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Penname: Daylen [Contact]
Real name: Daniel
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Member Since: March 01, 2009
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Mid-30s guy with an addiction for fan fiction presently, and a slew of unfinished writing in my file cabinet and computer that I never seem to manage to complete full stories. Plots and bits and pieces, sure, but start-to-finish stories still elude me.


Aside from that I'm always over-thinking things, have a science background but love my fiction books... and I guess I'm a twi-guy being here as much as I am lately :S (I own the series and The Host as well). Also a fan of David Eddings and Clive Cussler.


Just starting an Education degree that'll eventually send me out to Middle and Secondary schools to teach math and science (mostly biology, probably).


Oh and my friends just gave me an Edward doll from the Barbie range (he sparkles! lol they didn't realise it at the time either) My Twi-diction is kind of a running joke for them, but their nice enough about it :)


 


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Reviews by Daylen
 
Hidden by SirenSongx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1160]
Summary:

There are more secrets to the ‘new girl in school’ than even a family of vampires could have foreseen. What could the irresistible Bella Swan be hiding? There is more to the golden eyed girl than anyone could have expected.

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 95376
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: January 28, 2011


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: 14: Calm Before The Storm

ahh fun times for B&E :)

I'm quite enjoying the way they've been able to keep everyone in the dark as to just how far they've gone with each other hehe

Although I can imagine a certain pixie vamp being none too pleased when she finally finds out - THAT should be a very interesting explosion ;)

As for Valentine's... hmm... bed of roses too corny?

 



Author's Response:

I think the bed of roses thing has been DONE to death...wait, they are dead, you know what I mean. I already have plans for the cute couple on V-Day, don't worry it'll be good.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: 15: Mine Forever

Well, well, Bella's power just morphed into something that even caught her off guard hehe

Loved how the Cullens were all upset at being left out of the loop on the marriage :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: March 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: 16: A Shocking Discovery

haha I quite enjoyed that chapter! For some reason Bella's proportional-limited Powers had me immediately thinking of various role-playing and dungeons & dragons type games where you get the one-time spells to use :)

Jasper's reaction was good fun, even though Edward nearly got himself in a lot of trouble for not asking first. Interesting idea connecting the venom with friendship bonds... it seems quite logical considering a lot of vampire-lore has the sire-bond as a means for the sire to control their progeny to a certain extent. Not quite as strong as the Alpha-commands of the wolf pack, but still a noticeable compulsion.

Looking forward to more :)

Oh and as for Edward's bag... it's either some items he wants to surprise Bella with later, or... it's something he wants to "surprise" her with "later"? Or I could be completely wrong hehe

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: 17: It's None of Your Business

ahh so nice to see Edward all tangled up in Bella ;)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: 19: End Game

Oh I'll be surprised if James doesn't make at least ONE more attempt... it may have been a shorter chapter, but the tension is still there :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: 21: Tag, You're It

hmm I can see Bella and Edward trying to outdo the other's pent up frustrations for the next decade or so at least... at best I think they'll conceded it's a draw?

Bella's revenge on Alice was hilarious... though perhaps there'll be a game at a later date that Alice brings a better strategy to?

Could be an ongoing thing fo rhte two of them - at home they're sisters/best friends... on the the paintball field everyone else gets the hell out of the way :)



Author's Response:

LOL, I never thought of the paintball game that way, thats funny. If you think about it, Edward and Bella were virgins for 109/56 years, so they had the most pent up frustrations compared to everyone...I think they'll win.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue: Plans for the Future

always amusing to see B&E held apart from each other by Alice and the others. I'm kind of surprised Jane only got to the 50s in her attempts to attack Bella. Though I guess she didn't get that much time to try :)

As for which story next, I've been looking forward to finding out how B&E from your ongoing series are holding up, but Everlasting was kind of a cliffie!!!!

Not sure that chapter 2 would resolve that just yet?

It all really depends on how your muse is inspiring you :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. I did debate a higher number for Jane but that it would be overkill.

Everlasting is definitely more of a cliffie and no the truth of her death won't be revealed till chapter 3.

I actually have a poll on my ff.net profile asking which fic I should update next friday. Chapter 2 of both are already done.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: 23: I've Been Framed!

Nice ploy with Tanya and James there, and James seems even more devious than before :)

I'm kind of looking forward to Bella showing up and giving everyone a lesson :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Your my 1000th reviewer!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: 24: Turnabout Is Fair Play

nicely done, for B&E at least :)
I'm sure Jane would not have been impressed with her power being used on her ;)

 
Summary: Feature

 Thank you, hellacullen, for the awesome banner!

Edward’s rebellious period didn’t last a few years; it lasted seventy.  A solitary hunter on the fringe of society, he stumbles across a young woman praying. Can he seduce her away from everything she's ever known? And will he be willing to fight for Bella instead of fighting against her?

AU, a bit OOC, canon couples.  Rated for lemons, violence and adult subject matter.

Banner by Zesty_T, awesome!

Banner by n7of9 Thank you!

Banner by readergoof, thank you!

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 129165
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2009 Updated: March 27, 2010


Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The Falls

O-M-G!!!!!

I think that's pretty much summing up my feelings by the end of the chapter hehe

Poor Bella, I wonder how she'll handle this latest set-back, I'm hoping she doesn't connect Edward's running to her recent revelations, but given her character so far, I think she will :(

Edward had better return soon and address that

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: February 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 1743

So much information for Bella to take in and try to acclimate to in such a short time. It was good to see her thoughts whilst watching Edward's Litany, though not so much when she decided that ultimately, she was worse than Edward for her single act.

Of course, I really liked Bella's last thought there. It's amusing that for eternal creatures, there's been something of a rush going on for the parcel of time that Bella's been "in the loop" on hehe :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Returning Home

hrm so they're bothing breaking rules they'd placed on themselves for this night, I wonder how that'll go the morning after.

I'm a little disappointed that Edward caved in to the need to feed on another human, though I hope the events surrounding it lead him away from this path again... looking forward to seeing what happens :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: September 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions

Nice timing there Edward! hehe



Author's Response:

He made it, just barely! Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Chariot Ride

Talk about being thrown for a loop, although Bella probably has enough information in her head from the other Cullens, and Edward, to figure it out now...

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Cygnus

Some heavy moments there between B&E - wonder how things will go over the next few days for them :)



Author's Response:

Love that you're a Twi-guy-wish there were more of you!

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 I Will Not Be Denied

heheh loved Jasper and Edward's heart-to-heart :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Lazarus Rising

hehe loved Edward's happiness at Bella liking the flowers, and Bella's acceptance (maybe?) that Edward was courting her :)

So many possibilities for the reaction between the Monsignor and Edward though...

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Raven's Reflection

I liked the car ride and it's discussions, Bella's inching closer to the truth, and Edward's going to have his hands full preparing for that :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Burning

hmm "kissed by a miracle"; I think we all want that on some level? :)

 

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Pouring Gas on the Fire

I was actually getting quite nervous with the Pack interactions... relieved that no one's been hurt (yet) though I can see there might be some trouble later! :)

I have to add a "poor Edward" there at the end though, even with light at the end of the tunnel, it's still a fairly long tunnel.

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Fusion

Well I think B&E had some blessed relief finally?

It would also appear that Edward is thinking seriously of Changing Bella in the future.... assuming she's able to handle the truth of his existence.

Looking forward to the Vancouver trip :)

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Seeds Of The Whirlwind

ohhhh myyyyyy!!!!

I wonder what this means for B&E then? How long will it take Bella to settle down, and what's Edward been up to before arriving at the church??

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves

hrm I'm more than a little concerned at the Pack's thoughts and aggression towards Edward and now Bella... it's one thing to be against a "natural" enemy, but another entirely to be threatening/killing humans when you're supposedly sworn to protect them.

Looking forward to Bella getting a chance to calm down and think her way through all of the new information that's been thrust upon her.

Really hoping she doesn't freeze Edward out for too long, they've both got enough on their plate without adding an extended separation :S

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Delivering The Wind

hmmm well I'm hoping that Bella is able to calm down enough to talk with Edward and get to know him all over again... He's going to need the support if Volterra's about to come crashing down on him.

Jacob and the Pack are in deep trouble too for that matter :S

 
Reviewer: Daylen Signed
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Before The Fire

Such a relief to see that Bella will apparently work her way through things back to Edward sooner than later :)

Wonder how that phone call is going to go....

 




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