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Summary:

Down The Rabbit Hole graphic by casket4mytears

After departing Forks with the rest of the Cullen family, Alice becomes increasingly preoccupied with the information revealed to Bella by James about her life as a human and the vampire who changed her. Told partially through flashback and through present-day (read: during the New Moon time span) events, Down The Rabbit Hole explores the details of how Alice comes to an understanding of her past.

"I read that letter, just last week
You were telling me the darkness had taken you
and it had only lasted a week
I don't know where your saviour is...
Check the back room
He's writing the book that describes the end
as you're passing this life

Now I see it: it's a doorway
It's a doorway to my love..."

The Streets Fell Into My Window - The Red Paintings

July 2009:  Indie TwiFic Awards Finalist:

Best Canon Complete
Best Characterizations (non Edward/Bella) Complete

Eternal Hope Contributor


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Alistair, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The White Rabbit series, Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 58669
[Report This] Published: September 30, 2008 Updated: October 22, 2008


Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: Serendipity

This was wonderful!  It grabbed my attention and it was one of those stories that I couldn't quit reading until it had ended.  Very pleasant way to spend most of my day!  :)

 

Off to read more your writings and see what else I can discover!

Thanks for sharing!

 
Disc Jockeys by casket4mytears Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 372]
Summary:

Disc Jockeys

2009 Nominee, Best AU AH, Most Romantic Moment, Indie TwiFic Awards

2009 Nominee, Character You Wish Was Real (Jasper), The Faithful Shipper Awards

A small-town music store... Several music-obsessed slackers with a penchant for sexual misadventures, disastrous love lives and a little too much alcohol... Customers with horrible taste in CDs... Thousands in missing cash deposits... and Carlisle's not even supposed to be here today!

Disc Jockeys is the story of Velvet Records, one of the few remaining independent music stores in Washington State. From shoplifters to has-been singers, from franchise threats to the complicated love lives of the inhabitants within, the employees of Velvet handle it all, under the watchful gaze of Carlisle, their long-suffering manager.

This AU, AH is a spoof of Empire Records blended with healthy cynicism of the Clerks vein. If you haven't seen Empire Records, have no fear; this fic assumes you haven't the faintest idea what "Damn The Man - Save The Empire!" means (but SEE IT because it's an awesome flick).

This fic is rated NC-17 for underage drinking, drug use, sexy naughty times, dark issues including sexual assault and abuse and language. Slightly OOC for some players, canon pairings apply (eventually).

SPIN THE VELVET RECORD STORE PLAYLIST HERE


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 117000
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2008 Updated: June 05, 2009


Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Suspicious Minds 4: Closing Time

Fantastic as always!

 

Keep the stories coming - I've got my first favorite author tagged!

 
The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13655]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010


Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Fantastic!

I always love great stories told by great authors!

(I think hubby is wondering what has gotten in to me the last few days - not that he's been complaining!) 

Thanks for the inspiration!

 
Summary:

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When Alice's visions reveal the Volturi's horrfying plans to descend upon the Cullen family, armed with Irina's testimony of an immortal child sighted in their care, she enlists Jasper's aid in seeking out the one hope that may spare all of their lives... if they return alive.

This story serves to fill in Alice and Jasper's adventures away from the Cullen family during Breaking Dawn, and is second in an intended series based strongly in existing canon. That said, it is highly recommended that the first story in the series, Down The Rabbit Hole, be read, as parts of the created canon/backstory for Alice Cullen will become relevant down the road in this story as well. As with DTRH, this story draws on allusions to Alice's Adventures In Wonderland and Through The Looking-Glass, And What Alice Found There by Lewis Carroll.

Rated NC-17 for violence, language and a dash of lemons. This story will occassionally contain dialogue and text from Breaking Dawn by Stephenie Meyer for clarity and continuity; no infringement is intended and all chapters will be noted accordingly in that instance.

Note (May 13/09): The White Rabbit series now has its own blip.fm account, complete with ever-growing playlist of songs that influence the stories for you to stream.   Check it out here:  blip.fm/aliceswhiterabbit

July 2009:  
Indie TwiFic Awards Finalist:  Best Canon (WIP)
Indie TwiFic Awards Nominee:  Best Characterizations (non Edward/Bella) (WIP) 

Eternal Hope Contributor


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Alistair, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlotte, Chelsea, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kachiri, Marcus, Nessie, Peter, Renesmee, Rosalie, Senna, Zafrina
Challenges:
Series: The White Rabbit series, Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 81239
[Report This] Published: January 30, 2009 Updated: October 01, 2010


Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue

Once again - amazing!  Truely worthy of my free time and was a lovely trip for my imagination. 

There is nothing worse than spending precious freetime reading something hastily written and poorly put together and with your stories I've never once been disappointed!  You have an amazing gift to truely paint pictures of what your created world is like.

This type of story is exactly what I was searching for on this site.  I wanted to read more about the other charcters and read about their stories before and after Stephanie Meyers books and I feel lucky that the stories I chose to read were so wonderfully done and true to how I imagined the characters in my mind when I read the books.  So THANK YOU for this treat and gift of words that you obviously put so much of your time, effort, and self into and so happily shared it with all of us here. 

Your writing is awesome! 

As always - off to check out what other wonderful stories you have posted!

Jess

 
Summary:

What if Bella hadn't moved her junior year with her father.  Instead she moved with her mother to Florida.  Upon visting her father before leaving for college she encounters two members of the Cullen Family.  Alice's vision tells her that Bella would change their lives forever. 

Edward's first encounter with Bella is 30,000 feet in the air on the way to Darthmouth.  With no means of escape will he be able to resist the temptation of her blood?  Or will he bring the whole plane down for a taste?

 

 

Flight of the Phoenix

 

  ~Edward's POV: Chapter 2

 

I closed my eyes to listen to the tones of voices around me. I heard at least one hundred passengers. It would be a massacre. Could I really justify destroying all the lives of everyone on this plane just to taste her blood?

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 71150
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2009 Updated: May 15, 2010


Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Her Deception

I LOVE this story and know the last update was a while ago but I wanted to know if you are planning on finishing this?

 

It is REALLY good!

 
Summary: Feature

 

While hunting one afternoon, Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle stumble upon what appears to be a corpse.  When they learn it's a severely broken vampire, they take him home to do what they can to help.  But of course, fate has plans for this man.  Canon Couples.  AU.  DARK Themes.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 158872
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011


Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: The Balcony

That's just awful that he was changed to spend his time in a cage. 

I seriously want to hug him so much in every chapter!

 
Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: The Bath

I'm so glad he's getting better!!!  I wish Bella could stay with him all the time!

 
Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: The Sunset

This one was great as always - I love seeing him starting to discover the world and making the first move towards contact with Bella.

 
Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: The Bedroom

Great chapter as always - It's great to see him getting better!

 
Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: The Antidote

He just needs some tender loving care - and a little bit of blood!

 
Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Trial

I LOVE all the science work that you put into this!  It's fasinating to read - even if you created it - you make is seem like it's a complete possibility!

 

Amazing as always!

 
Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: The Venom

Again - I just want to hug him and tell him everything will be OK.

 

 
Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: The Weekend

I LOVE this story!  You do such an amazing job painting a picture with words - you transport me to what ever setting you are describing...

 

Can't wait to read the new chapters!

 
Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Pillow

I would GLADLY give him a sponge bath!  :)

 
Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: The Next Day

Again - I just want to HUG him!

 
Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The Exam

I just want to hug him!!!

 
Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: The Face

Again - I love this story and everytime I read it my heart just breaks for Edward - and I LOVE to see the connection that he and Bella have right from the start even when he is in so much pain and so starved of everything!

 

Amazing writing as always!

 
Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: The Basement

This chapter makes me cry!  My heart just breaks for him....

 

I have read this story up to the newest chapter that you posted and I just had to go back and re-read this.  It's that good! 

The plot and story line are so original and emotional that I have completely fallen in love.  It's a great story line and your writing is fantastic!  I have read some stories where I liked the plot but the writing wasn't great - Your writing is WONDERFUL.  Your words pull me in and paint an amazing picture of what you are trying to convey and it's just got me all sorts of amazed and craving more!

 

I don't remember if I reviewed each chapter the first time I read this but just wanted to point out again how amazing this story is! 

Keep up the great work!

Jess

 
Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: The Hunt 2

I LOVE this story!!  It has to be one of the most original stories I've ever read.  I LOVE these characters and I just want to wrap Edward up and never let anyone hurt him again. 

I am dying for the next chapter!!  I can't wait to see what the Cullen's response is to Bella hunting with Edward for the first time will be.  And their dialog during the hunt was awesome! 

I loved the line "Just don't eat me,okay."

 

This story is amazing and I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter!!

 
Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: The River

I love watching him learn about vampires from Bella! 

 
Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: The Reunion

I love the first kiss!

 
Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: The Visit

Jane should just die!!!  Who gets joy in tortoring others???? 

 

Everytime she comes into the picture she just has to mess with someone..... 

But it was sweet that Edward was waiting on the steps for Bella.

 
Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: The Jump

This is such a great story!

 
Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: The Party

I would assume that if he had human captors that it would be that much harder for them to take on the Cullens or even a strong Edward- right? 

 

Great read as always!

 
Reviewer: Cyper22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: The Dance

Loved it - as always!

 

Thanks for this story!

 




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