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Penname: chantiemaya [Contact]
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Member Since: July 15, 2011
Website: http://inordinatepassion.wordpress.com/
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30-something, single, cat lady, Holland, music, movies, books, eBay, Dutch, English, Swedish, open-minded...


These words help to describe me. I got hooked on all things Twilight quite late in the game. I'm a known late adapter of most things, except social media and Internet. I'm an active facebooker and I work as an administrative assistant in an internet marketing company.


In 2000, I discovered this little thing called fan fiction. I've always written – diaries and short stories mostly, but I had never seen anything like fanfic. For the most part, it was about my then fave pop group: Roxette. Now I've found a much better topic. I've learned that there is no end to Edward & Bella's adventures and I find it very inspiring *winks*




May 2013: Please vote for Let It Be Me in the TwiFanfictionRecs Top Ten Completede Fics of January! Here's the link: http://twifanfictionrecs.com/category/top-ten-fics/top-ten-completed-fics-apr-2013/ Voting is open until June 1 2013 :D




Where I'm at:


Follow me on Twitter: @inordinately https://twitter.com/#!/inordinately
Find me on Facebook as Chantie Maya
Check out my blog http://inordinatepassion.wordpress.com/ - Rambles about what I'm reading, the songs that inspire me, pictures to the stories etc.
LET IT BE ME has its own blog: http://letitbeme2.wordpress.com/
FWAR: http://freewritersandreaders.ning.com/profile/chantiemaya
Twilighted: 
http://twilighted.net/viewuser.php?uid=169909
TWCS: 
http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewuser.php?uid=79441




My stories:


Inordinate Passion - My first Twific ever. I finished it in January 2013 and it's 33 chapters long. Romance, Drama, a splash of Angst and...Lemons. Of course.
Banner for Inordinate Passion: http://i737.photobucket.com/albums/xx14/chantie79/Twific/passion3.jpg (made by enchanted-mind)
Blog for IP: http://inordinatepassion.wordpress.com/ (still a work in progress at the moment)


Let it be me NOW FINISHED AND NOMINATED AT http://twifanfictionrecs.com/category/top-ten-fics/top-ten-completed-fics-apr-2013/ Has been nominated for Fic of the week at The Lemonade Stand. It didn't win anything, but man, I was proud :)
LIBM has been reviewed by Wiltshire Glo on Rob Attack! http://robattack.wordpress.com/2013/02/22/new-to-you-fics/
Blog for LIBM: http://letitbeme2.wordpress.com/ - all the chapters are there with videos and lyrics to the songs I used.
Banner for LIBM: http://inordinatepassion.files.wordpress.com/2013/01/letitbeme3.jpg?w=1000 (made by forthelongestday)


Bella And The Beast - A one-shot I wrote for the Taste Of The Forbidden contest (2012) but I was too late sending it in. Then I decided to give it to Fandom For Colorado, which raised money for the wildfire victims in that state. After an appropriate amount of time, I posted it online. A few people have asked if I will continue it, but I have no plans for that. It's PWP so there's nothing to write, really ;)


My Keeper - my shot at Angst. Not a lot of views/reviews, so I guess it's not great ;)


Masseuse - a sweet, smutty one-shot.




My own personal review policy: I will review every story I read at least once.



 


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Reviews by chantiemaya
 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: September 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: September 4 - December 23, 2008

One of the best i ever read!!! I sooooo hope you will finish this, but i dont have much hope since the last update was 5 months ago.... Makes me sad. I would love to know the ending! Thx for this amazing story!

 
The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13645]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: February 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake

Read this one again, kept me awake most of the night. Still my FAVE! Just wanted you to know that :)

 
Summary:

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This is an AU but NOT completely OOC story that came to me. It would take place before Breaking Dawn. Edward gets the chance to be human for 24 hours. What will he do? How will Bella react? The rating is necessary because I think you can guess some things.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 14057
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: July 29, 2009


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: November 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - It begins and ends

Awesome idea, very original! I actually had thoughts of something like this when I was reading Elipse - if only it would be possible to make him human again, if only for a short time. And you made it happen ;) I like the way you write, you describe things very well without being overly technical. I liked how you summed up things without dwelling on them. Though I did mis a couple commas and some grammar was a bit off - having recently sent a couple chapters to the betas, I know how it goes when you're writing :P 

I saw some reviews stating that Edward wasn't behaving like a typical teenager and that Bella should be pregnant. Both things went through my mind as well while reading, but then again... we're talking about vampires and witches, so why should the other things be logical? Bella could still be pregnant, we don't know any more than just this bit. If we wanna be logical: it would be unlikely that Bella knew within 24 hrs if she was pregnant ;) 

 
With Teeth by TalulaBlue Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5900]
Summary: Feature

Edward is a 27-year-old alcoholic/addict struggling with his recovery. Bella is a 23-year-old who's moved back home after college. This fic chronicles how they meet, fall in love, and struggle with the complexities of their relationship. Not nearly as maudlin as it sounds (I hope).

Rated NC-17 for graphic (and sometimes non-romantic) sex, drug and alcohol use and abuse, profane language, and brief (very brief) suicidal ideation (although NO suicide attempts). No sexual assault, no cutting.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 183053
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: August 22, 2010


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: January 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wow, what a story. So well written, and so real, it touched me deeply. Thank you. 

 
Summary:

Bella decides to give Professor Cullen a very special lesson of her own.

AoS

Beautiful banner by Readergoof

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 9097
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2009 Updated: October 01, 2009


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: December 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Fulfillment

oh yeahhh i love this one :D great work!!

 
All of Me by flibbins Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3592]
Summary:

Bella lives to serve her Master. It can be tedious at times, titillating at others, but always, her world revolves around his. Come take a peek at the trials and triumphs in the life of a 24/7 consensual slave and find what happens when outside forces threaten to expose her lifestyle.

 

All of Me

 

Please note that this story contains graphic language, graphic sexual situations and is only intended for a mature audience. The BDSM relationship described herein is entirely consensual, but may be offensive to some readers. Read with caution. OOC, AU/AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: All of Me: The Series
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 109463
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2009 Updated: June 29, 2010


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: October 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Just finished reading your story, well done! I am not sure if you're reading this, because it's been such a long time since you updated. I was a bit disappointed when there was no next chapter but i guess you can take that as a compliment :) I am really curious where you planned it to go. I see some comments here that make me think something bad happened which made you unable to continue, so I just hope you're ok! I will fave the story in case you decide to post more. Best wishes, Chantie

 
Summary:

Two single parents, a two year friendship, one night when everything changes, and 'home' begins to mean something new.

 

BxE, AH/AU, M for Mature...

 

My entry in Ninapolitan's "D.I.L.F." contest!  check the deets: 

http://www.fanfiction.net/community/The_Twilight_D_I_L_F_Contest/73528/

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4765
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2009 Updated: October 01, 2009


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: December 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

sweet and lovely *sigh* makes me want to find that special someone even more... <3

 
Summary:

 

Robert Pattinson is twenty five years old and a solid A-list international star. He is on the last leg of a European promotional tour for his latest film, when he meets a sexy much older woman who has been hired to serve as his language interpreter. What will develop during their travels throughout Spain, Italy, England, France and America? Will this older woman teach Rob about love and lust or will he have something to teach her? Lots of ripe, juicy, delicious lemons and possibly other fruit, I promise.

 

Finalist for best RPF in the 2010 Faithful Shipper Awards

Winner for Best Comedy—Reality Rebellion Awards 2010

Winner for Best First Kiss—Reality Rebellion Awards 2010

2nd Place for Best Original Character—Marisa, Most Original Plot, Best One Liner—“Your scent is still all over my fingers. It’s driving me to distraction.”

 

Finalist for best RPF in the 2011 Faithful Shipper Awards

 

Thanks so much to all those who voted for OTI!

 

Banner created by the wonderfully talented DreamySims1

 


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Completed: No Word count: 289023
[Report This] Published: October 25, 2009 Updated: August 04, 2012


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: September 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

Hey Scilla, I've been reading the first 18 chapters since this afternoon and it's now 0:30 in the morning :P you've captivated me completely. Some things in your writing are different, the way you build sentences and some grammar and spelling errors - maybe you've already been told this, i haven't read the comments - but the story is so lovely, and i can't stop reading. perhaps you're not a native english speaker, like me. i adore your two-sided rob, the dirty talker and the shy one, and i love marisa as well. i can relate to her issues in some ways, which makes the story even better. i will soon continue reading, but it's bed time for me now ;) Best wishes from Holland, Chantie

 
Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37--Avril à Paris

Well, I wrote a review at chapter 18 and now i'm back. LOVE the story, love how you created marisa. i wanna be her friend :) they are perfect together. as i said before, i can relate to her, i understand how she's feeling and how things work in her mind. makes it all the more interesting to read what decisions she's making and how it works out. and seriously, i dont think i've ever read anything with this much sex in it, and good sex at that ;) thanks for this story! i am not at chapter 40 yet but i will keep reading until you finish! best wishes, chantie

 
Loner by Nilla Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9900]
Summary: Feature

Edward Cullen was a loner, an outcast. He clearly hated everybody, including himself. He was not a nice person. So, why was I so drawn to him? And why did I get the crazy feeling he felt the same way?

WARNING: This story will deal with the aftermath of child abuse and rape. If that bothers you too much, I strongly recommend that you don’t read.

 


Banner by steffyxxface



Thanks to steffyxxface for the lovely banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 115 Completed: Yes Word count: 365612
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2009 Updated: July 06, 2011


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Hi Nilla, I just have to say a few words before I continue reading. It's very late at night when I'm writing this, too late to be coherent I'm afraid ;) But I've been reading for a while now and I just have to say that I LOVE it. You just made me cry with this chapter. You manage to build it so amazingly slow and still keep me in it. I love the little nods towards the books and the movies too! 

Well I have to continue reading now, I can't stop... probably will stop when I fall asleep with my head flat on the keyboard hehe.

Best wishes from Holland, Chantie

 
Pegged by SubtlePen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

 

Edward acts out an interesting fantasy in a gay club… how will Bella feel about it the next morning?

 

 

 

 

A little *slash* for my BxE shippers. Rated M, AH, ONE-SHOT

Ohhh, how I love to mess with your heads.

 

thanks, as always, to the wonderful VJGM...  MWAH!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2799
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2009 Updated: December 23, 2009


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Pegged

Hahaha GENIUS! Very well done!

 
Finding Forever by Carson1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1350]
Summary:

On her way to London, a broken Sarah Anderson meets the one person who can save her from her darkened existence. Their age difference is the least of their worries.  What will they teach each other and do you really have a second chance at forever?

Fantastic Banner by: ms_ambrosia


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes Word count: 268155
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: February 14, 2011


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50(Shabbyapple)

Hi Leslie, 
I got to this site only a few weeks ago, and your stories are all in my faves list. I was reluctant to start reading this one for it being so long, and when I get caught up in reading, I tend to ignore the rest of my life ;) Such has also happened when I was reading this masterpiece you wrote. I think this is definitely the best story you wrote - even though I am loving the other ones as well. I've written fanfiction for years (about the popgroup I was a fan of), and I know every writer has their distinct master piece, a story that defines them, a story that has taken its toll on them while writing it, and it will never let them go. I know exactly how you feel when you talk about the writing progress. I wonder if you will ever write more on this story? I couldn't stop adding things to my fave story and I couldn't stop editing it, either.... Needless to say I am anxious to read more from you, I hope you will continue the casino story soon :) Thanks for teaching me about Canada, introduce me to a whole range of English words I've never heard of and making me laugh, cry, and blush repeatedly!

 

Best wishes from Holland, Chantie



Author's Response:

Hi Chantie,

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review.

I'm so glad you enjoyed.

As for more on this story, I'm not planning anything. These two are very special to me- my first fan fic-you know what that means.

I made you blush - that makes me happy.

Thanks again,

Les

 
Nineteen Canvasses by Carson1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 987]
Summary:

Bella thinks she finally has it all together after a life altering accident, but when she meets Edward, a once successful artist who has lost his inspiration, everything she thought she knew changes.  Rated NC-17 for a very good reason.

Many thanks to my amazing and talented beta xrxdanixrx for the wonderful banner!!!

Nineteen Canvasses Blinkie

Many thanks to the incredible MizzezPattinson for the amazing new blinkie!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Mike, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 148145
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2010 Updated: November 23, 2010


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Absolutely love this story. I've been reading it breathlessly. You've got me anxious, sad, happy, excited, scared, hot 'n bothered and teary all in one story! To me, that makes it perfect. Love your use of the language. I am not a native English speaker which limits me when I write, and therefore I love reading stories from native speakers. Just love it! Definitely going to ready your other stories now! Keep it up and thanks for sharing your wonderful talent and creativity. Best wishes, Chantie

 
Summary:

Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

Banner for TFICF

This story was co-written with the awesomesauce TwiliteAddict and made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content, language and sex in later chapters.**


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 39286
[Report This] Published: April 11, 2010 Updated: September 25, 2012


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: December 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Outtake

Aaaaw, what a sweet story. Funny, romantic, hot and sweet :)

 
Summary:

 

 

 

 

Bella Swan is dead *figuratively*...Izzy Black is an emancipated bad girl. Edward Cullen is the vampire that threatens to bring it all down in an inner battle between darkness and light.

 

WINNER OF THE DARKELLA'S DARKEST TEMPTATIONS CONTEST ON FF.NET.

  *Being continued into a full length story.

Rated NC-17  References to drugs, drug use, cutting, foul language and *LEMONS*

 

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 181820
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2010 Updated: December 03, 2012


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: November 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 ~ Resting in My Arms ~

Couldn't stop reading once I started! Awesome story, I've fave-ed it, looking forward to read more!

 
Smutiversity by Smutsisters Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 101]
Summary:

What's a girl to do when she writes fanfic where the smut isn't so much sizzling hot, as embarassingly warm? She goes to Smutiversity. SwedenSara enrolls on a course “Sex in fiction: how to write, and what to avoid” and gets much more education than she bargained for, two new friends, and a red-hot teacher who bears a striking resemblance to a young, British actor, known for his portrayal of a brooding vampire...

Enjoy Smutiversity!

In the beginning we were three, and now our big sis has retired - she's doing God-stuff - but we still love her!

This is a collaboration between SwedenSara and Netracullen. We are the Smut Sisters!

Check out the Twilighted thread FangMom created for our little smut baby: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=46&t=11347


Categories: Crackfic Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 50164
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2010 Updated: April 01, 2011


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Spunkgate

Just finished reading chapter 5 and I am a laughing mess with tears running down my cheeks. I think I might have woken up the neighbours with my LOL-ing hehehe... totally LOVE this, you girls are awesome!!!!

 
Summary:

 

Edward left Bella four years ago; two years ago, he dealt with Victoria and has been moping around ever since. He is a mere shadow of his former self, and the Cullens are at a loss for how to fix him, since he won’t go back to Bella. Bella’s life is a paradox; she both fell apart and flourished after Edward left her. She is estranged from Charlie and Jacob, is lead singer of an all-girl rock band called Hamartia (literary term meaning fatal flaw), and is living in Brooklyn, NY. She is now all about sex, drugs, alcohol, and Rock n’ Roll.  Along with her new lifestyle came a new outlook and personality; she has a quick temper and sharp tongue and finally puts herself first. Long gone is the selfless, long-suffering Bella that Edward left behind. What happens when Alice has had enough and brings all the Cullen “Kids” to one of Bella shows? Will the “old Bella” ever come back? Will she and Edward reunite? Can he accept who she is now and what she has done? Does she want to be changed, if everything works out? Will he be willing to do it? Read and find out. 

A big thank you goes out to FrozenSoldier who made this awesome banner!!!!!!!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Completed: No Word count: 326044
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2010 Updated: February 15, 2013


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 35: For Life

Hey there, I found your story a few days ago and was hooked instantly - I love rock chick Bella!! Never read about her in that role before, really awesome. I was getting tired of Broodward a little bit, you brought that acros also very well :D I can't believe I read all of it now, such a long story and it took me only a few days. Yesterday I even spent most of the day reading ;) And about this chapter, please don't worry. It was totally perfect. I loved how Bella took control, and how Edward was able to let go and loose his fear step by step. I was a little dissapointed with the earlier love scenes as they didn't reveal enough to my liking ;) Definitly got rewarded here hehe. Keep going as you are! You have a fantastic thing going here!

Love, Chantie



Author's Response:

Hey Chantie,

 Welcome, I'm happy to have new readers. Also thanks for the stars.

It means a lot to hear someone got wrapped up in my story.

Perfect? really? WOW...I was  a wreck about posting it. Yeah it was a long time coming however had it happened before it wouldn't have worked out right...he just wasn't ready to not feel guilty.

This chapter is Carlisle’s POV…enjoy.

 

““Hello, Mrs. Dwyer?” I asked, unsure if this was Renee. The woman I had met in Phoenix had sounded younger and more carefree. Whoever this was sounded tired, frazzled, and stressed.

 

“Yes. Who is this?” she replied wearily.

 

“Dr. Carlisle Cullen. I'm calling about your daughter, Isabella.”

 

“What's the matter, Dr. Cullen? Is Bella okay? Is she hurt?” she asked, clearly panicking.

 

I’m pleased she seems to care about Bella’s well-being. Maybe she’s not so bad. Perhaps it’s just a misunderstanding between her and Bella, I thought. Her mother’s reaction made me hopeful.

 

“I assure you she's fine. I'm calling to let you know that she's going into an inpatient alcohol and drug rehabilitation center.”

 

Renee exhaled loudly in the phone; I took it as a sign that she was relieved.

 

“Wait...Did you say you name was Cullen? As in Edward Cullen?” Her voice was full of scorn when she uttered my son’s name. Her hatred of him was palpable.

 

“Yes, he's my son,” I explained.

 

“Don't tell me he's back in Bella's life,” she snapped”

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing…it means so much to me.

 

Cheers,

~E

 
Unloved Unwanted by content1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 657]
Summary:

Banner by cheeseiscool - You my dear are AWESOME!!!!

 

 

Nominated at the Emerging Swan Awards - Best Drama/Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Complete

Nominated at the Tomato Soup Awards - Juciest Peach (story that makes your panites wet), The Bloody Mary Award (Best Vampire Story), and the Tomato Juice Award (Best Vampire feeding scene).

Abandoned by Edward and Jake, Bella runs away, right into the arms of danger and the Volturi. Can her new family help her heal? When the Cullens come back for her, which side will she choose, and who will win her heart in the end?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Athenodora, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Demetri, Didyme, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie, Sulpicia
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 234759
[Report This] Published: July 20, 2010 Updated: September 06, 2011


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Mate

LOVE your story. Can't stop reading, seriously sleep deprived after two evening being captivated by your writing :) I have not yet finished reading, but copied the chapters into e-mails to myself so that I can keep reading on the train home from work ;) Thank you so much for writing this, I am a fan now! Wicked twists, crazy ideas, a great look into the Volturi world. I love what you are doing to how I viewed the Twilght world - my whole outlook has changed! Thanks again. I will be looking at your other stories too.

The only critique I can add is that I didn't manage to read all of the first chapters' differents POV's because I was too anxious to continue to the other chapters!

Best wishes from the Netherlands, Chantiemaya

 
Summary:

Edward is an English soldier that tortures Scottish people to get military information out of during the 1300's. Bella is a captured Scottish woman with information. What will Edward do to get Bella to speak?

Very mature. Deals with borderline rape.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 10808
[Report This] Published: August 24, 2010 Updated: October 19, 2010


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: December 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

great story, very original!

 
Summary:

 

Bella is a 35 year old widowed mother whose life is about to change when she hires a very gorgeous and younger man to help out with the gardening. When they meet, she gets more than just her leaves raked. A/H OOC


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 16991
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2010 Updated: November 13, 2010


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: January 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Awesome story! Loved it from the moment she put her eyes on him haha! You worked it very well, putting so much into just five chapters. I love how you didn't write anything that didn't have to be there, every sentence had a purpose. Not sure if it makes sense but I think you get what I mean. And hey, you posted this on my 31st birthday, so I knew it had to be good ;)

 
Maid for Me by Kassiah Rated: NC-17 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Edward comes home to be the Best Man in his sister's wedding, standing up for a guy he can't stand and next to girl he can't figure out. What will happen when he discovers that the Maid of Honor isn't who he thought she was?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7190
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2010 Updated: October 11, 2010


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: December 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOL, Alice and Jake... that was funny!! Love angry Edward and sassy Bella and a great finale! 

 
In Braille by Alby Mangroves Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary:

A young woman, scarred inside and out. A guilty man looking for forgiveness. Will they recognize their redemption in each other? Beauty is not just skin-deep. Originally the winning entry into the anon Beautiful Edward Challenge. A/H, Bella and Edward, Romance.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4735
[Report This] Published: October 25, 2010 Updated: November 01, 2010


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: December 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: In Braille

Oh so sweet and tender, I love it! Congratulations on winning!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

 
Summary:

Isabella is a handmaid to Princess Jessica, Daughter of King Aro. When a knight from a neighboring kingdom wins his choice of bride, Sir Edward bypasses the princess and claims the handmaid instead. Isabella suddenly finds herself married to a man she does not know, and is tossed into the middle of political plots and scheming nobles. Her life is further turned upside down when she is unable to give her husband the one thing he must have.

"This is the hour of Forks' revenge. Volterra will fall to us for Aro's actions against your Queen, and no one – no one – who fights for Volterra will survive. We will not stop until every wall, every tower, every single structure in all of Volterra has been razed."

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 229617
[Report This] Published: December 06, 2010 Updated: December 02, 2011


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: September 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Humbly Rectify

This story has captivated me from the beginning, and I was waiting for this chapter - only to now wait impatiently for the next. Love the use of language and your consitancy with it, and I love all the little details you used in names - I was laughing out loud at things as the pack and the horses. It took me several chapters to really understand the horse's names, that was how caught I was in the story!

Well the only thing I can say now is: please hurry :D

 

best wishes from Holland, Chantie



Author's Response:

I'm very glad you are enjoying it!  Thanks for taking the time to review!

 
By the Numbers by Carson1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 738]
Summary:

 

Five people take a trip to Alaska.

One hike to a hot spring and everything changes.

Two people find something they never expected.

Sometimes spontaneous is a good thing.

 

Many thanks to the incredible xrxdanixrx for the wonderful banner! Thanks so much hun! XO

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 130205
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2011 Updated: July 25, 2012


Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: August 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Lovely, I love it! Hope they get to stay together, where and how ever it mayb be. I also hope Bella can teach Edward some more in the bedroom soon ;)

 
Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: July 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Love the story!!! You've got me sleep deprived after I couldn't stop reading last night hehe :P You are a very talented writer. I don't think you actually 'need' Edward & Bella to base your story on, you could write anything you want very well without them. Though I don't mind the visuals, at all. Simply love it, and waiting in anticipation for the next chapter! Best wishes, Chantie

 




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