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Penname: mishella [Contact]
Real name: mish
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Blood Lines by windchime Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2469]
Summary:

 

Edward reveals a secret from his human time which leaves Bella shocked and wondering just how well she knows the man she is about to marry.

This is very much an Edward and Bella love story.

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Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella
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Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 256624
[Report This] Published: February 07, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2009


Reviewer: mishella Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: I Really Didn't See That Coming

Breaking Dawn was my favourite of the all, and you made it even better. The storyline you created was wonderful, the love and affection, person growth and most of all the characters had FUN with eachother. There was friendly banter, (Emmet with Mary Poppins, Bella and Edward not taking themselves as seriously as in the original). throughout reading Bloodlines I smiled and even laughed. I am happy that you did not drag on her 'change', and very happy with Bella's pregnancy in Bloodlines in comparison to the original. Very well done, I really loved it. Thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you very much :)  I'm glad you enjoyed the story and that it made you laugh and smile, that's great - thanks for letting me know :)




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