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Penname: Daylen [ Contact]
Real name: Daniel
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Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.
Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.
Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).
Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)
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Summary: The sequel to A Light in the Darkness. Basking follows Carlisle and Bella as they begin their lives as husband and wife. What awaits them in their new life?

Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Carlisle
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 46 Completed: No
Word count: 189280
[Report This] Published: January 10, 2010 Updated: January 05, 2011
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Making Up
hehe I'm wanting to see Alice's reaction really, since she wasn't able to "see" what Bella was up to ;)
Carlisle's going to be easy enough to handle, he's likely going to love it, but if he shows any signs of not being pleased, Bella just say it really itches or something... Carlisle will kiss it better for her :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Newborn
ahh newborn Bella looks like she's going to be a lot of fun for everyone involved :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Human Experiences
hmm Bella's hormones are way out of whack perhaps? Carrying a hybrid baby would have to have some kind of impact on her system especially since the blood lust is usually closely tied to other types of lust for vampires? hehe
I "may" have laughed quite loudly when Jasper and Emmett were discussing Carlisle's desirability lol :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Fantasy Isle
hmm I think Bella was waiting a while for that too hehe
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Hot Springs
hmm so Emmett and the 'kids' have a prank to play on the happy couple when they return?
I can see Carlisle creating "rules" in future just to see how Bella bends or breaks them hehe ;)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: A Pit Stop
hehe Carlisle's surely got even more languages to draw upon any time he wants to get Bella worked up ;)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Descriptions
I know Bella's frustrated that with all that sun, she's still only a couple shades darker than Carlisle, but I'd be glad not to be lobster shade, to be honest hehe
As for what real life brings - it brings that mixture of good and bad that makes us want to distinguish and separate from the ideal by labelling it as "real life" :P
It's usually interesting, at the very least, and with all the jokes and heckling likely to happen in the house, it should be very entertaining :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: There's No Place Like Home
hahah loved Bella's tackling of the whole family!! I almost expected her to say one more direct thing in response to Alice's question at the end... like "sexed him into the 21st Century" or something... but "hurry up" worked just as well :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Crimson and Black Leather
I'm thinking the Ducati + Leather undergarments = Bella in-charge; and Carlisle loves it! hehe
I did roll my eyes and chuckle at the "lovely scenery to show" line, it's always fun to see Dr C flustered like that ;)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Boys Will Be Boys
hahahah oh geez... I'm not sure if I should've been laughing so much at the way Jasper and Emmett ganged up on Carlisle, but it was pretty darned funny.
Just imagining how many "paybacks" there could be for all those times being grounded or having to accept Carlisle's authority for the benefit of observers?
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Telling Stories
oook... so Alice may or may not have enough information for a warning. Or at least, the family's response will be to be on guard and start searching out more information and possible friends.
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Girl Talk
hmm well now that Alice has given Bella the inside-track on the effect of saying "Dr Cullen", i guess we'll hearing that a lot more ;)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Grief
it's a shock that Bella's had to go through more grief.. but the video seems to have helped her a lot. This really allowed Rose's strength to shine more than anything.
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Revalations
oohh boy! Caius seems more than a little pissed... and I wonder how long before his connection to the Newborn Army and Esme & Edward's deaths come out - maybe just in time for an eventually-vamp'd Bella to smack him down? :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: One Last Birthday
hmm yeah... Bella seems pretty fine ;)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: The Doctor's Appointment
I'm thinking Carlisle's going to want that nurse's outfit kept on hand for a while hehe
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Going Greek
ohh Carlisle's got some great lines there, might have to write a few of those down hehe :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Viva La Italia
hmm it's Italy, so I'm thinking it has to be the Volturi watching in some way... but we'll see :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Coming Together
oh boy... real trouble from Caius it seems... maybe Aro's not going to be the big baddie to be worried about this time around? :P
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - I See France
hehe poor Alice
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Oh My God
enjoying this path so far hehe Carlisle's far more fun & happy at his prospective fatherhood :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - I Love This
heheheheh I can't wait to see Alice's reaction to the "why" of her blindness :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Our News
Carlisle's certainly been thinking hard on the topic, putting those moments when Bella's asleep to good use hehe
I'm thinking Rosalie might end up being overly protective perhaps? Trying to get Bella to rest all the time and not let her do things for herself? Should be interesting to see. Of course, Alice is going to be frenetic with shopping and designing a nursery?
Hmm lots of fun ahead :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Humiliation and Domination
oh boy! Bella's become very adept at dishing things back at Emmett hehe :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Pregnancy Progress
hhahaha loved the meadow/moose moment - seems Bella's got her favourite "food" for now :)
I wonder what they're hearing that's obviously not adding up to the ultrasound? An extra beat perhaps? :)
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