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Penname: Midnight Ariel [ Contact]
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Wife, Mother, Closet Writier, Twilight Addict. Writing has been something I have always enjoyed, but never shared before finding Twilighted. Perhaps I stink at it. Still, I am going to give it a shot.
I have a goal of being published within five years. Wish me luck!
Check out my teasers and updates on all my W.I.P.s on my blog:
www.midnightariel.blogspot.com
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Summary: 
Edward has been filling his thirst for blood with an insatiable appetite for flesh for the last 80 years. A new girl arrives at Forks High School that baffles him, and just might turn his world upside down and break him of his rapacious behavior.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jane, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 39573
[Report This] Published: February 06, 2009 Updated: March 19, 2009
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: March 10, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Revelations
Too bad you didn't write a few sentences about Bella's reaction to Edward telling her he was born in 1901. I would've liked to have read your take on that. Off to read more. :)
Summary:  
While hunting one afternoon, Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle stumble upon what appears to be a corpse. When they learn it's a severely broken vampire, they take him home to do what they can to help. But of course, fate has plans for this man. Canon Couples. AU. DARK Themes.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 158872
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: October 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 25: The Call
A good chapter. Thanks.
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: October 29, 2011
Title: Chapter 30: The Wall
Good action scene. Looking forward to the next one.
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: September 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: The Hunt
Cool stroy line.
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: September 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: The Basement
Very good build up.
Summary: 
Banner Manipulation by Averii: http://averii.deviantart.com/art/New-Moon-wallpaper-2-117137252
I never noticed before how he had progressively carried more and more weight. My humanity and his immortality; the call of my blood and his unending thirst; my insecurities and stubbornness; his desperation to keep me safe; my precipitous abandon towards all things dangerous; his sacrifice of his own feelings to protect me; the guilt of his abandonment; the consequences of my relationship with Jacob…every little thing further weighed him down. Today was just the day that he finally succumbed to the burden.
Bella finally sees Edward not as the God she has placed upon a pedestal, but as the man that he truly is. A man that can be broken by the betrayal of his one true love. It is told through the guilty eyes of the woman who tears his heart apart without a second thought, only to realize he too is breakable. She is forced to see all of her actions and insecurities and see what they have done to her love and what she has to do to bring him back to her.
E/B
Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Word count: 87208
[Report This] Published: February 27, 2009 Updated: August 23, 2009
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: February 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Titan
Very moving.
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: February 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 14: Lingering
The use of music titles is great! Make me want to do something like that for my own party.
Summary: You can't erase mistakes.
You can't wish they didn't happen--They did.
You have to accept that you made them, and deal with the consequences of making them.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Word count: 120442
[Report This] Published: July 20, 2009 Updated: September 05, 2011
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: September 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Flesh and Blood
Good chapter. Bella is growing up. Awww
Summary: Bella returns to Forks for closure on her father's death. In the process she both gives and receives more than she originally planned.
Inspired by Michael Jackon's Gone Too Soon. (lyrics: http://www.elyrics.net/read/m/michael-jackson-lyrics/gone-too-soon-lyrics.html )
Huge thanks to my betas for helping me improve my story!
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Phil, Renee
Challenges: Series: Thriller
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 3538
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2009 Updated: August 11, 2009
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: February 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: One shot
What a beautiful story.
Summary:
Banner compliments of CrimsonIceGoddess - YOU ROCK my dear!
   
It is amazing how quickly life can resume normalcy after a traumatic event. It's not that the inhabitants of the scenario don't know they are rebounding, but the force of the universe pulls them back into its patterns without their consent. Everything will not be the same, but the normal routine is enhanced, flavored by the bittersweet taste of change or loss in any form.
Bella told me she had once envisioned our lives as the complex pattern of a rug, the colors and textures intermingling, each individual but, when placed together, producing a beautiful creation. If challenged, I would have most likely used a musical analogy. I would have compared our lives to experiencing a musical performance by one of the masters.
Beethoven...Bach...or if you wanted a little strife, Wagner. Most at one time or another had performed their masterpieces within European chapels. I could envision the rise and fall of the notes, as they would weave their spell. The light in the building as it filtered through stained glass, creating a dizzying array of colors. The smell from beeswax candles permeating the room. Modern musical halls lacked this perfect simplicity. Yes...this would have been my analogy.
Little was I to know that Fate had much in store for me. Before she was through with me, I would barely resemble the boy I'd been...
What happens to the Cullens after the Volturi left. Edward and Bella begin life together and face both heartbreak after their lives are irrevocably changed by losses of family and friends, and immeasurable joy as the events of their lives unfold.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 80 Completed: Yes
Word count: 388303
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2009 Updated: September 01, 2011
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: February 19, 2011
Title: Chapter 42: Moral
Wow very intence. Great idea with the donated blood.
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: February 20, 2011
Title: Chapter 63: Volaterrae
SO very moving!
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: February 20, 2011
Title: Chapter 66: Beyond
Seth imprinting...nice!
Summary: Bella lives to serve her Master. It can be tedious at times, titillating at others, but always, her world revolves around his. Come take a peek at the trials and triumphs in the life of a 24/7 consensual slave and find what happens when outside forces threaten to expose her lifestyle.
Please note that this story contains graphic language, graphic sexual situations and is only intended for a mature audience. The BDSM relationship described herein is entirely consensual, but may be offensive to some readers. Read with caution. OOC, AU/AH
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: All of Me: The Series
Chapters: 25 Completed: No
Word count: 109463
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2009 Updated: June 29, 2010
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: May 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Interesting...reading on with an open mind.
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: May 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Wow, that is one tough Master.
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: May 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
The cameras make this interesting.
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: May 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Those are four scary words!
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: May 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Warm and fuzzy...with an edge. I like it.
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: May 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
A physcological snack down for Lauren. Bwa ha ha.
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: May 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
A fine line to walk when one lives an alternative liefstyle.
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: May 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Wow
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: May 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Jasper may have aheart attack before his visit is done.
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: May 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Intense
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: May 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Ciffy! Enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: May 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I don't think I'd ever get used to sitting that way.
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel Signed
Date: May 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Oooo I hope EAdward gets his hands on that creep!
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