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Penname: Daylen [Contact]
Real name: Daniel
Status: Member
Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.


Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.


Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).


Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)


 


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Reviews by Daylen
 
Summary:

Sometimes I Still Feel The Bruise

Three years have passed since the events of Eclipse, and Bella Swan may be Bella Cullen now, but she is still unwillingly, woefully human. Her reunion with Jacob Black is bittersweet. Her reunion with old foes is just bitter. And Rosalie Hale is far more important to her than she knows.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 23792
[Report This] Published: November 20, 2009 Updated: March 07, 2010


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

oh my, things are really building to a head... how much more tangled can things get?



Author's Response:

hahah yes, it is a bit of a mess isn't it! Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

 
Summary:

A Twilight Book Outtake... what would have happened had Edward taken
a little longer to get to the ballet studio? James DOESN'T bite Bella, but her
injuries were too severe. She's dying, and Edward must change her then. 

Bella POV


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 3160
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2009 Updated: November 27, 2009


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Is This What Death Feels Like?

It's nice to see Edward determined to change Bella himself, even if he's effectively been rail-roaded into it. He didn't really even consider Carlisle or anyone else :)



Author's Response:

 

Yes, I decided wheter they had been together for as long as in BD or only a short while like in Twilight- Bella was Dying. Edward saw that in Alice's mind when she had a vision. Any circumstance would lead him to change her under such drastic measures without much trouble on his part. She is his life, after all.

Put it on favorites if you would like to read it later because I am continuing it! I will be working on the next few chapter VERY soon! Thanks for reviewing!

 
Summary:

An old friend calls the Cullens to Italy.  The Volturi have discovered a secret of Demetri and Heidi’s: they possess a potentially powerful weapon and the Volturi want it as their own.  Carlisle, owing Demetri a favor, takes the family to Italy to collect the item to bring back to Forks for safekeeping. 

Little do they know, the item is a 16 year old human girl named Bella, who already possesses amazing abilities in her human form.  Edward falls instantly in love with the girl but is it an effect of her amazing abilities or has he finally found what he has been searching for his entire existence? Will he risk his own life and family to protect her from the Volturi?


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Esme, Heidi, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 27787
[Report This] Published: November 24, 2009 Updated: March 25, 2010


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Gifts

hmm Edward's not going to forgive himself for causing Bella all that pain for a bit I think... unless Bella takes control of the situation sooner rather than later; she would've had some experience with unruly horses by now perhaps? ;)

 



Author's Response:

lol...yeah bells is going to be putting edward in his place shortly :)  these two may be a bit different together than stephenie's couple.  i want bella to be the one in control this time around lol  thanks so much for taking the time to review! 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Explanations

oh dear... so now Edward's not only going to deny his feelings, but not actually trust them either. That's going to make for some high level angst :)

Quite enjoyed the way Bella made a few people uncomfortable with how openly she was answering the "remaining human" question!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review, hun!  And your patience :) I am writing again so hopefully I can have you some new material very soon!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Forbidden

ok I'm feeling sorry for both Edward and Bella now. They're both getting some bad advice and making bad leaps/decisions... there's so much pain ahead for them it would seem... before they get to the good stuff :)

 
Endless Pain by maired75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 376]
Summary:

Edward left Bella after she was almost attacked by Jasper at her birthday party. A few months later a tragic accident leave Bella all on her own. Will the return of the Cullen's be a good thing or will it just turn her world even more upside down?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 34059
[Report This] Published: November 24, 2009 Updated: June 27, 2010


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: New Home

awww Bella's got her cottage and Edward by her side now... although I can see her falling asleep in that library more than once :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Planning Is Everything

hahaha loved how Bella was so oblivious not once, but TWICE!

Still chuckling at the image of Edward standing, gaping like a goldfish probably :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Future

uh oh.... Edward's going to be beating himself up again for a little while :S
Wonder how Bella's going to convince him it's ok once she wakes up?

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Dealing with the Pain

hmm so B&E finally got it together, though I don't know how Bella's going to react when she recalls a few more things.... hopefully Edward does enough between now and then to reinforce that he's here to STAY.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Memories

hmm well it felt a little disjointed, though it might've been just me :)

I think it helped with the "confused" state that Bella's in right now, strangely enough. Glad to see her remember the proposal, before the original "left in the forest" part. That was probably useful in muffling the magnitude of the pain she felt first time around.

Looking forward to the talk with Edward next :)

 
Breathe by CatierayeHale Rated: R [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Bella tried to make it to Edward. He ws killing himself due to her afterall. But she was too late. Bella must now deal with her newfound immortality, Edwards death, and his family's grief all while trying to figure out her love for Jacob. Can a werewolf and Vampire work out thier diffrences? will love heal all? And why is there this nagging feeling in the back of Bella's mind that Edward isnt really dead?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Jacob, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1121
[Report This] Published: November 25, 2009 Updated: December 01, 2009


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Death

Interesting beginning... so many questions to follow, hmmm...

What happened with the Volturi, Alice and Emmett presumably got in trouble for pulling Bella away from Aro?

Will Jake be able to accept Bella the vampire, and the pack's response might be interesting too.

Then there's the 'possibility' that Edward's not quite ashes? Curious to see what heppens next :)



Author's Response:

THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH! I love this story and it really means alot that you took the time to read it.

 
Summary:

What if it wasn't bloodlust that drew Edward to Bella in the beginning? What if he had recognized her as his soulmate from the very moment he saw her? This is the story of how a lost soul finally came to be with his one true love.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 23043
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2009 Updated: January 24, 2010


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

finally! woot! and now the real fun begins as Edward & Bella get comfortable with each other all over again hehe :)



Author's Response:

:) My sentiments exactly :)

One more chapter, then an epi! Thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

hehe it's kind of weird to see Edward rushing and Bella putting the brakes on.

Looking forward to the epi - it's been a great read :)



Author's Response:

I know, right? I like that they are "light" at the end and not so intense!

Thanks for the review!

 
Summary:

Edward finds Bella at a different time in her life. The bloodlust is almost uncontrollable. He wants to leave, but can't seem to pull himself away. They both seem to call for each other. What does this mean? Where does this put them for their future?    


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 19947
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2009 Updated: October 19, 2010


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Raising a Human Child

awww the image of Bella climbing up onto Edward to fall asleep whilst he didn't even notice is so cute :)

 
Summary:

A mosaic freely drawn from book and movie, wanders into AU as the story unfolds ... ....

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Showing is stronger than telling.  Forks was just like I remember it.  I felt the short little hairs on the back of my neck stand straight on end.  Cut your losses before they can become catastrophic.   “It’s not fair,” I say aloud.   The night wind swirls, lifting the fine surface powder from the tops of the snowdrifts, coating us in diamond dust.  

 


Then weave for us a garment of brightness

 

Moving to Forks, spending the last eighteen months of her childhood with a father she barely knew ... it seemed like a good idea at the time.

 

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A/N about the rating: The narrative in this story ranges between PG-13 (most of it) and R (occasional language and occasional non-graphic reference to mature themes). An isolated technicality in a late chapter has necessitated changing the rating from R to NC-17, however R is a much better measure of the farthest outer limit of what the reader will encounter in this tale.

 

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<3<3<3  and  @};-  @};-  @};-  to  DeliciousDreamer for this beautiful banner ~~

delicious dreamer's lovely banner for garment of brightness

I never in my wildest dreams thought that something I wrote would inspire someone to make something like this.   I am so touched.  THANK YOU DD!


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 59050
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2009 Updated: February 13, 2011


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: After

hmm so Bella's going to be in the hospital overnight... wonder how that's going to go? :)



Author's Response:

Is that a note of foreboding I detect ... ?   Hee hee, the answer is in beta right now!

 
Crescent Moon by Brandinm05 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 218]
Summary:

What if Jacob and the Quileute werewolves never showed up in the meadow that day to save Bella? What if Bella became a vampire and Edward wasn't the one to do it? Bella is turned and forced out of Forks, up North to the Denali clan. New bonds are formed while old ones are nearly broken.  Read as Bella adjusts to her new life, and possibly, a new mate.  Special lovely thanks to M1187 for my fanstical banner :)

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Playlist for story can be found at:

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 46381
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2009 Updated: July 04, 2010


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Indaco

uh oh... I think Irina and Tanya's reactions are the ones I'm worried about: Irina for probably being more than a little upset at Laurent's fate and his last few days as well... and Tanya for finally meeting the Bella of Edward's dreams, being confronted with the vampire version that will be so much more potential to Edward than Tanya can ever be :)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Valse d'Amelie

ohhhh this just got a whole lot more messy!!!!

Bella's going to have to try and find Edward and/or rescue him without knowing the truth of HIS lies beforehand.

hmmm looking forward to it :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: My Love

aww they made it there eventually :)

thanks for the mention - I figure my few words are the least I can do for the story you've shared with us :)

It's been a great ride!

 



Author's Response:

Yes, they finally made it after a life-threatening journey.  And a journey it's been!  Thank you for reading and reviewing for me!!! I truly enjoyed reading your reviews!! If you enjoy my writing, please go down to fanfiction and check out my other stories.  I promise-- they're written really well!!! haha :)

xoxo

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Voices

It was good to see Alice, albeit so very briefly, and I'm looking forward to the reunion of the family and Bella.

I liked the Denali's reactions, and hope Irina and Tanya don't take too long to come around.

I still hold out the hope of a wary friendship continuing with Jacob too, but I guess we'll see ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review :)  My beta thought it might be a good idea to throw in a little visit from Alice, as she would see Bella's change.  But I couldn't have her stick around for too long- don't want Jasper having withdrawal :)  I did my best with the Denali's reactions- although, I think you might be interested to see what happens with Irina and Tanya.  I have to admit, Jacob stole my heart from the very beginning- it wouldn't be much of a story with a little Jakey action, now would it!  Please, continue reading and reviewing!

xoxo

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Andare

ack omg! Well I'm glad the Cullens are on their way!

Hopefully either Jacob or a Cullen or Denali shows up to help with Victoria - assuming that Bella "needs" the help to take her down :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Requiem

Jacob and Edward both timed their respective arrivals well :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Rose

That went better than I dared hope for at this stage. It's nice to see Sam willing to talk things out and keeping his emotions in check.

I can imagine Bella will still be quite tense/emotional when she gets back to Edward and the others, and it'll be interesting to see if Edward can support her without getting angry at the Pack or Jacob etc for making Bella upset. Particularly since he did far worse only recently. The best thing he can do right now, is be right there for and with Bella - no more running off on his own agenda.

Hopefully Jake and Bella get a chance to work on their old friendship too.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review :)  And I agree- Eddie's gonna have to be there for Bella, she'll need his support... As for Jake and Bella, no worries-- they get their chance... sort of...

 

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: All Of Me

well they finally got that question out there! I'm glad that Edward wasn't "too" badly overreacting to Bella's fight-training.

 



Author's Response:

Haha, I take it that you were expecting it??  It wouldn't be a Bella/Edward vampire story without a happy married ending, right? ha!  And with Bella training:  Edward can't over-react too much.  I mean, Bella DID go through her change alone, and survived with Laurent, AND found the Denali clan all by her wittle self.  Bella is a big girl now.  I think he's realizing that.  :)  Please keep reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: String Quartet, Op.1:II. Adagio

whoa the proverbials about to hit the fan :)

 



Author's Response:

hehe, that is it :)  The big scary fight scene it next! I hope you enjoy it! :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Adagio G Minor

I'm not so happy about losing Kate or any of the wolves, but also aware that there was a hell of a battle there, so casualties on the "good guys" side were inevitable...

I always enjoy Marcus getting the chance to redress some of his infinite pain against Aro ;)

 



Author's Response:

well hell, man.... The good guys took down the entire Volturi guard, ha!  Props to them, eh?  I honestly felt awful about the wolves.... Brady was too young to kill off, but in my mind, he was young and naive to have jumped infront of such a powerful vampire, plus he did it to save Bella.  So, he died an honorable death I think. Also happy to see that you liked how Marcus got his sweet revenge, muah ah ah ah :) 

Sadly enough, this story is finally coming to a close. :(  You've been an amazing reviewer, thanks for sticking with me to the end!

 




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