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Penname: luciegucci [Contact]
Real name: Lucie Campbell
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Member Since: April 23, 2011
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Summary:

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At a pivotal moment in New Moon, a simple choice alters the course of Bella's future, and she is forced to endure several more weeks before Edward's eventual return to Forks.  Victoria, a pack of young werewolves, and the blossoming of an undeniable bond become the least of Bella's concerns as she undergoes her own supernatural transformation. It turns out vampires and werewolves aren’t the only things that go bump in the night.  Edward/Bella/Jacob

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A huge thank you to placeofthunder for the lovely banner!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Kim, Leah, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 145984
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2008 Updated: August 30, 2010


Reviewer: luciegucci Signed
Date: May 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Fever

hmmmmm i was wondering.......could quil or someone imprint on bella? it would bring a whole new dimension to the love triangle! loving it so far..... you have a way with words!

 
Breathe Again by Ysar Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5438]
Summary: Feature

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards  


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010


Reviewer: luciegucci Signed
Date: May 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Overwrought: Bella's POV

i really wish seth could have imprinted on bella!!!!!!!! it would have been so cute- i love him x x x 

 
Reviewer: luciegucci Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Dilemma: Bella's POV

i know your busy but to me this is like my life, i would die without these stories to read and this is the best one ive read!!! please can you post a new chapter soon!!!!!

 
Summary:

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Thanx to the beautiful Anne Cullen for the banner!

 

Picking up from Edward's leave in New Moon, Bella never rescued Edward, Edward never came back, but somebody did ... 

 This story is set five years after that sad day Edward left Bella in the woods.

For years Bella searches for Edward, eager to tell him her new found secret.  As Bella gives in to her fears, that Edward really is gone, she runs into her past in the least likely place.  Only to find out, her past has a secret to tell as well.

 

"The smell of the worn book had distracted me from the wonderful aroma that had engulfed the room.  It had subdued my venom, had forced me back into a human-like state, my inner monster slowly crawling back into his darkened hole.  I swallowed one last time, and decided to glance at this glorious teacher.  Obviously he was a man of impeccable taste.  I might actually enjoy Senior Literature this year.  

I glanced up quickly from under my eyelids, my amber eyes focusing on a lanky form in front of me.  I froze.  

… Oh shit. "

 

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jane, Marcus, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 31919
[Report This] Published: January 20, 2009 Updated: October 30, 2009


Reviewer: luciegucci Signed
Date: May 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Bottle Caps

nooooooo please dont let them get together

 
Down and Out by Yvaine Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

One hundred years ago, Victoria made a grave mistake. Now Bella is coming back to deal with her past when her dear pack friends decide she needs a little human interaction after so long. But when that intereaction bring Bella and the Cullens face to face again, can Bella handle their newest secret? One that is living the life she wanted?


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Quil, Rosalie, Seth, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 2546
[Report This] Published: January 25, 2009 Updated: February 09, 2009


Reviewer: luciegucci Signed
Date: May 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - My Heart, His Heart

please update!!!!! we are all waiting to see what happens!!!! 

 
Summary:

"Disarm you with a smile,
And leave you like they left me here,
To wither in denial.
The bitterness of one who's left alone.
Ooh, the years burn."

       -Smashing Pumpkins, Disarm

This is an alternative plot to when Bella is on the cliff, picking up from the top of page 358 of New Moon. Bella does not rush back into Edward's arms. Bella struggles a great deal with depression, anxiety, and esteem. Several characters may be slightly OOC in that they use occasional profanity.

 

"This story contains incidents of self-harm. If this is disturbing to you, please do not read."

 

What if Bella broke down on the cliff and truly tried to kill herself? What if Edward got the news in a different way and hadn't gone to Volterra? Where would it leave Edward and Bella? Where would it leave Bella and Jacob? This story will be an angst filled alternative, but I do believe in happyish endings.

 

 Thank you for the banner, Roonie!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Harry, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 28947
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2009 Updated: August 11, 2009


Reviewer: luciegucci Signed
Date: May 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Torn

i wished that bella and jacob get together or one of the new wolves imprinted on her 

 
Summary:

You can't erase mistakes.

You can't wish they didn't happen--They did.

You have to accept that you made them, and deal with the consequences of making them. 

 

 

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 120442
[Report This] Published: July 20, 2009 Updated: September 05, 2011


Reviewer: luciegucci Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Charlie the Cheerleader

I like Jacob and Bella together I have always felt that they should have been together in the books as well. I just don't see why Bella doesn't seem to be into it as much as Jacob. I don't like it. However I think you are really talented and I have enjoyed this story so far :) x

 
Hidden Truth by Andre Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 350]
Summary:

It's been twenty years since Breaking Dawn and while the Cullens had moved on, a new cycle is starting in La Push. A new generation is coming, how will their lives develop?

Young Amelia Swan thought her life was normal, but once she starts to get folded in the arms of the supernatural world, she realizes that part of her life is a lie. Who is her father? Why did her mother died?

Hidden Truth


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Brady, Collin, Embry, Emily, Jacob, Kim, Leah, Nessie, Other Character, Paul, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: The Wolfpack Chronicles
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 161639
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2010 Updated: November 20, 2010


Reviewer: luciegucci Signed starstarstar
Date: April 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: The Old Pack

i swear wolves cant imprint on eachother???? i wanted ami to imprint on luke :( x good fanfic though x 

 
Reviewer: luciegucci Signed starstarstar
Date: April 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: The Old Pack

i swear wolves cant imprint on eachother???? i wanted ami to imprint on luke :( x good fanfic though x 

 
Reviewer: luciegucci Signed
Date: April 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Love Triangle

yessssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! he imprinted on sophie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bril fanfic x x 

 
Unloved Unwanted by content1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 657]
Summary:

Banner by cheeseiscool - You my dear are AWESOME!!!!

 

 

Nominated at the Emerging Swan Awards - Best Drama/Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Complete

Nominated at the Tomato Soup Awards - Juciest Peach (story that makes your panites wet), The Bloody Mary Award (Best Vampire Story), and the Tomato Juice Award (Best Vampire feeding scene).

Abandoned by Edward and Jake, Bella runs away, right into the arms of danger and the Volturi. Can her new family help her heal? When the Cullens come back for her, which side will she choose, and who will win her heart in the end?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Athenodora, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Demetri, Didyme, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie, Sulpicia
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 234759
[Report This] Published: July 20, 2010 Updated: September 06, 2011


Reviewer: luciegucci Signed
Date: May 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Confession

dont want bella with edward :( he doesnt deserve her :) x

 
Full Moon by Kat3411 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 39]
Summary:

Bella cares for Jacob after he is injured in the fight with the newborn vampires and struggles for her newfound feelings for him.  Will she stay or return to Edward?


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 137077
[Report This] Published: February 11, 2011 Updated: May 31, 2011


Reviewer: luciegucci Signed
Date: May 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

i was just wondering if we are going to get to see  what happens with bella and the baby? and what about seth? is it just a crush? i love this but there is so many loose ties and they include my favourite characters? xxx

 
Reviewer: luciegucci Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

this was really good and i loved it! but i think you should have done like 9 months lter when bella hd the baby? x



Author's Response:

But there is still so much more story to come yet!  Please stay tuned . . .





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