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Real name: Vicki
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Summary: 
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Bella was left by Edward to clean up the ruins of her life after his betrayal. What happens when Edward finds out that not all was as it seems. What are the consequences of his sins and what will he do to get her back?
 
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 91 Completed: Yes
Word count: 421991
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2011 Updated: January 14, 2013
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: December 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Wrong
Bella needs to start to get a clue and realize that the Cullens are sorry and have realized they were wrong. She isn't that naive. Its fine for her to be hurt by their actions but really she has to start feeling that her belief is wrong. Can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: March 04, 2012
Title: Chapter 37: Confessions
Loved it!!! Hope you are feeling better!
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: March 18, 2012
Title: Chapter 39: Beginnings
I was as confused as Edward and Bella about what when on with Demetri and the phsychiatrist, although I could see where there would be great fun in putting the two of them together. I loved the action between Edward and Bella and the impromptu sponging off. Can't wait for the next update. Author's Response: :) Just hang in there. You'll see Demetri and Elizabeth again! ;)
Aro and Tanya sent direclty to you!
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: June 14, 2012
Title: Chapter 56: Memories
Looks like things are going to get a little rouger for our couple as they work through things. I loved Bella's walk down memory lane. Can't wait for the next update!
Summary: 
Seventeen year old Nessie has recently made some big changes to her life. She is finally dating her soul mate, Jacob, and she has moved away from home and started college. All she has to do is balance these things with an overprotective family and her anxieties about herself.
Leo is a tracker with great intuitions and a dark past. When Nessie crosses his path, all his instincts tell him that this is no chance encounter.
Will their unlikely connection bring self-acceptance and freedom for one, and atonement for the other?
A Jacob and Nessie love story. Canon.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Quil, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 21160
[Report This] Published: September 30, 2011 Updated: December 07, 2011
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: November 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: What is she?
Interesting. Wondering what Nessie is up to? Author's Response: Hi there, thanks for the review, it is greatly appreciated :)
Summary: Edward left Bella almost a year ago, upending her whole world. What happens when Bella receives a phone call that just might shatter it? "Wait, Alice…Edward is dying?" I choked out.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 74206
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2011 Updated: March 13, 2012
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: December 21, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Ten: A Little Bit Stronger
Wasn't expecting that! Bella's pregnant! Now what is up with Edward is he just there to see Bella or is he sick again. Can't wait for the next update!
Summary: 
When is the eleventh hour for Jacob and Bella? Was it in New Moon or Eclipse? Do we have to go back to the dive off the cliff? Maybe it's after the newborn fight? Perhaps even later.
It's one minute before midnight. Bella and Edward are married, and she is pregnant. What can Jacob possibly do to change the course of events?
This is a Jacob / Bella story that begins part way through Breaking Dawn. That's right, this story picks up at the end of Book I of Breaking Dawn.
**WARNING!**
Multiple character deaths (from both sides)! I cannot guarantee anyone's life except Jacob and Bella's. Just so you know, in case it's going to really bother you.
 
1st Place "Best Complete" 1st Place "Best Grasp of Character"
Disclaimer: The following is based on the characters, settings, and events that appear in the Twilight series by Stephenie Meyer. All recognizable and/or trademarked elements, including, but not limited to, characters, settings, events, plot points, etcetera, are the property of their respective owners. No copyright infringement is intended. The author of this specific story (known by the pen name, light4dawn) is not associated with Stephenie Meyer, or any other affiliates involved with the Twilight series. This work is intended for entertainment purposes only, and no profit is knowingly generated as a result of it. Only aspects entirely unique and original to this story are owned by this story’s author.
Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Word count: 68795
[Report This] Published: November 21, 2011 Updated: January 16, 2012
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: December 19, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Displaced
Wow...of all people I wasn't expecting Emily to be the first to die. But Sam is definitely going to cause some trouble now. And it sounds like Jacob is beginning to realize that he imprinted on Bella's baby. Can't wait for the next update! Author's Response: Well, technically Emily is death number two. Remember the infant that died in chapter one? As for Jacob realizing the imprint... he's realized, there's no "beginning to" about it, maybe a little denial.... And Sam is certainly a mess, but don't make too many assumptions. Remember, in canon, everything regarding how I wolf would act if his imprint died is based on legends. These same legends have been proven to be exaggerated (i.e. imprinting being "very rare") or based on assumptions (only males being wolves).
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: November 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Death
Great start! I can't wait to read more. Author's Response: Thanks for reading and leaving a review! I'm glad you liked the first chapter. There is more coming very soon.
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: November 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Driving
Well it looks like Jacob is getting through to Bella. I am definitely not a Bella/Jacob person but I am interested enough to keep reading and see where your story leads me. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks for giving my story a chance. I'm just going to warn you... this is most definitely a Jacob/Bella story, and I am a die hard Jacob fan. Be aware, things might not go the way you'd want them to. If you're okay with that, then great! I mean, it is still just a story. I just wanted to make sure you knew in advance.
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: December 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Torn
Very curious as to what is going on with Aro. Update soon please! Author's Response: Thursday, promise! I'm going to tell you though... you're not going to find out about Aro just yet, but there will be other "action" coming. Just an FYI... you probably already know, but the wedding gift is the gift that was given to Bella by Aro/Volturi in Breaking Dawn at around the same time. It's not something I wrote in for my fic, it's a canon event.
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: December 15, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Intruder
Ugh...still don't know what is going on with Edward/Bella/Aro but we got a good look into Jacob's mind. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon please! Author's Response: Well definitly something is going on down at the Cullen ranch. You'll find out. Just an FYI though (in case you don't remember from the book). The gift Arrow sent is the same gift he sent them in Breaking Dawn right at the end of Oct/early Nov.
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: December 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Solitude
Enjoying your story. I am usually not a Bella/Jacob fan but your story is definitely persuading me. I would still like to know what Bella meant by things aren't the same with her and Edward. As well as where he was when she left. Since she said she left before he returned. I need to understand how/why she turns to Jacob. Can't wait for the next update! Author's Response: The next update will answer a lot of your questions, but not all. As for her why she turs to Jacob (and by the way, Jacob is not convinced this is permanent), that answer will take a more than one chapter to answer
Summary: 
"Until the murders, it was difficult to enjoy anything in this dull town. Now CSI has nothing on my life, and I have my very own killer to catch. I just wish I didn't have another mystery to solve. Bella. Just as puzzling, only infinitely more annoying."
This story contains mature themes; including strong language, graphic violence and sexual situtations. It is not intended for younger readers.
AH. EXB. EPOV.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jessica
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 35531
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2011 Updated: January 04, 2013
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: April 06, 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Tab 'A' into Slot 'C'
Just found your story. Its interesting and different. Can't wait to see where this is going. Author's Response: Aw, thank you. I hope it'll hold your interest :)
Summary: 
Banner made by the talented artist Sunray16
After Edward left Bella, she was able to find love with Jasper. When the past catches up to them, can their love withstand the self-doubts, jealousy, betrayal, and revenge that threatens to tear them apart and place the Cullens in danger? AU
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Other Character, Paul, Renata, Rosalie, Sam
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 70915
[Report This] Published: December 10, 2011 Updated: August 05, 2012
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: April 06, 2012
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Illusions
Loved it. But after everything that happened she's going to go to a place called "Club Bite Me." That had me lmao. Can't wait for the next update. Author's Response: LOL! yeah, I couldn't resist naming the club that name.
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: January 26, 2012
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Private Eyes
Just found your story today! Thought I would give it a try. I have to admit I am enjoying it more than I thought I would. I am not usually into Bella/Jasper stories or for that fact stories of Bella with anyone other than Edward.
In this case I feel like there is more going on in this story. Bella hearing Edward's voice protecting her and right after Alice having a vision. I can't believe Bella didn't push for more info since both things happened. To me it has also sounded like Alice pulling an Edward...saying things just to make sure Bella and Jasper are safe. I am not believing that she befriended Bella to keep her away from Jasper. If that were the case why is she taking care of Charlie! Too many things that are just not adding up to truth! So it is enough to keep me intrigued. Update soon please because I can't wait to figure out what is going on! Author's Response: Hi Vicki!
Thanks for the wonderful review. I was totally Team Edward when I started fan fiction, but once I read Jasper/Bella fics, I was totally hooked. :)
You are so insightful. Yes, there is more to the story than meets the eye and just when you think you have the answer, the characters will do something that will make you go "What?". All will be revealed at the end of the story. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: February 01, 2012
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Remorse
It was nice seeing into Alice's mind through this situation. But oh my, she called Maria. It official Alice has lost her mind. Author's Response: yep, she has officially lost her mind. LOL! wait until you see what the consequences of her actions are. thanks for reading and reviewing.
Summary: 
What do you do when the love of your life has no memory of you? Two years after they left her, Bella is back in the Cullens' lives. The only problem is that she doesn't remember them. A Bella and Edward love story.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Word count: 116697
[Report This] Published: December 11, 2011 Updated: June 25, 2012
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: December 20, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three - Anticipation
Very curious to see if Bella remembers or just forges a new bond with the Cullens. Can't wai for the next update! Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Simaril x
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: December 19, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two - Choice
Great start! You are a wonderful writer. I am getting just as addicted to this story as I already am to your other story. Can't wait for the next update! Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Simaril x
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: December 14, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One - Forgotten
I am intrigued. You have the start of a great story. I am very curious about Bella's comment about the name on the roll call having a note. This would probably be a clue as to what is going on with her. Can't wait for the next update. Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Simaril x
Summary: Ten years after the events of Eclipse, Edward meets his true vampire mate; Bella is left desolate. Alice and Jasper take her in with them to help her through her heartbreak. Rated for mature relationship issues.
Banner by the lovely evieeden.
Excerpt from Chapter Two:
"I love you," she protested, sounding hurt and small.
He stepped closer, one hand tentatively extended. "I love you, too. In, in a way."
After dragging one final breath into her lungs, Bella turned. "In a way?" Her arms were wrapped about her torso, her eyes wide and dark and frightened. "What does that mean?"
"It means that — that out of all the things I was afraid of, Bella, I never ever thought I would not be your mate when you changed. But when you awakened, got through the initial adjustments, I could read it in Jasper's mind. We did not share a vampire mate bond."
Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: Undeniable: Vampire Mate Bond Series
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 54397
[Report This] Published: December 16, 2011 Updated: January 27, 2012
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: January 02, 2012
Title: Chapter 6: In the Middle of it All, It's Nobody's Fault
Ok I owe you quite a few reviews. I was reading on my cell phone and couldn't find a way to review. I just knew this story wouldn't intrigue me by the description but considering I have loved all your other stories I figured I would give it a shot. Just had to let you know that you won me over. I am loving it. Although, I still don't like Edward's mate but I can't wait for the next update! Author's Response: Good evening!
No one likes Edward's mate, so you're not alone. LOL
Thank you so much for taking the time to read on your phone! I don't have a smart phone and would imagine it might be hard to keep up with the small screen? And thank you for your kind words. :) Glad you're liking this.
The next chapter is in the queue!!
Thanks for reading!
LJ
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: January 05, 2012
Title: Chapter 8: You're Making Me Feel Not Alone
Well its nice to see that Mom and Dad have realized she isn't dead and wants to spend time with her. Can't wait for the next update! Author's Response: Good evening!
LOL Yeah... Remember the Cullens are only human. ;-)
Next update is in the queue! Should be up soon.
Thanks for reading!
LJ
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: January 25, 2012
Title: Chapter 19: I'll Follow You Into the Light
I say we definitely need an Edward outtake. I want to see/hear his head explode when he hears about Bella/Jasper/Alice. lol. Author's Response: Good morning!
LOL Ah, to watch Edward's head explode... Might be fun. :)
Thanks for reading!
LJ
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: December 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: All Full of Good Intent
Interesting! Can't wait to see where you take this
Author's Response: Good evening!
Thanks! I take it OUT there. *grin* This story all tumbled out my head in the space of a couple of weeks. So I'll be updating as soon as I get notification of a chapter being validated. Thanks for joining me in this AU!
LJ
Summary: After a shocking discovery, Bella is forced out of her rainy, northwestern home and takes up residence in sunny Jacksonville, Florida. While she expects her life with vampires is over, she is unknowingly moving deeper into supernatural waters.
"There's always a bigger fish."
Banner provided by the awesomely amazing SoapyMayhem!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 117339
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2011 Updated: June 02, 2013
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: April 18, 2012
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Ok can't wait to find out how Bella didn't figure that she was a vampire. Can't wait for the next update!
Summary: Edward and Bella have been reunited and are building a new life together. But with the changed family dynamic, and a new threat on the horizon, things are not going to be easy. Sequel to I'm Only Sleeping.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 103730
[Report This] Published: December 27, 2011 Updated: April 24, 2012
Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: January 16, 2012
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty - Pale Moon
You've done it again! Great story! I have been reading on my phone and not able to leave a review. But I have to say your story is amazing. I can't wait for the next update!
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