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Wife, Mother, Closet Writier, Twilight Addict. Writing has been something I have always enjoyed, but never shared before finding Twilighted. Perhaps I stink at it. Still, I am going to give it a shot.


I have a goal of being published within five years.  Wish me luck!


Check out my teasers and updates on all my W.I.P.s on my blog:


www.midnightariel.blogspot.com


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Reviews by Midnight Ariel
 
Ricochet by Jenndur Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 85]
Summary:

"It's like I'm the bullet in a gun.  One pull of the trigger and it could mean the end of someone's life..." Can Edward help save Isabella from her self-destructive behaviors or will he just push her closer to the edge?

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This story contains adult subject matter, strong language, controversial topics, drug and underage alcohol use, mentions of rape, consensual sexual content, and self-injury.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 93789
[Report This] Published: January 15, 2011 Updated: January 09, 2012


Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Slipping

She needs help, badly.

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Vindictive

A mystery....I like it.

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Risky Business

It was an accident. Poor Isabella.

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Unwelcome Savior

Oooo Jake's a bad boy!

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: One Of Those Days

Hmmm...Edward doesn't like the new girl.

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Glimpse Into Hell

Wow, Charlie has been very patient...so far.

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

That's a killer opening. Nice.

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue: Sober

A nice epi. I iwsh Phil had been convicted for what he did to Isabella, but I know so pften that doesn't happen as it should. Thank you for sharing your story. Congrats on finishing.

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Wreckage

Ugh. Ugh. Ugh. You are so good a writng angst it hurts me. You big meanie, you.

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 27: How To Save A Life

WAAAAAAA! So sad!!!

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Nothing and Everything

Grrrrrrr. When is somebody going to REALLY help her???

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Riptide

Maybe now someone will help the poor girl.

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Fallacy

Wake up Bella!

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Coming Clean

Well, Charlie is in denail, but atlest Edward is trying to help. He still should have talked to his Dad.

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Denial ain't just a river in Egypt

This is sooo frustrating. You and your angsty story!!! :)

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Searching

This has gone waaay too far.

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Hurt

Maybe she can get help now.

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Needs

Her friends need to involve their parents. I would be so mad at one of my kids for covering for oneof their friends like that and not telling me.

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Nightmare

How terrible. She really needs help.

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Awkward Dinner

Awkward....

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: January 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Bitter Lemonade

Nice chapter. But I hope she's really not going to go nuts over the used of "Bella" and ruin it.

 
Summary:

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When Bella opens her dance studio right next to Edward's bar, will Edward hate her...or will he fall for the girl next door? BxE, AH, OOC, rated M for naughty language and behavior.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 161165
[Report This] Published: January 16, 2011 Updated: May 08, 2012


Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: February 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Really enjoying the story.  I don't usually like the "AU-Human" ones so that says a lot. :)

 
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: February 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great first date!  Looking forward to reading what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  Next chap up soon! :)

 
Summary:

Finally graduating with her Ph.D., Bella needed to shed her dull sneaker and flats image.  She wanted heels. Roberto Cavalli heels. Stillettos.  Would they be enough for even her friend Edward to notice?  One-shot written for the PostSecret Prompt Contest. AH

 

The Cavalli Connection

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6443
[Report This] Published: January 22, 2011 Updated: February 25, 2011


Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: February 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Cavalli Connection

Good story line.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  It was an entry for a contest where we were to pick one sentence from a group and build a story around it.  Fun!

 
Summary:

This is a series of limericks based on Twilight.  Sheer fun and silliness.


Categories: Twilight, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Marcus, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 542
[Report This] Published: January 22, 2011 Updated: February 04, 2011


Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: February 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Cullens and Twilight in Rhyme

These were great.  I liked Charlies best...sporks!  LOL



Author's Response:

Thanks  :)  I just couldn't help myself.  They kept popping in my head...

 




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