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Real name: Vicki
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Summary:

If you faced losing everything…

Would you trade your mortality to keep just a part of what you have? Count the cost before you decide.

One year after BD and all is not well. Bella's newborn year was way too easy. The newest Cullens are much harder to handle-both of them. Jasper has a tough year ahead dealing with these two! Flashes of human memories add to the tension and mystery.   

Once the venom courses through your veins it’s too late to change your mind.

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Carlisle Cullen considers himself a doctor first and a vampire second. His focus is to protect life. What he finds at a fatal crash seen causes him to break the treaty his family has honored for over 80 years. The entire Cullen family will face the consequences of his last minute decision. Now the wolves are pissed and the Volturi are getting nervous.

Scott and Diane started out on a family vacation they would never finish.  After losing their lives and children through the fires of transformation, can they still hang on to each other?  Diane's human memories, once thought lost, are slowly breaking through in the strangest of ways.  Why does she recognize the vampire in one of Esme's treasured albums?  By the time the Cullens figure out what's going on, all they can do is prepare for the inevitable.

This is a story of love, loss, and picking up the pieces. Even for immortals time only moves forward. There really is no way back.

Award

 Aug. 2011 Nominated in the best Angst/Drama Category

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 162730
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2011 Updated: February 08, 2012


Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: September 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: 19-Answers in the Desert

I get more addicted with each chapter. What is going up with Alice's visions? Update soon please.



Author's Response:

Hey Vicki!

So are you saying is, NWB is your brand of heroin? :snicker:

Chapter 20 is with the betas.  I will get it up as soon as I can.  The teaser has already been PM'ed to you.

Thanks for your review.

~MA~

 
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: November 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: 22-Confusion Amidst Chaos

I can't get enough. If its not Maria...who on earth could it be. Can't wait to find out who is on the boat! Update soon please!



Author's Response:

Hi,

Sorry it took so long, but I have sent the teaser for 23, which is now with the betas. Thanks for the review. You will know who is on that boat soon.

~MA

 
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: December 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: 24-Danger has a Name

Is Aro trying to insinuate that he has Bella or that if he takes Edward that Bella will follow? hmmm. Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

With Aro one never knows until he has you against the wall, yes?

The next chapter is with the beta but will go to Twilighted for posting as soon as I get it back.

Thank you so much for leaving yet another review. They encourage me to keep going.

The teaser for 25 has been sent to you.

~MA

 
Summary:

 

Edward and Bella have the perfect life.  They have plans.  They have a future.  Until an accident takes Bella's perfect life away.  She has to learn to cope with her loss.  Unexpected letters help her along the way.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 84193
[Report This] Published: February 06, 2011 Updated: October 27, 2011


Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: September 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Cliff Diving

I owe you alot of reviews but I couldn't quit reading long enough to leave one. Wonderful story. Can't wait for the next update.

 
Summary:

Abandoned by his parents, seven year old Edward is neglected and abused in his foster home and his only close friend, Bella, lives in Arizona for ten months out of the year.  It is only when the Cullens unexpectedly enter his life that he learns what it means to be loved and his wounded soul starts to heal.

When tragedy brings Bella to Forks for good, she comes hiding a secret too big to share, even with him.  Can these two tortured souls find happiness in a mad world of vampires and werewolves or are they already doomed by their own past?

WARNING: Strong language, underage drug and alcohol abuse, thoughts of suicide and suicide attempts, mental illness and child abuse.  Future lemons. Major angst.

All canon couples.

This is Edward's story.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Quil, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 94261
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2011 Updated: May 08, 2012


Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: November 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: A Different Path

I just fund your story and I owe you lots of reviews but I couldn't quite reading long enough to leave one. I can't wait to find out what is going on with Bella and what she did to her mother! Eagerly awaiting your next update.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  Since you've just found it, I won't have to apolgize for my long delays getting chapters out.  ;o)  At least not until next time. 

 
Resent by sistergrimm Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 233]
Summary:

AU Post-New Moon. NOTE- AU Hybrid Vamps:

Tony Swan

Banner by Mehek18

Set in 2010, the supernatural world is in a crisis unprecedented, its' very structure challenged by a force yet to be seen. As this new threat sends ripples of discord and panic throughout the ranks, a young vampire and her two children, twin beings as different as light and dark, struggle to remain hidden in the shadows; away from the world they belong to.

But not for long: Embittered by the desperate state his father left him, his mother, and his sister in five years prior, Tony Swan yearns for purpose; an opportunity to let out who he truly is. No more lies. No more veils. He won't have to wait long-as his sister grows normally, he inches closer and closer to adulthood, mind and body rapidly maturing despite the few years he has walked this Earth. And yet, throughout all this, one key fact remains forgotten by the young hybrid: fate's plan is never simple.

And in a world where monsters of human and marble flesh exist, how can it be?

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Pulling to re-write:

Well, technically not pulling, but definitely re-writing.

I’ve given it a lot of thought. I was actually going to do this once I got the 13th chapter of my main WIP out (So it wouldn’t that bad of a shock, after all I already warned of a hiatus on its way), but so far I haven’t been able to churn out anything that could pass as a chapter that’s “in- character” in regards to the present version of my fic. It’s just…not working. No matter how hard I try to write ch.13, I keep going back to my old copies of chapters one, two, and three and re-writing them. Hell, I’m already on ch.4.

I’ve looked at my early chapters, compared them to the most recent ones, and realized that the flow, the tone of the writing itself, doesn’t match. I had a completely different mindset when I began, still figuring things out, still not setting things in stone, and throughout the experience I learned a lot. More so if I hadn’t posted in the first place. A huge learning experience, I guess you could say.

It made me remember why I wanted to write this story in the first place, and that because I was under the impression I had to conform to a framework because it was fan fiction, I put what I really wanted on the back burner in order to write/focus on what I thought was supposed to be written/focused on.

And then I finally had an epiphany: I don’t have to follow any sort of guideline. I can write what I want to write. I don’t have to have the story closely tailored around Edward and Bella, or any of the other canon characters, I don’t have to write from certain POV’s in the first place because the truth is, my story, as someone commented after looking over a past chapter I’d written, is “not really about Twilight.”
And that’ s the truth. Resent isn’t about Twilight, at least, not completely.

To the person who commented, thank you, by the way. You know who you are.

Now, you may ask, “why post a wip in the first place?” well, the truth was, I didn’t think the fandom would still be around once I completed Resent. It was 2010, the twi-craze was already dying down somewhat, and I thought it would be risky to take my time and finish the story first before posting. I thought I was working on borrowed time. Plus, I wasn’t sure if the twist I had going with my main oc’s. would be received well.

The reviews and the fact that a good number of us are still here kind of blows those pre-conceived notions out of the ballpark, to my sweet relief.

What I said in past thread posts still stands: as long as the story is posted, it is not abandoned. Hiatus maybe, but not abandoned. The fact that it is still there means that I’m still a part of the fandom. If I ever decide to flounce, there is no way in hell that I would ever leave any of my writing’s unmonitored on the internet. If I ever decide to discontinue, you readers will be the first to know.

I’m leaving the current copy of Resent on ff.net, twilighted, and twcs for these reasons, and also because I know there are some who still enjoy re-reading the posted chapters. I’m sorry if this is upsetting. I know the update schedule for this fic has been somewhat tumultuous and nail-biting, especially with how things were left the last chapter, but I feel like if I don’t say something now, I’m going to end up posting something bland and soulless. Once I’ve written enough of the new version (or completed it) I’ll pull the old version and start re-posting.

I won’t hold it against you if you flounce, just don’t tell me that you are.

Again, I’m sorry about this guy’s, but my gut is telling me this is something I have to do.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 81816
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2011 Updated: August 24, 2012


Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: November 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Cannibal Glow

i was so excitede to see your update. I would loved to have read what transpired between Bella and Edward. I am assuming we will find out in bits and pieces through memories. As always I love the story and your version of Bella. Can;t wait for the next update and for interaction between Edward and his children.



Author's Response:

You and the other readers might just get your wish next chapter...And yes, some of it will be through memories. Glad you're enjoying this :)

 
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: April 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Pick-ups

I am absolutely intrigued by this story. I love the edge that Tony shows. A cross between broodiness and his temper. I can't wait to see Edward have to deal with his sons temper/angst. Unlike most stories where Reni is their only child and both her and Bella fall right into Edwards arms. I am thinking Tony will definitely make Edward work hard to be considered a part of is family. Can't wait to see where this story takes us.



Author's Response:

Glad you're liking it :)

And yes, Tony is not the type to forgive easily. Quite the opposite, actually. He's been known to raise hell in his own, deceptively crafty way on those he feels have wronged him...

More about Tony's past in later chapters...

 
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: September 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The life it seems

This is one of my favorite fics. Update soon please! I did notice the Reni's comment about some people not smelling so good. I wondered if that was a wolf.



Author's Response:

Your close :)

 
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: May 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: See no evil

I was so excited to get a new chapter. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. I can't wait until Tony figures out who Edward is and gives him lots of grief. I love the fact that Edward can hear his thoughts...so he will be forced to listen to every thought that goes on in his sons angry mind.



Author's Response:

:D :D :D

Thanks for reading ;)

 
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: February 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: To Stay

You can't help but feel for Tony. He has been through so much. He definitely got Edward's melodramatic/brooding side. I was hoping that maybe he would stumble onto one of the Cullen's while he was hunting, maybe not Edward, that wouldn't have turned out well. But maybe bump into Emmett or even Esme. Some how I think those two would have had the best chance getting through to Tony.

As for Edward, as Carlisle so eloquently put it, he needs to "man up". When you have kids you can't sit around and feel guilty and brood about the past because there are too many things that need taken care of. I think Reni will love Edward but Tony thats going to be a tough sell. He is going to battle against being with Edward just the same as Edward battled against being with Bella.

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!

 
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: June 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Hear no evil

Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter. I am just imagining all of them meeting up in the principals office. I love it.



Author's Response:

:D

 
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: July 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Speak no evil

It made my day to see the update. Great chapter and I can't wait for the next update. So excited for the talk with the Cullens. I just hope that it takes a long time for Tony to come to accept Edward. In all of the stories that I have read Bella and Rennesme always accept him back in there lives very easily.



Author's Response:

Let's just say Tony knows how to hold a grudge. For a veerrry long time. ;)

Bella won't be falling back into his arms like some dainty princess. She won't be OOC, but she won't be a pushover either. The past five years have made her stronger in some ways, but she's still the same in others, if that makes sense.

Reni's going to react how any five year old would react to meeting their father for the first time...

Thanks for reading :)

 
In Love and War by RaindropSoup Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

In Love and War

History is what defines us, personal and otherwise. To conquer it, one must decide not what they love more, but what's more important, and where one stood—with ALL things considered—could make all the difference.

AU-NM. All TwiCharacters. Nom'd "Best Shock Value" in the Avant Garde Awards, Polled in PTB's "Best Non-Canon Pairing Fic," Nom'd in the Sunflower Awards, featured in TwiFic Database's "Fic of the Week."

One year after the Cullens leave, Bella is thrown back into the vampire world in the least expected way and learns that Edward is not her mate. Pulled in different directions, with nothing being as it seems or what she thought, Bella will need to rediscover herself and where she stands. Yet, Bella is not the only one that has a past or emotions and circumstances that govern her. Unknown history is learned, especially by the Quileute. Secrets and betrayals are revealed, and by more than just a couple of the Cullens. Where love is found and bonds are broken, a war is brewing. And in the midst of another ancient war, what will be the most dangerous weakness? Love? Greed? Family? Old hate? Forgiveness? Will it be everything that makes you, you?


Categories: AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Athenodora, Bella, Bree, Caius, Carlisle, Charles, Charlie, Charlotte, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Heidi, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jared, Jasper, Kate, Leah, Makenna, Marcus, Other Character, Paul, Peter, Quil, Rosalie, Seth, Stefan, Tanya, Vladimir
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 80561
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2011 Updated: January 22, 2012


Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: November 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Into the Deep

Intriguing! Why are the volturi watching her. Is it because she knows about vampires or something else entirely.



Author's Response:

*laughs* Since you read the second chapter, I guess you got your answer. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: November 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: The Unknown Name

I am really enjoying your story! Now I have to hurry to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

:D A heartfelt "Thank you!" It's so warming to hear when someone enjoys your story. Hope you like the rest...

 
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: November 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Legends

I have to admit...I usually don't review every chapter when I am playing catch up but when I feel invested in a story this early I feel its the least I can due. Usually I would have bypassed all the ancestry part of the story but you have found a way to make everything seem brand new. Lovin it. Hurrying on to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review each chapter. I'm so happy to hear that you're invested in this story  so early on, and I hope you continue to be. I'll trade you an admission...*whispers* When I first started writing this fic, I wasn't that invested in it. Don't get me wrong, I was, but not like I am now. Chapter 10 and onwards will prove as much (in my opinion, anyway.)

Also, thank you for the kind words. I wholeheartedly agree that I usually get bored with the retelling of the ancestry and skim over it. I did try to squeeze it there without having anyone skip it completely, especially since it is slightly different than SM's version and part of the plot.

Again, thank you! Enjoy the rest...*hugs*

 
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: November 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Depravity

Jasper the God of War...I love it. Vampires at the Rez this is bad.



Author's Response:

lmao. Oh, you have no idea... lol.

 
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: November 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Reality

Ok lets just say I get more addicted with each chapter. Lovin it. Update soon please!



Author's Response:

Hey, you! I thought I lost you as a reader there for a while. I'm so glad I didn't, and I'm so happy to hear that you get more addicted with each chapter. :D Thank you. It's really encouraging to hear. *hugs!*

 
Silver and Gold by kkalmm Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 74]
Summary:

Silver and Gold by @kkalmm: Banner by @FrozenSoldier

Maria wants Jasper back and badly. When she tries to hurt him through the one he loves the consequences are huge for both vampires and werewolves. Rosalie's life is shattered and Emmett has to pick up the pieces. A mostly canon, post Breaking Dawn, epic that causes all manner of chaos amongst vampires, werewolves and the Volturi. C/Es, A/J, Em/R, Ed/B & Jacob/Leah

Banner by the truly amazing FrozenSoldier


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Leah, Nessie, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 54299
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2011 Updated: September 29, 2011


Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: June 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Committed

Very imaginative. I am still in disbelief that Rosalie is pregnant after drinking Jakes blood. Can't wait to see where this story takes us. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I hope you enjoy where my twisted imagination is taking this story. I'll put the next up as soon as I can. My PTB beta is still chortling over it! K :o)

 
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: August 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Rant

Great update

 
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: June 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Frustration

Great story! Very interesting nomad...I am guessing that his power is to null and void any other powers. Also very interested in what is going on with Rosalie. Can't wait wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Luckily, Ch8 has just this moment gone up so you can find out what's happening with Rosalie. Thanks for the review. K :o)

 
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: June 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Revelation

Rosalies pregnant! That I was not expecting. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Glad I caught you by surprise! I'll get right on to the next chapter. Thank you. K :o)

 
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: July 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Discovery

I love it. Can't wait for the next update. This should be a riot. Nothing better than the worry of Leah not being menopausal but the prospect of having a litter of pups.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'll put them up as fast as I can... It's certainly going to be fun in La Push for a while! K :o)

 
Summary:

Edward and Bella share a class at the University of Washington-and not much else. She's shy and reserved as she adjusts to her new life in Seattle. He's angry and isolated because of his upbringing in LaVerrot, a secretive, gated community. They're drawn together, but secrets of her past, and revelations of his pure lifestyle, threaten to keep them apart.

There is mention of sexual abuse and rape in this story. Please avoid if this is a trigger.

Pure Revelations Banner


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 95 Completed: No Word count: 618155
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2011 Updated: February 02, 2013


Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: October 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Maybe, Just Maybe

Its almost crazy how excited I got when I saw an update. It just made my day and I dread the day when the story ends. Although, I can't wait for the next update.

 
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: April 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 78: Pleasure

OMG I was so excited to see that you updated again today. This is the best story that I am currently reading. Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response: Wow. Thanks so much for the compliment. There are so many good stories out there... Just wow. We're working on the next chapter... So, until next time, xoxo--- Deanna (ilovealion) EPOV of PR

 
Monster by Dennycullenlutz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 32]
Summary:

One person from Rosalie Hale's human past comes back to crash down all the walls she has built for seventy-five years, to destroy her marriage and pull her apart from her family.


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Emmett, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 28837
[Report This] Published: April 24, 2011 Updated: November 23, 2011


Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: June 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven: I knew it...

Loving this story. Very intriguing. Royce seems like an evil one. I can only imagine the trouble he is going to cause. I like the fact that you are continuing the story and showing that other members of the family can have problems too. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

WOW thank you so much for taking the time to read and write me a review. I'm so excited!! *hugs* Royce will cause a LOT of problems... hope you like what its coming.

Thanks and hope to read more comments from you.


Dennisse

 




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