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Penname: Daylen [Contact]
Real name: Daniel
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.


Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.


Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).


Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)


 


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Reviews by Daylen
 
Summary:

BITLBanner.jpgThe sequel to A Light in the Darkness. Basking follows Carlisle and Bella as they begin their lives as husband and wife. What awaits them in their new life?

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Carlisle
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Completed: No Word count: 189280
[Report This] Published: January 10, 2010 Updated: January 05, 2011


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Grief

it's a shock that Bella's had to go through more grief.. but the video seems to have helped her a lot. This really allowed Rose's strength to shine more than anything.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Revalations

oohh boy! Caius seems more than a little pissed... and I wonder how long before his connection to the Newborn Army and Esme & Edward's deaths come out - maybe just in time for an eventually-vamp'd Bella to smack him down? :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: One Last Birthday

hmm yeah... Bella seems pretty fine ;)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: The Doctor's Appointment

I'm thinking Carlisle's going to want that nurse's outfit kept on hand for a while hehe

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Going Greek

ohh Carlisle's got some great lines there, might have to write a few of those down hehe :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Viva La Italia

hmm it's Italy, so I'm thinking it has to be the Volturi watching in some way... but we'll see :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Coming Together

oh boy... real trouble from Caius it seems... maybe Aro's not going to be the big baddie to be worried about this time around? :P

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - I See France

hehe poor Alice

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Oh My God

enjoying this path so far hehe Carlisle's far more fun & happy at his prospective fatherhood :)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - I Love This

heheheheh I can't wait to see Alice's reaction to the "why" of her blindness :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Our News

Carlisle's certainly been thinking hard on the topic, putting those moments when Bella's asleep to good use hehe

I'm thinking Rosalie might end up being overly protective perhaps? Trying to get Bella to rest all the time and not let her do things for herself? Should be interesting to see. Of course, Alice is going to be frenetic with shopping and designing a nursery?

Hmm lots of fun ahead :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Humiliation and Domination

oh boy! Bella's become very adept at dishing things back at Emmett hehe :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Pregnancy Progress

hhahaha loved the meadow/moose moment - seems Bella's got her favourite "food" for now :)

I wonder what they're hearing that's obviously not adding up to the ultrasound? An extra beat perhaps? :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: The Ultrasound

hehe call me cynical/sarcastic/whatever, but I think there's a lot of "traditions" that Bella and Carlisle can BOTH come up with when they need ;)

ahh but twins - perhaps a bit of both Edward AND Esme being reincarnated there? :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Girls Day Out

wow that was a really good day for them all right up until the bike accident... but it's probably good Bella got that little experience of what it was really going to feel like when she Changes.

I'm not too worried about Carlisle's "horrified" look because at this point I'm choosing to believe it's due to his concern for how vampiric the babies are - and how close Bella came to potentially causing a public problem.

I'm hoping he gets to explaining that real quick before Bella drops too much further.

I'm just curious though how quickly she moved... is she actually a little faster/stronger as well with the pregnancy?

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Understanding

well it's good they got that all sorted out - Bella shouldn't have her doubts so strongly in the future. They won't disappear magically, but at least she'll have the memory of Carlisle's reassurance... as will the rest of the household in the form of the Great Swing Drop story ;)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Moved

heheh it's very amusing to think of all those couples being so overwhelmed they didn't even make to the "relative" privacy of separate rooms from the sounds of things?

It's a good thing they're away from the major population centres, that'd be one hell of a baby boom nine months down the track :)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Forks

ahh love Charlie catching them all off guard like that!! :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Letting Things Fall Where They May

hehehe I'm thinking they should build their own bowling alley! Oh, maybe a bowling/minigolf combo game just for vamps?
Bad news from a phonecall could surely only be something about Renee & Phil, since someone wouldve come to the house were it Charlie or anyone else local :P

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: Warnings

Ahh Jake, nice work :)

Sadly, I've not had the epiphany that Bella had, so I''ll have to keep reading to find out what she's realised she has to do....

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: The Return to Forks

Oh dear (putting it mildly) now we're going to be wondering if Charlie's about to get manhandled/bitten, or if Bella's going straight for Lily perhaps.... running... we'll see :)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: The Night Before

things are really building up... relieved to see Aro's so firm for his own path, and Charlie's survived his encounter with Bella :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: Negotiations

omg! I know that Aro was committed to stopping Caius however possible, but I really didn't expect the body-pull into the flames! I'm guessing Bella has to deal with Chelsea now from what Aro's last word is... her shield would protect her from Chelsea's manipulations?

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44: The Battle

ooohhhh mmmmaaaannnnn!!!! Talk about putting just about everyone in the worst possible positions from the sounds of things! :P

Might have to sit on my hands for a while to stop the compulsion to chew on my nails lol

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44: The Battle

ooohhhh mmmmaaaannnnn!!!! Talk about putting just about everyone in the worst possible positions from the sounds of things! :P

Might have to sit on my hands for a while to stop the compulsion to chew on my nails lol

 

 




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