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Penname: ocsickgirl [ Contact]
Real name: Dominique Alvarado-Bennett
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Member Since: February 22, 2011
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[Report This] Published: July 20, 2009 Updated: October 16, 2010
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: July 13, 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Snow
Against better judgment I am reading this story sin pace it seems to be abandoned but the plot intrigued me. Hopefully one day it will finished.
Summary: Sequel to "Goodbye Love". Edward moves in with Bella after discovering that she is pregnant. For the sake of their child, they try to form some kind of friendship but can't help but wonder if it is even worth it.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Word count: 4500
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2010 Updated: April 02, 2010
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: April 18, 2012
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
yeah he really fucked up. Don't think I would want him back either. Especially if even before Esme's death he was emotionally stunted......how could he have never said I love you and how could she have still married him??
I really hope you find your muse again for this story. :)
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: April 18, 2012
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
LOL, I am all for Edward taking care of her needs! Pregnant women are horny, its a fact.....
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: April 18, 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I am so glad you continued it, even if only for a bit and maybe you will get some inspiration to continue it more.
I like that Edward is willing to take his punishment but I want them to talk it out too.
Summary: All Human. Bella gets knocked up during her senior year of high school, but Edward doesn't believe her.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 96724
[Report This] Published: December 13, 2010 Updated: September 09, 2012
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 18, 2012
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Edward Edward Edward......what a freaking dumbass.
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 18, 2012
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Um yeah I don't think I have ever loved Alice in a fic more than I do right now!! Please tell me that Skankya doesn't stick around for long.
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 18, 2012
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Even if Edward comes around, I want Bella to make him suffer. He shouldn't get to be forgiven if he can't even answer whether or not he loves Skankya. Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review so far. Look forward to hearing your thoughts on the coming chapters :)
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 18, 2012
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Seems like too little too late, but I guess I will have to wait and see how he redeems himself.
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 18, 2012
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Edward is a dumbass.
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 18, 2012
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
How sad that they don't have names because Edward has no clue what Bella chose.
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 18, 2012
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I think I would feel the same way as Bella. Those were some crazy dreams, I would be shaken up too.
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 18, 2012
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Stupid stupid stupid Edward.......but I love Bella More and more with each chapter. And I am sort of thinking that Skanya's baby is Jame's.....but who knows....
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 18, 2012
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Psychoooo!! Great chapter! Lol. That scene was like deja vu...so I think maybe I read some of your original version.....love this for sure though!
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 19, 2012
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
HW has screwed up so bad, I would think that friendship is all that is on the table.
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 19, 2012
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
HW has screwed up so bad, I would think that friendship is all that is on the table.
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 20, 2012
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Great chapter. Feel bad for BBella learning about her mom like that though. And how sweet is Edward singing Pooh corner.....awwwww
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 20, 2012
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I think I accidentally deleted my review....but I thought this chapter was hilarious. I loved him hanging out with his brothers.....acting like a normal teenage guy.
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 19, 2012
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Wow, a house huh, that is pretty amazinfpg for a Xmas gift. :)
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 19, 2012
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Well it's about time they both grew up some and acted more maturely. Proud of them both. :)
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 19, 2012
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Loved tHis chapter! And go Bella with that kiss! :)
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 20, 2012
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Careful Edward that sounds an awful lot like a proposal......
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 20, 2012
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
That was a sweet Xmas. And Edward seems to really be stepping up, good for him!
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 20, 2012
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Love that Alice approached Edward and not the other way around.
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 20, 2012
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Now I'm pissed at her. She is reverting back to her ways of just assuming things and not talking to apEdward. She says she doesn't have anyone to talk to?? How about going to the source itself? Now she's the dumbass.
Reviewer: ocsickgirl Signed
Date: June 20, 2012
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Well at least someone set her straight. Glad she everyone realized she was in the wrong this time. Good for Edward. :)
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