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Penname: Daylen [Contact]
Real name: Daniel
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Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.


Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.


Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).


Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)


 


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Reviews by Daylen
 
Summary: Feature

 Thank you, hellacullen, for the awesome banner!

Edward’s rebellious period didn’t last a few years; it lasted seventy.  A solitary hunter on the fringe of society, he stumbles across a young woman praying. Can he seduce her away from everything she's ever known? And will he be willing to fight for Bella instead of fighting against her?

AU, a bit OOC, canon couples.  Rated for lemons, violence and adult subject matter.

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 129165
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2009 Updated: March 27, 2010


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Returning Home

hrm so they're bothing breaking rules they'd placed on themselves for this night, I wonder how that'll go the morning after.

I'm a little disappointed that Edward caved in to the need to feed on another human, though I hope the events surrounding it lead him away from this path again... looking forward to seeing what happens :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions

Nice timing there Edward! hehe



Author's Response:

He made it, just barely! Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Chariot Ride

Talk about being thrown for a loop, although Bella probably has enough information in her head from the other Cullens, and Edward, to figure it out now...

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Cygnus

Some heavy moments there between B&E - wonder how things will go over the next few days for them :)



Author's Response:

Love that you're a Twi-guy-wish there were more of you!

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 I Will Not Be Denied

heheh loved Jasper and Edward's heart-to-heart :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Lazarus Rising

hehe loved Edward's happiness at Bella liking the flowers, and Bella's acceptance (maybe?) that Edward was courting her :)

So many possibilities for the reaction between the Monsignor and Edward though...

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Raven's Reflection

I liked the car ride and it's discussions, Bella's inching closer to the truth, and Edward's going to have his hands full preparing for that :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Burning

hmm "kissed by a miracle"; I think we all want that on some level? :)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Pouring Gas on the Fire

I was actually getting quite nervous with the Pack interactions... relieved that no one's been hurt (yet) though I can see there might be some trouble later! :)

I have to add a "poor Edward" there at the end though, even with light at the end of the tunnel, it's still a fairly long tunnel.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Fusion

Well I think B&E had some blessed relief finally?

It would also appear that Edward is thinking seriously of Changing Bella in the future.... assuming she's able to handle the truth of his existence.

Looking forward to the Vancouver trip :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Seeds Of The Whirlwind

ohhhh myyyyyy!!!!

I wonder what this means for B&E then? How long will it take Bella to settle down, and what's Edward been up to before arriving at the church??

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves

hrm I'm more than a little concerned at the Pack's thoughts and aggression towards Edward and now Bella... it's one thing to be against a "natural" enemy, but another entirely to be threatening/killing humans when you're supposedly sworn to protect them.

Looking forward to Bella getting a chance to calm down and think her way through all of the new information that's been thrust upon her.

Really hoping she doesn't freeze Edward out for too long, they've both got enough on their plate without adding an extended separation :S

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Delivering The Wind

hmmm well I'm hoping that Bella is able to calm down enough to talk with Edward and get to know him all over again... He's going to need the support if Volterra's about to come crashing down on him.

Jacob and the Pack are in deep trouble too for that matter :S

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Before The Fire

Such a relief to see that Bella will apparently work her way through things back to Edward sooner than later :)

Wonder how that phone call is going to go....

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat

ok I'm hoping Bella's able to accept Edward after he lets the whole truth out - I think she might need some more 'processing' time away from him, which is understandable.

Bella will hopefully let Edward know that she just needs a little time to place that knowledge with the overload already on her, and not to go away.

I did like how Bella has been trying to reconcile her beliefs and faith with the proof of vampires in front of her :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 The Nature of Being

Hmm I'm a little concerned about the +1 to the count, but also not really sure if it's actually going to end up being Bella's +1 that she kind of already added, or if Bella is going BE the +1.

Now for dealing with the wolves - hope there's no bloodshed, though I've no doubt there'll be snarling and tears.

Looking forward to it for some reason :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 The Whirlwind

I figured the Volturi would be showing up sooner or later, but I have to say their timing was impeccable, even though it means a lot of trouble for the Cullens, the Pack and Bella :S

Things are really building up now!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 The Pride of Lions

yikes! I'm not particularly fond of this Jacob, but I don't want him beaten like that :S

Things are getting crazy intense with Aro and everyone being so tense and paranoid about events thus far. I wonder if Edward's going to get himself under control before or after he causes even more trouble?

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 This Is My Blood

Well I'm relieved on a few levels here. First, that the Pack has been allowed to get out of there relatively unscathed; second, that the Cullens are generally ok; and then that Bella's chosen Edward finally :)

With the choices in front of her, and her progress through the story, I wasn't really going to be too surprised if she chose death... though it interfere's with my own concept of "happily ever after" for these two!

Loved how strong Bella was through this whole chapter though, that'd have to be my favourite part throughout :)

Hope Jacob and the Pack are able to make peace with the Cullens after the dust settles too.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Gethsemane

hmm wonder if it really was the wolf-venom slowing things down? And what that might mean for Bella's abilities once she wakes up?

I quite liked Edward's chat with Father Brian; I kind of want to say that jumping on the crucifix was a bit melodramatic, but using that very word makes it fit Edward.... very curious about the tears of venom though. Perhaps intended to be symbolic that vampires ARE recognised/cared about by God? It's certainly more meaningful to Edward than if he'd cried tears of blood, as some statues have been believed to do.

Looking forward to Bella's reaction to things once she wakes up :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 I Am Delivered

Sad that we're almost finished, but wow what a ride :)
Happy to see Bella's "awake" and feisty as ever it seems too! hehe

Edward was so cute spinning Bella around like that!

About the only thing I wondered, is why he didn't simply tell Bella it was a human she could smell at the start of her curiosity... I get the feeling she would've been coherent enough to lock herself in place or run away or ask for help even... but he didn't actually tell her until she was already feeling guilty for her reactions :S

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Amen

hmmm so many mysteries, just enough to keep the old bundle of neurons ticking away a little longer with thought...

Sad to see it ending after such a great adventure. Quite like the idea of Bella perhaps being part of the wolf pack's "presence" if not the group mind :)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! I too liked the idea that the wolf somehow got fixed in her at her change. How much was left a mystery on purpose!

 
Summary:

Edward is dared to do something stupid by his older cousin, Emmett.  Jasper and Emmett stand back and watch.

"Yeah, but do you think we should've told him that she's the police chief's daughter?"

One dare, one purse and two unsuspecting vicitms lead to a series of pranks and events that will change their lives.

 

 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 87422
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2009 Updated: May 16, 2012


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Touch

hmm well I think its only going to be fair that Bella gets another chance to mark Edward ;)
Oh & Bella's brick should totally have a display case or something when they move in one day - "love hits hard" lol

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: April 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Superwoman

hmm I know Edward was overloaded with all the shocks in such a short time frame, but I'm disappointed in him for not getting more than two words out, and none of them meaningful... hell, going for the non-verbal hug would've been something. The poor boy seems to have totally zoned out though hehe

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Shotgun Shells

hahah loved the named shells!!

The angel-devil moments were damned funny ;)

 

 




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