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Penname: Daylen [Contact]
Real name: Daniel
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Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.


Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.


Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).


Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)


 


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Reviews by Daylen
 
Summary:

Bella and Edward

 It has been 20 years since Edward left Bella in the forest. After a birthday celebration, Bella finds herself lost in her memories of Edward. What would happen if he returned "after all these years?" 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 34637
[Report This] Published: September 23, 2009 Updated: January 19, 2010


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

woohoo go Bella!

Bella always was the one who had trouble controlling herself... primarily around Edward hehe :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

hahahaha "Bella wants Edward"!! Loved it!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

hustle and bustle, though it's sad that Jasper, and so many others, don't look to be showing up for the big event!

Looks like Rosalie's about the have "the talk" with Bella...

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

so it seems Edward may have aged enough that Bella doesn't have to drink... but could anyone resist a potion that might take a few years off their face and body? hehe

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

err yeah Edward, marriage doesn't really guarantee that you'll stick around, you've been listening to humans long enough to realise that :S

It's going to be a while until Bella is more sure in that area, the kind of time a vampire gets :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

awww Bella's closing line there might've reduced Edward to tears of happiness if he were able ;)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

aww Jacob showed up - though I do feel a little sorry for Seth missing his "moment" :)

He would've been stoked just to see Bella and Jacob reconciling.

So I wonder where they're going for the honeymoon? ;)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

heheh never bet against Alice :)

Thanks for sharing an interesting and enjoyable story with us all.

 
One More Taste by KC03 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 78]
Summary:

Edward isn't able to stop Jasper at Bella's birthday party-but he doesn't get enough. He wants more, and he'll do anything to get it.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 28486
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2009 Updated: January 22, 2010


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: I Can't Stand to Look at You

eh - as much as I'm a fan of B&E, in this case, Jasper has seriously improved over the chapters of this story, where Edward's still kind of afraid of his own shadow.

I did like Bella pausing at the end there to check the house was empty hehe

 

 
Hearts in Pain by Tess84 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 346]
Summary:

AU/AH. What would have happened if there had been no supernatural forces at work in Forks? Bella Swan moves to the tiny Washington town to live with her father. There she meets Edward Cullen and they fall in love. Their relationship is cut short when Edward moves from Forks, but he is leaving behind more than he knows... Will they ever see each other again?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 167647
[Report This] Published: October 04, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: 16 - Pink or Blue

Angela is so great :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: 17 - Showers and Dancing

This Mike seems to be a nicer guy than others I've read at least :)

Had to chuckle at Renee trying to talk Lily out of her nice safe haven hehe :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: 19 - New Experienced and Old Friends

Laughed loud enough at my screen to make people wonder what I was reading when I got to Angela's line about calling the parents like she still had a curfew :)

I wonder what Alice will do now... she's got some explaining to do, I think.

Looking forward to some Lily-antics too hehe :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: 22 - 21 Guns

whew well Edward's still got a lot of work to do, and perhaps Bella does too, but at least they're back on half-decent path :)

oh - and I have been known to have ketchup with my nuggets on many occasions too :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: 24 - Meet the Cullens

oh Edward! Best choice of words there "There's someone we'd like you to meet" - together with the position/body language, that'll go a long way with Bella (and hopefully the rest of the family)

Loving Lily's excitement at having a cousin and more grandparents, aunts and uncles hehe :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: 25 - Surprise!

Lily won Esme and Carlisle over pretty quick "I suppose you can be grandma too" hehehe in only the way a five year old can do!

B&E are getting closer... if they can sort out the miscommunications here and there. I think they've had enough of the more troubling parts of things for now? (maybe/hopefully?) :)

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella alone in the woods after telling her he didn’t want her any more. As she is lying on the cold forest floor; Bella remembers three important things. Edward made a promise not to leave her, and Edward never broke a promise, and third it was her body, her heart, what right did he have to decide what was good for her? All in all Bella realizes that Edward was covering up his true feeling about her. Bella goes to bring Edward home.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Laurent, Marcus, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 57466
[Report This] Published: October 05, 2009 Updated: September 14, 2011


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10:Changing Course

uh oh - sounds like there's some big trouble heading towards the Cullens :S

 



Author's Response:

Yep it sure does.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing it means a lot.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Needs and Votes

Well they seem to have made it eventually! I wondered how long it would before Bella accosted Edward at the piano like that hehe :)



Author's Response:

Yes, I just had to have a little fun with Edward. :-D

So thrilled that you enjoyed it.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Seek and You Shall Find

argh oh no!! Talk about cliffhangers :S

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I know I was worried abot cyber stones and torches being thrown at me when my readers got to the end. I will do my best to make it up to you in the next chapter. We will be getting a taste of Edward's fight with Laurent.

Thanks again for your review.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Love the Medicine for the Soul

oh - my - <insert appropriate deity or epithet here>!! :)

I wasn't sure if you were going to start a Change here or not, and really had to work hard NOT to scroll down too quick and ruin it for myself hehe

Can't wait to see what happens when Bella wakes from her nap! :)



Author's Response:

LOL, well I'm very happy that you were able to hold yourself back.

Yes, when Bella and Edward have a few things to talk about.

Thanks for reviewing,

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Even Ground

whew that was a close call there really :)

Happy to see B&E under the same roof again though, and looking forward to both the apologies/explainations and more on the "dream" connection for B&E

 



Author's Response:

It was a close call. I'm just happy to se that everyone seems to be understanding why Bella's heart stop. Yes, I was indded waiting for the time for me to write them together. More explainations and twists are to come.

Thank you for taking the time to leave a review.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: A Choice

some more-than-tense moments there, have to admit to holding my breath just a bit since I wasn't sure how dark you were intending to make things :)



Author's Response:

Yes there were. Once I finished typing the parts I had outlined. I just let they rest follow out of me and that was how I came to the end of the chapter. I hope you enjoyed every intense moment. 

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review this chapter.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Home

hehe I always find it amusing when Bella's convincing herself that she can't forgive Edward so easily and should make him jump through a few hoops first.

At least Edward will endeavour to never repeat those mistakes :)



Author's Response:

Yes, Edward will do his best not to repeat his mistake. He will struggle just a tat. He wants to give Bella what she wants. Yet at the same time there is a part of him that is afraid to do it.

Thanks so much for reviewing.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Living & Forgiveness

ohh things are building up, and not in a good way for Edward! Well, not all good, just yet :P



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing and hang on for a wild ride to come.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: June 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Absolution Now

hmm looks like Edward still has some learning to do regarding keeping Bella in the dark on things, and how she feels about that.

I'm glad that Jasper's called him on it as well, though, and also helped fill Bella in on a few things. I think she'll realise that her being Changed might possibly get the Volturi back off them before anyone says it to her, but Edward's behaviour would appear to be a big part of whether she decides to go ahead with that :)



Author's Response:

Yes, Edward and Bella both have a few more things to learn. It is my hope to have them come to an understanding soon. I hope you enjoy the ride as that day approaches.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko



Author's Response:

Yes, Edward and Bella both have a few more things to learn. It is my hope to have them come to an understanding soon. I hope you enjoy the ride as that day approaches.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Trapped

well that's made things a whole lot more tense than theywere looking to get before :P
Looking forward to how they all deal withthis latest development :)

Author's Response:

Just a little bit. I'm happy to hear that you are enjoying it.

It will get better I promise.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 




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