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Summary:

Edward, Bella and Jacob

A few months ago I tentatively started, with the story "A man at last", a series titled "Growth". It was meant to address, going backward, different moments of Edward's growth, going from teenager angst - whatever his real age - to full maturity. This is my second contribution. It refers to what happens in Edward's mind and still heart from the night in the tent to the end of Eclipse. Differently from other authors, I don’t see Edward collapsing psychologically. I see him having different positive epiphanies, so that at the end he is much more mature.

 

 


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2448
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2009 Updated: July 11, 2009


Reviewer: Emochan Signed
Date: July 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked this! It was interesting to read your take on how Edward feels during one of my favorite scenes in the series. Poor Edward is always brooding. But it's nice for him to realize just how Bella feels, and reading the devotion he has for her warms my heart. Great job!



Author's Response:

Hi there, so you have found me! Yes, my take of the night of tears is different from how other authors see it. I see it as a moment of deepening and maturing of their relationship. Thanks a lot for the review.

 
Need to Escape by lostluggage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5723]
Summary:

 

 

When Robert Pattinson needs to escape the crazy life of stardom- he finds an unlikely ally to see him to safety- a quiet bookshop owner who is secretly infatuated with Twilight, and a certain young British actor.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 97 Completed: Yes Word count: 829399
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2009 Updated: September 07, 2012


Reviewer: Emochan Signed
Date: August 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85-Orcas

Favorite parts of this chapter:

Robb vs Rob. I think Rob won.

And the "oh my rob" moment. I laughed so hard!

I really like the proposal. Can't wait to see what happens next! 

 
Reviewer: Emochan Signed
Date: August 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84- Freedom

I LOVED the begining of this chapter. I always wanted to see her reaction to him as Edward. The joking was fantastic. I just loved it. <3

 
Reviewer: Emochan Signed
Date: June 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82- All You Need is Love

I absolutely love this story. Usually I shy away from fanfiction that revolves around real people, usually because it's creepy reading them in false situations. But this story got me addicted after the first chapter! I love what you've done with the characters, and I have to say that before reading this, I was not a big fan of Robert Pattinson. But after reading (and doing a lot of goole searches!), I've started to respect him more. I never liked him as Edward Cullen, to be honest, but after seeing him in some interviews and looking up more information on him, I'm beginning to really respect him as an actor. And I think more people really need to do the same. I'm a bad judge since I've only seen in him Twilight movies and in Harry Potter. Reading these chapters makes me want to see his other films pretty bad.

 

So keep it up! Can't wait to see how this story ends!

 
The Night Before by evieeden Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 441]
Summary:

What if the first time Bella dreamed of Edward she wasn't really dreaming. Would their growing relationship be tainted by what had already occured?

Based on the 'that was the first night I dreamed of Edward Cullen' deleted scene from the Twilight DVD.

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Thanks to m81170 for the banner.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 54658
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2012


Reviewer: Emochan Signed
Date: June 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Night Before


 
Summary:

 

Banner by RachelxMichelle!

A winner in the Sort of Beautiful Challenge, this is a story about unconditional love.

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Jacob and Bella have been married for forty years when the Cullens ask to visit for what is possibly the last time.

A warning:  I've been told that this one-shot should come with a "bring your own Kleenex (tm) tissues" note. 

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Official Disclaimer: All trademarked characters and situations, familiar quotes and lamentations are the intellectual property of Stephenie Meyer. I have just enjoyed obsessing...


Categories: AU Characters: Jacob
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5102
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2009 Updated: November 03, 2009


Reviewer: Emochan Signed
Date: June 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Do you remember?

Wow, this was a very good one shot. I'm not one for fics that have Bella/Jacob pairings, but this one was very good. It was so sad reading Edward's reactions to Bella's lack of remembering him. The usage of him not existing in her head was well-placed! As sad as this story is, I really enjoyed it.



Author's Response:

Good morning, Emochan ~

Thank you. I really have been so gratified by folks' response to this little one-shot.  I'm glad that you found Edward's reaction to be appropriate and well-used – I was kinda liking it myself. 

Thank you for reading and sharing your response with me!

LJ

 
Summary:

 

 

Bella has the gift of second sight. After a tragic accident her world collides with Edward's. She is expecting him, but he is not ready for her.

An exploration of Edward's growing feelings for the woman he is, at first, salivating to consume.

*** A/U Mostly Canon pairings. Vampire/Human/Wolfpack *Will contain Lemons in later chapters*

**Indie Twific Nominee**

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: No Word count: 202250
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2010 Updated: November 19, 2012


Reviewer: Emochan Signed
Date: June 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue


 
Summary:

This is the Companion story for Need To Escape, told in Robert's point of view.

This story will make better sense if you read at least the first ten chapters of Need To Escape before starting this one.

The chapters of On the Threshold will parallel NTE. 

What was Rob thinking? Now we'll know.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 49 Completed: No Word count: 396747
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2010 Updated: March 11, 2013


Reviewer: Emochan Signed
Date: June 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28-She is Love

The best part of this chapter is Knickerbuster. I love that!

 
Made to Live Alone by JustTry Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1398]
Summary:

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All Isabella Swan ever wanted was to be noticed; to be remembered, to be happy, and hopefully, one day that someone could love her. But as a twenty-eight-year-old virgin with only one true friend, Bella has started to come to the stark realization that maybe she's just made to live alone.

***Tissue Warning***


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 160009
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2010 Updated: April 21, 2013


Reviewer: Emochan Signed
Date: July 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 - Tuesday, July 27th

I really LOVE this story! Seriously. A part of me is a little fickle in terms of how "fast" this relationship is going, but with the way you have it progress (ie Bella constantly dealing with bumps in the road), it makes sense to me. I really like how you write Edward. Can't wait for when Bella explains all this to Alice and Jasper when they return! That will be one hell of a conversation! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you're liking the story so much. I was worried about how people would react to the speed but I'm glad it works for you. Stay tuned. The Alice/Bella conversation will be very interesting.

 
Summary:

 

Edward left Bella four years ago; two years ago, he dealt with Victoria and has been moping around ever since. He is a mere shadow of his former self, and the Cullens are at a loss for how to fix him, since he won’t go back to Bella. Bella’s life is a paradox; she both fell apart and flourished after Edward left her. She is estranged from Charlie and Jacob, is lead singer of an all-girl rock band called Hamartia (literary term meaning fatal flaw), and is living in Brooklyn, NY. She is now all about sex, drugs, alcohol, and Rock n’ Roll.  Along with her new lifestyle came a new outlook and personality; she has a quick temper and sharp tongue and finally puts herself first. Long gone is the selfless, long-suffering Bella that Edward left behind. What happens when Alice has had enough and brings all the Cullen “Kids” to one of Bella shows? Will the “old Bella” ever come back? Will she and Edward reunite? Can he accept who she is now and what she has done? Does she want to be changed, if everything works out? Will he be willing to do it? Read and find out. 

A big thank you goes out to FrozenSoldier who made this awesome banner!!!!!!!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Completed: No Word count: 326044
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2010 Updated: February 15, 2013


Reviewer: Emochan Signed
Date: July 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: There's No Place Like Home

I love this story. I think it's great to see the termoil in their relationship and how it changes the dynamics. It's nice to see Bella sticking up for herself, and to see Edward wanting to change for her like that. It makes the story see much more real. Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Hey Emochan,

Wow thanks, that means so much to me.

 

Here is the teaser. It is short, but I don’t want to give much away.

 

Bella POV

 

“I was holding Edward’s hand as Liza walked up to us in the hallway.

 

“Oh, you two are still together? Thought you would have broken up again by now,” she sneered.

 

“No. Not going to happen, Liza,” I told her.

 

She scoffed and added, “Did you really have to bring him here? Aren’t you capable of going anywhere without him in tow? Or are you not allowed?”

 

“I wanted him here. My choice. Not to mention, this is my home too,” I snapped.

 

She’s being such a bitch. I know she hates that he’s taking me away from them, but she isn’t even hiding her displeasure anymore. Now, she’s just being a pain in the ass, I thought.”

 

Thank you so much for not only taking the time to read this chapter, but also review it. You’ll never know how much it means to me to have that kind of support/feedback.

 

Cheers,

~E

 
Summary:

 

Edward and Bella have the perfect life.  They have plans.  They have a future.  Until an accident takes Bella's perfect life away.  She has to learn to cope with her loss.  Unexpected letters help her along the way.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 84193
[Report This] Published: February 06, 2011 Updated: October 27, 2011


Reviewer: Emochan Signed
Date: September 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Cliff Diving

Wow. Just wow! I love how you've done this! This story would make such a fantastic movie! Can't wait to see Bella's reaction to the truth.

 
Summary:

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New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the attractive and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story, From Hate to Heat, develops so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Who, exactly is reading Bella's/bellybeans' fanfic? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Hilarity/UST/Love and lemons.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Completed: No Word count: 399617
[Report This] Published: June 21, 2011 Updated: May 21, 2013


Reviewer: Emochan Signed
Date: July 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Aide-de-Camp Black

I am totally in love with this story. The whole hat thing is hilarious. I really like Jake in this story, too. He seems to be pretty perceptive. It's too funny to read Edward being terrified of him. Nice change of pace from other fics I've read. The fanfic angle looks promising. I'm curious to see what happens next! Hope you update soon!





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