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Penname: Daylen [ Contact]
Real name: Daniel
Status: Member
Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.
Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.
Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).
Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)
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Summary: Bella's family is attacked by vampires when she is young, leaving her the sole survivor. Rescued by Dr Carlisle Cullen, she is adopted into his 'vegetarian' family, consisting of him, his wife Esme and their three sons Emmett, Edward and Jasper. Struggling with her trauma, Bella finds herself developing special bonds with each of the Cullen boys.
This story has no Alice or Rosalie (or at least, not as vampires or Cullens).

Thanks to m81170 for the banner.
 
Cheers to the lovely ms_ambrosia and CatMasters for the gifs.
Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 61118
[Report This] Published: September 03, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2012
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Better
ohh Rosalie's almost "here"... I wonder how that's going to go when she crosses paths with Bella and the Cullen boys? :)
Loved the excitement everyone had over Bella's new friend(s) - especially Emmett, not being able to contain himself!
Summary:

A woman awakes in a forest. She is lost, alone and has practically no memory. Three members of the Cullen family find her and take her to their home. But everything is not as it appears, especially not with the girl. How can the little she knows to be true actually be possible? It could be said that anything is possible when thrown into a world of myth.
Follow along as she travels on her journey to find, forgive and move beyond her past, all the while finding herself and something she never knew she was looking for.
This is mostly an E/B story though other loved and not so loved characters will be involved.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Raison D'être
Chapters: 25 Completed: No
Word count: 145399
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2009 Updated: May 01, 2012
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Interrogation
hmm so Bella was attacked at some point... and I'm starting to think there's someone out there able to mess with memories somehow - and data for that matter - that might explain how Charlie and Bella were having deja vu moments whilst talking to each other... and how her information could've been found and then vanish. Or even something deeper like messing with a person's fate/existence - Bella remembers being an adult before everything went crazy... ahh so many possiblities - looking forward to finding out :) Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. I'm so sorry I've been sucha failure at responding.
There are thos around who have the answers.
Maybe she was attacked...
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Mistake
I think Edward's always going to be taken back after some grovelling ;)
Very curious to see what unfolds with Charlie's involvement!! Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. I'm so sorry I've been such a failure at responding.
I love the character of Charlie. Sometimes I wish we'd seen him more in the Saga. *sigh*
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Arrival
It was a very interesting chapter, and so many questions coming up from it.
When the records initially disappeared from the laptop and printouts I was thinking Alice would have no memory of seeing them, leaving Bella alone with the information, but Alice did recall it, so something else is apparently going on.
Very curious to see what Bella's faintness is all about, and to see more of her interaction with Edward for that matter hehe :)
Good luck sorting out the laptop, computers are great... until they stop :P Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! :)
I should have thought of that. Can I call a redo? Um....yeah...Alice doesn't remember. Just forget I said she did. Oops! It disappeared just like the other stuff. XD That would've probably worked better.
Don't worry, I'm not going to kill of the main character towards the beginning of the story...or maybe I should. It'd make for a pretty boring rest, though. Just lots of blank pages. I doubt it'd get validated. Good thing to ponder.
Yeah, I'm annoyed that two fairly major things went wrong in sucha short time. I can't wait to get it back. Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! :)
I should have thought of that. Can I call a redo? Um....yeah...Alice doesn't remember. Just forget I said she did. Oops! It disappeared just like the other stuff. XD That would've probably worked better.
Don't worry, I'm not going to kill of the main character towards the beginning of the story...or maybe I should. It'd make for a pretty boring rest, though. Just lots of blank pages. I doubt it'd get validated. Good thing to ponder.
Yeah, I'm annoyed that two fairly major things went wrong in sucha short time. I can't wait to get it back.
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Confrontations
hmm sounds like the wolves have just shown up.
I'm liking that Bella's trying to stand firm against Edward and not just accepting his (so far) lack lustre apology.
He needs to earn his way back :) Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. I am so grateful to you for responding to every chapter. I'm sorry I've been such a failure at responding... and writing.
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Stress
hrm Bella's reaction was interesting there, in the sense that perhaps she's repressed her memories to escape a major trauma. It's been a suspicion until now, but this reaction to the exam would seem to confirm it.
Hope she's not out for too long, I wonder will anything be different when she wakes "this time around"?
Author's Response: It does, doesn't it? No not too long.
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 25, 2011
Title: Chapter 22: Agitation
hmm Edward & Bella taking a few days away from things should be interesting. Maybe they can finish that talk? :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Unexpected
so Bella's got a tactile gift of sorts, though it's odd that she doesn't feel hungry, and that it's apparently a pre-existing condition from before whatever event brought her to the Cullens.
Curious to see where this goes next :) Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.
Yes, her gift is sort of tactile, more will be explained in chapter 11.
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Discussion
wow that was a nice long chapter there!
So many things going on, but I think my favourite parts are still those moments when B&E are both arguing with themselves about what the other one feels hehe Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the reviews. I don't start out meaning the chapters to be so long, but it keeps happening! I hope that's okay! :D
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Talented
wow that was a really long chapter! Lots of back and forth for Bella and Edward. I could just imagine Alice grinding her teeth coming out of that quarry when Bella decided to keep her feelings to herself hehe
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reviewing. I have been such a failure responding to reviews. I apologize for that. I really appreciate you reviewing, though.
Yeah, Alice wasn't too happy at watever vision she saw. They're both so stubborn.
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: July 31, 2011
Title: Chapter 23: Close
hehe soggy sappy vampire anyone? :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Obscure
hehe looks like B&E are getting a whole lot more comfortable with each other. Bella's being stolen away for a shopping trip though ;) Author's Response: Yes, a trip is up for the next chapter.
Thanks for reviewing,
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: May 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Victoria
I was totally thinking of a different Victoria at the start of the chapter :S
Looking forward to Bella hitting school, and interacting with the rest of Forks and La Push in general... will be interesting to see if people think they "know" her at all...
Author's Response: Hmmm. That will be interesting. At least I kope it will. We will get more Forks interaction coming very soon
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Preparation
hmm so Bella's exam still leaves things inconclusive for some reason... I wonder if something will happen at school to either trigger a memory or someone else suspects.
Looking forward to seeing it unfold :) Author's Response: Well, yes, it only give results for asshe is now.
School... maybe but she won't know it yet.
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: New Start
so close to getting Bella to realise some more personal things about Edward's affection for her... ah well, the slow build up should be fun to see resolved hehe
I wonder if Mike will actually recognise the fear in Bella at some point, and what he'll do in response to that... he has it in him to be incredibly supportive. Author's Response: Mike's not too quick to actually notice other people's emotions. He's too busy attributing his own ideas of them on them. DO you know what I mean?
Thanks
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: New Start
so close to getting Bella to realise some more personal things about Edward's affection for her... ah well, the slow build up should be fun to see resolved hehe
I wonder if Mike will actually recognise the fear in Bella at some point, and what he'll do in response to that... he has it in him to be incredibly supportive.
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Accident
interesting flash of memory there... music is the key, on one area at least :)
Oh and Bella didn't quite make the connection from the cold and sparkling vista to vampire... seems a bit strange that she wouldn't figure it out, but I guess Bella's been pretty tired staying up to all hours "chatting" to Edward hehe
Author's Response: There are many different keys.
Bella has never seen the Cullens in the sun. They've kep that secret away from her. So she knows nothing about the sparkly people.
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Puzzle
hmm I'm more interested in what the deal is with Charlie and Bella... there has to be some memory manipulation or something going on? :P
Author's Response: Ooooh! Memory manipulation. Sounds interesting.
Thanks for reviewing. I'm sorry I've been such a failure at responding.
Summary: After Edward left, Bella was changed by another vampire and joined his coven. 30 years later her coven meets the Cullens. Canon pairings. Disclaimer - Twilight belongs to Stephenie Meyers. I'm just playing with her world.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 19507
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2009 Updated: March 06, 2010
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Thirty Years Later
ok so Jenny's had the Vision that we had a glimpse of in the prologue it seems?
Wonder what/whom was watching Bella from the woods, the wolves or ...? Author's Response: Spot on about Jenny glimpsing what was in the prologue. As for who/what was watching Bella ... revealed later on ;).
Thanks for reading and reviewing :D.
Summary:
“My name is Bella Swan. This is the story of my freefall into hell without any chance of capture.”
Bella is miserable in her abusive relationship but feels she has no escape and no where to turn. Her older brother Emmett has always been close but with the introduction of his new roommate Edward Cullen, Bella feels even more hopeless in her future. Can anyone catch Bella before she slips too far out of reach?
Rating: NC-17 for strong language, physical abuse, sex without full consent and of course, the good stuff, sexual scenes!
(Many amazing thanks to ms_ambrosia for the beautiful banner)


Amazing banner by the fan-tabulous FrozenSoldier
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Word count: 73461
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2009 Updated: September 28, 2010
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Stand up and fight
hmmm so it's not really Bella, but she's too distracted to confirm things or not. But at least Bella really stood up before the hospital visit & was able to keep her fear at bay.
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: August 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: "Show And Tell"
oh man! I'm really hoping Bella's not planning to go alone. It's one thing to stand up to your brother, another to do the same to someone who will have no hesitation at lashing out.
It's good to see Bella growing stronger, I just hope she's realistic about the risks she's taking.
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: "Save yourself!"
Well I particularly liked Edward and Emmett's little chat - where they discuss what to do next.
As for the Aro possibility... only if you have him chasing Edward, why should Bella be the focus all the time? ;)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: "N.R.A"
They're finally getting a dinner date - even if it perhaps feels a little contrived. Wonder if Edward will do something that convinces Bella of his feelings/intentions? Hopefully nothing happens for the negative though! :) Author's Response: So sorry for not responding to reviews sooner, epic fail on my part!
I am revealing nothing of the dinner date, my lips are sealed! I did submit that chapter over a week ago so any day now and you can read for yourself. Thanks so much for taking the time to review, hope you keep reading :)
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: "Not your type"
ohh I'm so glad that ended up reasonably ok in the end! I got more than a little worried that something would shut the two of them down too early.
More fun times ahead, I hope. Although I know there's also more than a few matters that need settling too :P
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: "The Yoko factor"
ok I was waiting for Edward to snap and punch Emmett, but I wasn't quite expecting Emmett to take it as the 'proof' he needed without taking a swing back at least! Very impressed, really :)
Oh, and pool is such a great game ;)
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