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Summary: Feature

Seven years have passed since Edward and Bella last saw each other. They grew up as children and even became good friends. Once they entered high school, Edward became distant and eventually severed all ties with her. Confused and hurt, Bella moved on with her life in Seattle.Through it all, Bella had her older brother Emmett to get past the estrangement. Now, with Edward's imminent return to Seattle to help out with his sister Alice's wedding, Bella can't help wondering what drove away her brother's best friend all those years ago.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4369590/1/My_Brothers_Best_Friend

Nominated for Best Novel-Incomplete at the Eddie and Bellie Awards.

http://www.thecatt.net/tw/Vote/aspx

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 247400
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2008 Updated: February 28, 2010


Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: "The Death of Me"

Nice. It's about time Edward let Bella know how he feels, clearly everyone else already knows. I wonder if Emmett can tell?

 

Great chapter! :D

 
Summary:

Bella surprises Edward one day after work. He responds by letting his dominating nature take over.

From Edward's POV.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2162
[Report This] Published: August 21, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2008


Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Accepting The Consequences

This story is really sexy, and I love the last paragraph because it shows that Bella and Edward switch off the roles. It is nice to know they both play the dominant role at times.

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is a painfully shy intellectual desperately in love with his quiet, beautiful classmate. What happens when they have a mid-term project together? The Battle of Normandy changes everything. Slight Twilight Parody. Originally written for The Sexy Edward Contest. Expanded from one-shot to novella. RATED M. AU/AH/OOC. EPOV/BPOV.

Originally for FanFiction's Jayeliwood's Sexy Edward Contest. Rated M for Adult Sexual Themes. EPOV.

Chapters 1-8 are also available here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4509917/1/

Thank you to December for the banner.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Geekward and Nerdella
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 53910
[Report This] Published: October 08, 2008 Updated: January 14, 2009


Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Her Revenge

Such a Wonderful story!!

I really like this. The connection between them is so positive and solid. The descriptions and the development were wonderful. I was intrigued the whole way. Alice was a fun character and Rosalie's knowledge of men and her insights into their psyche was fascinating to read. I am adding you to my favorite authors!

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Her Obsession and Pushy Friends

It is good to understand her thinking. It makes her seem more real, and her actions fit.

 
Raspberries by Isabel0329 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary: Summary: Edward has a fantasy about Bella that he’s been desperate to see come to life. One that involves fruit. And he’s determined to make it happen.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3156
[Report This] Published: November 08, 2008 Updated: November 09, 2008


Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Nice descriptions. I love how you wrote Edward.

 
Snowed In by eclipsedawn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5321]
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Tongue Tied

Wonderful. That's all I can say. I've appreciated this story from the beginning, and it just keeps getting better. It's also great how you have their relationship progressing. It takes a mature writer to continue to progress a relationship both physically and emotionally after the initial intimacy. Way to go!

 
Summary:

We always want what we can't have, but their love for each other was so much more than just temptation. He was the eager young teacher, Bella's friend and her inspiration in a high school world where she didn't quite fit. She was the bright young woman who took Edward completely by surprise, his saving grace after years of closing himself off from life and love. When their days are turned upside down by their secret relationship, will they find a way to be together?

 

 

Rated for subject matter and sexually explicit material in later chapters. Huge thanks to Anne Cullen for the awesome new banner and to m81170 the beautiful fan art/banner below! You are both amazing!  

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 64999
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2008 Updated: May 07, 2010


Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Reconciliation

Wow. What a great emotional conversation between Rose and Edward. This makes me want to call my brother. lol. Great writing!

 
Summary:

 

stories/2326/images/gonebanner.jpgWhat if the wolf pack hadn't interrupted Laurent before he bit Bella?  This is the story of Bella being changed despite Edward leaving her to prevent it from happening.

Rated for later chapters.  Just like in New Moon, Edward will make an appearance eventually!

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 71429
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2008 Updated: November 24, 2009


Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed
Date: May 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Reunions

THe description, especially of the emotions, is so good. You are dead on with "he let out a choked sob then blossomed into a dazzlingly beautiful smile". Not only is the imagery beautiful, but I was struck when reading it of how realistic and perfect a reaction it is for him.

Thank you for writing such a lovely story! I look forward to reading the rest of the story...

 
Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: The Date

So Beautiful. Edward's description of Bella and his marriage proposal are both so fantastically well written. Bravo! You are a genius when it comes to romance. Thank you~

 
Summary:

PhotobucketThe idea for this fanfiction story came from my one main critique of Meyer's novels: that Bella and Edward's relationship lacks conflict.  Sounds crazy, right?  But think about it.  They experience small quibbles and spats, all of which are resolved on the very next page!  Yes, their love is enduring.  But even the most magical relationships need a little real conflict and angst to make them magical yet believable!  So I picked this up from New Moon.  In the book, Bella forgives Edward way too easily when they reunite, in my opinion.  So I wanted to give her character a new and interesting chance to stand her ground on her own turf.  Edward NEVER returned to Forks in this story; instead, it picks up three years later.  Bella is in college, participating in an environmental work-study program in Maine.  And...well, you'll see!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 30848
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: April 13, 2009


Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: When?

Sooooo Beautiful. Easily the best story I have ever read on twilighted.net. The imagery throughout is heavenly vivid, the characters are practically tangible, the plot is mysteriously compelling, and most of all, I love how you have granted Bella the opportunity to grow on her own.

There is a lot to be said about experiencing life, and depending on yourself. It is so wonderful that Bella is able to discover this. Also, that she has become aware of how vulnerable and uncertain Edward was as well in the relationship. That is a facet that was never explored in the novels. He seems invulnerable and inhuman in the novels. but this story does an excellent job of bringing out a realism and depth of Edward that I never caught before. Stephenie Meyer isn't as talented as you.

Finally, that you have them becoming human is touching and compassionate. It always bothered me in the books that they stayed vampires in the end. Becoming immortal strikes me as immature and undesirable. What of all the people you loose? For her, Charlie and Renee as well as countless others. Part of the joy of life is that it is limited. We value the time we have as precious because we know that we will not always exist in this realm. I remember being over-joyed at the mention of Edward becoming human for her in Twilight. I realized that would be the perfect ending. It would be more profound a sacrafice for him than her. He would be surrendering immortality in the face of something infinitely more precious:love. For her, she's agreeing to immortality, super strength, and eightened beauty. That feels wrong: shallow, naive, and utterly a misstake. I see no empowering truth to that scenario. There is no sense of love alone triumphing; instead, all obvious human desires are granted, increased beauty, speed, strength, balance, as well as eternal love. It doesn't ring true.

Please forgive my musings. I wish to thank you. I hoped to show by this review that I deeply admire your talent as an author and the work you have obvioulsy put out in this exceptional story. Please continue.

 
Summary:

Bella works as a Resident Advisor  at Seattle University.  She meets Edward at a Halloween Party thrown for the residents and employees of Weston Hall.  A friendship slowly builds and Bella finds herself falling in love with Edward throughout the semester.  What could the popular Edward Cullen possibly see in her?  BxE, AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 49362
[Report This] Published: January 10, 2009 Updated: September 25, 2009


Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Searching In Vain

SWEET! I Love Edward's narration. Bella is great too.



Author's Response:

EPOV is my favorite to write, though I find it incredibly difficult at times... He's just so wound up!  Thanks for reviewing! ;)

 
Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: A Spooky Little Girl Like You

Awe! Sooooo Cute!

It is funny that Edward ran all the way back just to not do anything. I am curious as to what Bella was singing?



Author's Response:

Yeah, nothing happened after all of that... What a dork!  As to what Bella was singing?  Uh... I can't remember, but more than likely, it was either a song by Placebo or The Cure, knowing Bella.  *winks*  ;)

 
Summary:

 

Edward loves Bella, but he's the 'best friend.'

Will he ever get over his insecurities that he feels about telling her how much he loves her?
Or will he just be the best friend for the rest of his life?
Rated for later chapters, and Cannon pairings later on.
EXB fic.

AH very OOC.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 11216
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2009 Updated: July 22, 2009


Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed
Date: February 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Take us out of the suspense! Please.

You're very talented. I not only relate to and believe the characters, i also desperately want to know how this turns out. Great job.



Author's Response:

Okay!

Thank you! :D and thank you yet again! XD

thanks for the review! and sorry for all the 'thanks'!

 
Summary:

 

Bella is an aspiring writer, who doesn't have time to date. In an act of desperation, Bella tells her mom, she has a boyfriend. Now Bella must hire a boyfriend for the holidays. Will Bella find that she likes her pretend world better than her reality?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 64982
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2009 Updated: February 25, 2010


Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed
Date: March 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Taking Care of my Baby

So divine! Please post the next installment soon.

The way you write about their love is just so endearing and refreshingly unique. Not many other writers can describe the minor details and feelings of love as you did when they just simply want to lean on each other or touch their heads together. I absolutely love the line by Edward where he moves close to her and whispers, "I missed you". So beautiful!!

Thanks for the chapter. It was definately worth re-writting.

 
Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- Happy Endings

This is such a wonderful story! I love how they progress, both seem very realistic and not overly insecure or angsty. It's a happy, good story to read and I say the same about the ending of this chapter.

 

 
Java Hit by mystichearts Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

A couple of one-shots that include coffee porn, and other creative ways Edward and Bella do to pass the time...romance, as well as smut, ensued. 

Banner made by the amazing love2laugh!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 4817
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2009 Updated: March 01, 2009


Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed
Date: March 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: I Need You

Sooo cute!

Got to wonder why she was so hesitant to squeeze a lemon though. She seemed a little dumb when she kept asking him twice about stuff when they were in the kitchen. "Didn't you buy olive oil when you were at the store...don't you want to squeeze the lemons" etc. Obviously not or he wouldn't have asked her. Right?



Author's Response:

Thanks! And haha, yes, there's a reason I made Bella this way...

(I don't *cough* really like her...)

Sorry, if you're a Bella fan. :D

Anyways, I appreciate the review!

~Mystic

 
Summary:

 

Upon Bella and Edward's first meeting, not a single cliche will be spared.

 

"Entwined on the hard asphalt of the school parking lot in Forks, Washington, our hero and heroine manage to look extremely cozy and incredibly inappropriate at the same time."

 

A crackfic of Bella and Edward's first meeting, were they human and incredibly, incredibly annoying.

 

If people like the crack and respond favourably... they may just receive more.


Categories: AU-Human, Crackfic Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 3366
[Report This] Published: January 25, 2009 Updated: March 30, 2009


Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Movie Script Ending

HILARIOUS!! LOVE it!!

 

Let's see some more from Jasper, too. He's quite funny. Perhaps he can pantamine and such now that he can't talk. Just thinking!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Jasper is on his way back. :)

:D

 
Summary:

'Sometimes it's the smallest decisions that change your life forever.' 

After a freak accident, Alice develops the ability to see the future. Not exactly what you want to happen when your starting a new school. Strange events push her towards fellow 'outsider' Jasper. But is everything what it seems? AU.

Rated for a teensy bit of violence in later chapters.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Ambiguity
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 36815
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2009 Updated: May 30, 2009


Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Determination

WOW! You are a GENIUS at suspense!

 
In His Head by angelsmg Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

We all know that Edward Cullen has the ability to read everyone's thoughts, except for Bella's.

This story is about Bella having the same gift, as a human, and being able to read even Edward's thoughts.

Takes place during the timeframe of Twilight.

 

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 7454
[Report This] Published: February 01, 2009 Updated: August 14, 2012


Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

Fascinating! I really love this Bella. She's independent and likeable at the same time. I'm intrigued to hear more.

 
Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Aftermath

Please continue post haste!! :D

 
Lucid Dreams by verlore Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 233]
Summary:

 

 

 "Bella smiled warmly at me then, unaware of my secrets and the silent threats they made on her life..."

 

 

Lucid Dreams

 

 

Bella Swan is a highly eccentric art student in Seattle.

 

Edward Cullen is a mind-reading vampire, who is instantly drawn to her creative and colorful thoughts. (Yes, he can read her mind! Sort of.)

 

When devious little Alice catches a glimpse of their future, she'll do anything to get them together, including moving Bella in behind Edward's back!

 


Come play in the forums!

http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=2677

 

Rated NC-17 for swearing, drinking, violence, & later chapters.Totally AU.

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 30602
[Report This] Published: February 10, 2009 Updated: May 21, 2009


Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Two

I really like how you are describing Bella's thoughts through Edward's mind as well as her own. The way you describe how he sees Bella is unique, fantastical, and vivid. Definately mesmorizing. I shall gladly read more!



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you enjoy it!  Thank you for the wonderful review :)

 
Show Me by booboo_kitty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 148]
Summary:

An entry for *A Twilight Teasing Story Contest*

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Bella comes into her room, fresh from the shower, wrapped in only a towel, to find Edward lounging on her bed instead of out hunting like he's supposed to be.  Slightly OOC Edward, but not too much.

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4481
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2009 Updated: February 17, 2009


Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed
Date: May 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Show Me (v)

Wow. Sexiest story ever! Write more. PLEASE!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  I hope you check out the companion story for this, The Acclimation Diaries!

 

 
Summary:

The title says it all-- Edward's POV of the scene in Bella's bedroom at the end of New Moon. You know what he said. Find out what he was thinking!


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2344
[Report This] Published: February 19, 2009 Updated: February 19, 2009


Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (One-Shot)

THis was wonderful! A superb job of getting into Edward's unique and rather dark head.

 
Summary: Feature

 

Edward Cullen needs to pass Statistics. Bella Swan is his tutor. She thinks he's a flighty, arrogant--albeit sexy--asshole, and he thinks she's Bipolar, but tries to win her over, anyway.

Can he change her mind, or do first impressions really last?

 Thanks to my baby momma, Maximista, for the banner! <3


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 258464
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2011


Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Sexy poses & Sexless eons

The situation buildup is just brilliant. I love how you interweave all the characters. Edward really has been an asshole though. Can't wait till he learns Bella's his soulmate. And I really can't wait till he starts to realize she's an amazing person and treats her respectfully. Seriously. :D

 
Moonshadow by diamondheart Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 642]
Summary:

What if Edward kept his promise and Bella never heard from the Cullens again?  Jacob was more than willing to console her, but would she have the sense to let him?

"You know what your problem is, Bells? You're in love - with the wrong thing. You think you're hung up on a guy who left you, but you're not. You're hung up on the idea of yourself as the heartbroken heroine."

Alternate ending to New Moon...just a nice love story, with monsters. Rated for certain chapters, at a sultry 108 degrees!

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Many thanks to Sassenach Wench for the stylish story banner!

~*~A finalist in The Indie TwiFic Awards Winter 2010: Best New Moon Complete & AU that knocks you off your feet! Thanks for all the love and support! ~*~

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Be sure to read the follow up fics '93 Million Miles' and 'Jacob's Ladder' posted here on Twilighted!

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Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles, The Moonshadow Continuum
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 76998
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: September 10, 2009


Reviewer: NewDAWN Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: After the Fall

Wow. You have me switched to Bella/Jacob. I do think it would have been the healthier choice at the time. Neways... great chap!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I just loved how Jake was always 'there' for Bella, but always called her on her crap! What a guy (being hot and hunky helps too, of course!) <><3

 




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