it wrong that I'm just thinking Edward's gone a little too "teacher" with Bella there, and he should watch out for the turn around when she educates him on the law? ;)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

uh oh (and various other stronger versions of the words)

I always start worrying when a character says anything like "nothing's going to happen, trust me":S

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

aaand we all heave a collective sigh of relief now ;)

Of course, what this does to their case is going to be interesting to see - and Edward's going to have a hard time getting his protective instinct under control, perhaps? Or is he going to go the other way and think that Bella really doesn't "need" him?

Looking forward to it :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

well, all things considered, Edward took that surprisingly well. I guess he was better able to focus on the fact that Bella was there in his arms whilst telling him about her "day" :)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Well I like that James eventually gave them something more useful to work with, even if they're still struggling for ideas.

It was good to see Bella stand up for herself, again, but also much more firmly amongst her colleagues and peers.

I did start laughing at Edward's "so why don't we" at the end though... I'm curious about the friend of the parents' I'm almost thinking it could be Aro or someone connected somehow, but that seems too much of a stretch lol

We'll see :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

ok i don't know what would've been more scary for Bella - the whole thing with James, or Edward asking her to marry him... hmmm...

different "type" of fear, but maybe same sort of scale? hehe

Oh and Alice was so funny :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

ohh boy! I suspected it, but I was waiting to see... this should be VERY interesting to see how much Aro's already aware of - perhaps some subtle word-games are coming up?

Is Bella going to be able to resist going searching for possible evidence since she's on his home turf? hmmm

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

ah Bella - it never rains but it pours! :S

Still, I'm kind of enjoying the standoff she's creating for herself out of the maelstrom that's building up :)

I wonder what Edward will do when Bella gets a chance to lay things out for him - believe the girl or the long-time family friend?

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

It's going to be tricky, but I can see Bella getting into a very complicated word-game with Aro now that he's revealed enough that he knows about her.

I'm not thinking that Reed is an idiot so much as I'm thinking he's a possible mole, or even a dupe for one - if the dim light thing isn't so much of an act, then it's entirely possible Aro has someone close to Reed that the agent doesn't realise he's a leak.

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

ohhhh things just got even more complicated than I was expecting them to be!! Looking forward to how this unfolds, Bella's got some quick thinking to do to stall Aro enough for help to arrive?

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

woot Charlie to the rescue!! Just hope he doesn't get killed for this! :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

aaannnddd... exhale in relief that everyone's made it through that!

That was some pretty smooth deductive work and nice timing there for Edward. It's kind of a shame that Aro doesn't appear to have lived long enough to see his plans fall apart completely on him, though Edward's parting words to him were probably enough, along with realising he'd lost his own end of things.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

awww i think i was hoping that Bella would remain blissfully ignorant until the last moment... but I guess she didn't make Detective for no reason, so it might've been odd for her to not notice.

Although... she may still have just enough self-doubt on that front to be questioning her conclusion until the last moment.... can't wait to find out :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue

awwww well they made it there finally :)

 



Author's Response:

I know I promised a wedding in EBD, but I thought that E/B deserved a private wedding just for themselves. You know when they get back to Seattle how chaotic it's going to be...especially when Beth gets involved...oh dear.

Much Love,

Korry

 
Summary:

Addictions are never easy to cope with and Bella is all too familiar with their destructive power as she struggles with the nightmares from her past. It isn't until the Cullens arrive in Forks that Bella realizes if she doesn't get out now, her addictions will stick with her for life.

 

Thank you to Maddux for the fantastic banner! It is genius and I love it! :)


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 118539
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2010 Updated: January 23, 2013


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Your Guardian Angel

hmm haven't seen that strategy before really... the old "hey, you really should stop cutting because it's only making things worse for your vampire boyfriend who already wants to chow-down on your blood" :)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Sooner or Later

Edward's discussion with Bella about being mates went better than I'd braced myself for. Perhaps that's partly because Bella's always seen him differently even if she hasn't quite understood or accepted why.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Hit the Floor

eh I don't expect Charlie to be angry per se, maybe a bit disappointed since it makes things more complicated for a moment... can't wait to hear what Emmett says about Bella's actions though, and at least Bella wasn't punching a werewolf/shapeshifter hehehe

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Blurry

hmm so is Renee's return going to be bad or worse... not sure we could call it "good" on any level since that'd be a tough sell for Bella right now?
I liked that Charlie seems to be accepting of Edward's presence and Bella's comfort around him.

I wonder what Bella and Edward's respective reactions are going to be about the "mate" tag being out of the bag now... once Bella remembers it or Rose recalls saying it around Edward :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: 4AM Forever

Good to see Bella raise the question of what a "mate" is in vampire terms, looking forward to Edward's explaination hehe
I think Alice having the talk with Bella about her cutting was perfect really, even with the close call. it was a dramatic change to see perky Alice really show her vamp side and bring the point home to Bella that its time to find the will & way to stop.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Hit the Floor

ahh Bella, not that I condone violence, but that was a well-aimed punch :)

On the bright side, it's more Edward-time without school or parents in the way!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Brothers on a Hotel Bed

ohh boy... Alice is going to be in trouble, I think?

I just hope Edward doesn't get too far in his own "idea" of how Bella should live her life, she's had enough types of rejection to deal with already.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Sound of Pulling Heaven Down

"Awwwwwww"

 

I think that about says it all ;)

 
Summary:

 

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A timeline is just an illusion because time doesn't always run in a straight line. In a moment of monumental change time can fracture and jump. When that happens nothing is ever predictable, or stable, again.

Sarelle is a normal nine year old girl in 1910. Until one night her world plunges into the unknown and she becomes an involuntary time traveller.

She has no control over where she goes or when she leaves.

If she has the ability to jump through time, then how will her encounters with the Cullens effect their lives?


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Renata, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 115738
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2010 Updated: November 20, 2011


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - A Spark

aww what a place to break! Now I'm left wondering if Sarelle just jumped or passed out :) Edward's reaction is interesting, was she singing to him or just really familiar in her appeal? Hopefully there'll be a little more interaction before Sarelle leaves again :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - From Spark to Flickering Flame

argh ohh I was looking forward to Edward and Sarelle getting to their more meaningful discussion, but I guess it's too soon for that just yet :(

It was good that they had SOME talk though... and it seems Edward either could read Sarelle's mind, and was confused by the disjointed memories that wouldn't make sense to him coming from a young girl... or he wasn't getting a clean read in the first place?

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Just The Way Life Is

hmm so now we meet Emmett's family, I wonder if this is the time he's come off 2nd best against the bear?
Whilst it's sad that Sarelle didn't get her chance for a proper goodbye, at least she got to leave a note for Renee :)

 




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